Hello, its been a while since I posted on the TIF forums, but no worries, I came with something new. MY new pixel entitles La bellesa de Karamja (The Beauty of Karamja). Been working on this for a while, ALOT of things disturbed its work flow, but i finally got it done. Make sure to RATE, praise or hate, and MUST include some sort of C/c. Thanks..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Are you sure half naked girls are allowed in this board? :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And besides, why would she have her skirt pulled down in the middle of no where wearing a thong? o.O

 

 

 

It's pretty good otherwise. (except her lips looks a little weird)

Well, she's not completley naked, so I guess it would be aloud. Nothing too exposing. :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, very nice work. How long did this take you?

actually its a really stupid concept

 

 

 

but the actual art work is very good, her face looks a little weird though....also, is she supposed to have dreadlocks?

Good god you guys, have some imagination....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like it. The sky looks a little blocky though, I think you should maybe try adding another shade in there or dither it some more.

you need work on your color schemes and your color contrast.

One of the brown palm trunks look like a snake. :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I usually see the trunk rings on these trees going up in z zig-zag pattern instead of just in one side.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The sky line near the water is too straight... I mean compared to the clouds, you can see the bands of color lines on the sky. Its too flat.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The coins in the treasure chest look much like the sand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There should probably some waves/foam/wet looking sand on the shore too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There, I C/C'ed!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not that I can do anything as good as your works, but I hoped I helped...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Somewhat... :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Hmm... now I forgot what I was originally gonna say... :wall:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh yeah!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its awesome! (Yay for 1-liner comments!) :

i like it, my style of drawing pixels is sooooooooooo different :wink:

heh i was afriad people might complain....the concept was that she finished a tresure trail and was going out for a swim....not a g string...swiming suit

Very nice dude, maybe add some froth on the sea shore?

Few crits then ill start drooling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The edge of the see looks all flat... not sure if you would want to change it... its more a matter of prefernce

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lips need quite a bit of work... they are too fat

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hair needs to be more brown like it is right by the face and less greenish as it is when it is falling down her back

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anatomy is great imo... Nice skin tone and colors

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

While your leaves are passable they could be better, they all look a bit flat

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rocks in bg are nice, but nothing amazing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Clounds in sky are all rather high... I would drop some down to the top of the moutain and have them slightly in front..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other then that its really nice! When i first saw it I was like... What is she doing though? Stripping? going for a swim? showing off for some tourists?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe your next picture could convey what the picture is about a tad better :wink:

I like it

 

 

 

Very nice detail and there looks like theres quite a bit of time put in there.

uhh... nice... water

awesome, any crits have already bin said but I honestly like it as it is. O:)

Her.... eyes are great!

well lets be honest..you have to really, really, really sad to want to look at pixel girls naked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic i like it just the face looks quite wierd :wink:

well lets be honest..you have to really, really, really sad to want to look at pixel girls naked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic i like it just the face looks quite wierd :wink:

 

 

 

Then there are allot of people that are really sad, and not just here, like, all over the globe.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But its great, and yes, the lips are bugging me too

well lets be honest..you have to really, really, really sad to want to look at pixel girls naked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic i like it just the face looks quite wierd :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well, no one Hunts down naked pixel woman... but if you see one every now and then its quite pleasant :-w

 

well lets be honest..you have to really, really, really sad to want to look at pixel girls naked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic i like it just the face looks quite wierd :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well, no one Hunts down naked pixel woman... but if you see one every now and then its quite pleasant :-w

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

#-o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

already said what i thought, but ill repeat. lips need to blend more/ get thinner + aa'd and ahir just needs to be redone.

hmm i made some slight alterations to the face for ya, the nose was weird as well so i changed that but it took a good 5 mins its actually really hard to get it right lol, here ya go

 

 

 

well lets be honest..you have to really, really, really sad to want to look at pixel girls naked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back on topic i like it just the face looks quite wierd :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

People draw landscapes etc because they think they look beautiful, and what isn't more beautiful than a naked woman?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tom I think you've improved the nose somewhat, but to be honest the lips look terrible.

^^ exactly, the mouth looks yuck as. The scene of Karamaja certainly is beautiful. 8-)

Her lips should look like:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and I think you over dithered the face, sometimes less is more when dithering in small areas.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that it's amazing, flawless and great to look at, very high standard of linework + shading great job.

she looks like someone with the weird nose-mouth thingy now... a lisp or something, dno what to call it >.< v1 was best facially. the pixelling is well done, i just dont think the style youve done the sea in fits with the rest. like the leaves on the (palm?) tree to her left, and the gold. sands very nice, nice skin tones, and nice flower yah? the pink one :P apart from the sea and the boulders supporting the mountain top its all good yah? oh and the sea doesnt just go flat. its kinda oval if you go to the beach and look out ( the worlds not flat yah?) and the skys shading is pathetic compared to the rest of it imo =x

great work : and nice to see you back :wink: