she looks like someone with the weird nose-mouth thingy now... a lisp or something,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That would be a harelip or more politically correct, a cleft lip. A lisp is when someone has a speech impediment that prevents them from correctly pronouncing the sound of the letter 's'. It comes out as more of en sth instead of sss.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

C/C

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The ocean is tooooo flat. I have never seen an ocean like that. Not even on the calmest days. The horizon should still show some signs of waves.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The leaves look ....off, and dont really match (the ones in closest foreground.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The map us also positioned oddly... i dont see how it could stand like that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The flail seems to be missing half isntead of being buried in sand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her hair is WAY too thick. it reminds of snakes really...and it looks unappealing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The face...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her eyes are crooked and face the exact same direction.Make her left eye (our right) go down diagonally just a LITTLE more like 2 pixels maybe. they may also be too far apart, i cant really tell at the time.

 

 

 

Her mouth isnt facing the same direction as her chins, meaning its crooked.

 

 

 

Her top lips is also too large proportioned to her bottom imo.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry if i sounded harsh, that wasnt my intention.

yea thx, i almost forgot how useful TIF was

Fixed-

 

 

 

ive got 2 things 2 say, a) darrel ur not fun :lol:

 

 

 

B) it is runescape related so say what u want, theres v skirt and flail and a whip i think

well you have to be mature enough to judge it as art, not quiver at the sight of a female character. Its not nudity, grow some balls guys (sorry for the expression.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think its great still, you've captured the beauty and your dedication to this shines. there have been some useful comments here though dont get me wrong..

well you have to be mature enough to judge it as art, not quiver at the sight of a female character. Its not nudity, grow some balls guys (sorry for the expression.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think its great still, you've captured the beauty and your dedication to this shines. there have been some useful comments here though dont get me wrong..

 

 

 

thats what i was sayin in some way, so i argee with u.

well now nudity isn't allowed on these forums cool4life, discussing the anatomy of the character, shading, offering any suggestions is ok.. thats ott.

well you have to be mature enough to judge it as art, not quiver at the sight of a female character. Its not nudity, grow some balls guys (sorry for the expression.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think its great still, you've captured the beauty and your dedication to this shines. there have been some useful comments here though dont get me wrong..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sorry, I just ment it as joke. Did not mean that everyone on these fourms was not mature enough to see it. Will try and grow some balls just for you :oops:

haha 8-)

Remove that pic dude! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No no, really. Or prepare for mod attack!

Remove that pic dude! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No no, really. Or prepare for mod attack!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

wut he said lol. (remmembers tif battle cards)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

+1 to mod power abuse

 

 

 

+1 to tip.it banned list

 

 

 

-1 inapropriate post

here did some fast changes on some things..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This rose is playin innocent..

 

 

 

 

 

 

Use if u like ;)

Altho i dont like the bigger boobs, i DO like the gold on her arm and her head, i should of sat down and thought more for her jewelry. Yea there is still alot og flaws in this sig, but i learn alot of new techniques looking at pro's pixel arts and somewhat applying them to my own style. Thank to you all, and am sorry but, dammit eck why cant you stop being an 455?

here did some fast changes on some things..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This rose is playin innocent..

 

 

 

 

 

 

Use if u like ;)

 

 

 

Though the jewelry looks great, when I first saw it I thought it was a parody to a Klingon :lol: .