meh, been working on this for about 2 weeks on and off... taking my time with this one.. i think the color count is like 15, i will check in a minuite.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well, reason i am posting this is because i really need some help on the hair. ive been trying all day (first say of no-lifing during this whole break), and ive got nothing. was hoping for some tips, and well... cc basicly.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

update: lips

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

updated: hair & fixed the lips

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yes, 1 refrence, but its kinda revealing. not to bad, but ive seen stuff less expiicit get locked on this forum, and i dont want to risk a ban, so i shall refrain from posting.

I hate doing hair, and it always messes up when i do it, so i wont add advice for that, the linework for the lips is off but other then that it looks good. Also with the sketch for her hair on the right, her eye would be showing a bit there IMO.

thanks, i noticed the lips, and am fixing it atm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh yeh, 16 colors.

yeah you should really update the eye under the hair it looks like just a blank space atm i dunno why but she seems really strange, no the picture just her she looks like a real chav lol, like if you let her into your house she'd rob your wallet

yeh, well the hair si going to be darker, so it will blend better, but it it still looks bad, ill fix it. any tips on hair?

Good luck for the hair, the colors on the face are awesome, but the anatomy is way off.

how so? if you could, edits are appreciated...

:evil: bump! i need crits and advice!

1- that post was uber worthless.. you have no idea what your talking about nor the amount of time that goes into something like this.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2- i never asked for ratings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3- just because i stated my oppinion on how you made your art, doesnt mean you get to spam my topic. i at least told you how to improve.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

spam like that again and im going to get pissed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Can you at least give a reason why you rated it at that? =\

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But right now, the shading on the face is good. Hope ya get that hair right :P

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Can you at least give a reason why you rated it at that? =\

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rednik started a thread for a stat-sig, and eckered gave it a 2/10 with some cc, obviously rednik wasnt happy and decided to say this was crap.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ontopic; the anatomy is pretty incorrect. for example, eye is too large, neck is too long, should be able to see the second eye etc. i do like the shading for the skin though!

Some spam removed that was clearly posted just to flame personally the author. That stuff won't be tolerated here, don't attack people or their artwork just due to a comment they made.

thanks for clearing that up xman, any comnets on the art itself?

I would change the positioning of the lips because at the moment it looks a little weird. Something more horisontal and less diagonal and a smile is always nice :D Also you might want to make the eye make up a lighter colour. Just my opinions :

hmm yeah the lips do look kinda strange they look too fat as well

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fin, cept the earing?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tried to take your coments into account. i liked the eyeshadow effect, so i left that there, but i tried to fix the lips... hair is meh, i tried, but it was right before the ball dropped last night, so i kinda half-assed it.

Do you mind if i try to fix up what i think the lips should look like :?:

no! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i encruage all edits!

I did my best to try and get the lips right. I thought a smile :D couldn't hurt. So here it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: Yay, 400 posts, has a party by himself :

I did my best to try and get the lips right. I thought a smile :D couldn't hurt. So here it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit: Yay, 400 posts, has a party by himself :

 

 

 

lawl she has a moustache and the lips are like attached to her nose

That was totally the look I was going for. You mean to tell me women don't usually have moustaches and lips attatched to their noses :o So much more in life to learn :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

... :lol: , Anyways, hope I could help

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What i noticed... take it or leave it...

basically what nazgul said about the eyes and nose to close, and the lips are still a bit strange

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What i noticed... take it or leave it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

=O thank you! thats what i needed! ill try and fix some of it.

also move the lips down, they look too high atm