eckered Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 meh, been working on this for about 2 weeks on and off... taking my time with this one.. i think the color count is like 15, i will check in a minuite. well, reason i am posting this is because i really need some help on the hair. ive been trying all day (first say of no-lifing during this whole break), and ive got nothing. was hoping for some tips, and well... cc basicly. update: lips updated: hair & fixed the lips yes, 1 refrence, but its kinda revealing. not to bad, but ive seen stuff less expiicit get locked on this forum, and i dont want to risk a ban, so i shall refrain from posting. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wisp Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 I hate doing hair, and it always messes up when i do it, so i wont add advice for that, the linework for the lips is off but other then that it looks good. Also with the sketch for her hair on the right, her eye would be showing a bit there IMO. Hegemony-Spain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted December 31, 2006 Author Share Posted December 31, 2006 thanks, i noticed the lips, and am fixing it atm. oh yeh, 16 colors. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 yeah you should really update the eye under the hair it looks like just a blank space atm i dunno why but she seems really strange, no the picture just her she looks like a real chav lol, like if you let her into your house she'd rob your wallet Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted December 31, 2006 Author Share Posted December 31, 2006 yeh, well the hair si going to be darker, so it will blend better, but it it still looks bad, ill fix it. any tips on hair? wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 Good luck for the hair, the colors on the face are awesome, but the anatomy is way off. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted December 31, 2006 Author Share Posted December 31, 2006 how so? if you could, edits are appreciated... wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 :evil: bump! i need crits and advice! wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 1- that post was uber worthless.. you have no idea what your talking about nor the amount of time that goes into something like this. 2- i never asked for ratings. 3- just because i stated my oppinion on how you made your art, doesnt mean you get to spam my topic. i at least told you how to improve. spam like that again and im going to get pissed. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flamer Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Can you at least give a reason why you rated it at that? =\ But right now, the shading on the face is good. Hope ya get that hair right :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_shadow Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 [removed] Can you at least give a reason why you rated it at that? =\ Rednik started a thread for a stat-sig, and eckered gave it a 2/10 with some cc, obviously rednik wasnt happy and decided to say this was crap. ontopic; the anatomy is pretty incorrect. for example, eye is too large, neck is too long, should be able to see the second eye etc. i do like the shading for the skin though! Featuring in my sig: TURT, ma pet turdle! Thanks to- Runemetsa and Aijiru for two of the great sigs!Avatar made by me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Some spam removed that was clearly posted just to flame personally the author. That stuff won't be tolerated here, don't attack people or their artwork just due to a comment they made. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 thanks for clearing that up xman, any comnets on the art itself? wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 I would change the positioning of the lips because at the moment it looks a little weird. Something more horisontal and less diagonal and a smile is always nice :D Also you might want to make the eye make up a lighter colour. Just my opinions : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 hmm yeah the lips do look kinda strange they look too fat as well Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 fin, cept the earing? tried to take your coments into account. i liked the eyeshadow effect, so i left that there, but i tried to fix the lips... hair is meh, i tried, but it was right before the ball dropped last night, so i kinda half-assed it. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Do you mind if i try to fix up what i think the lips should look like :?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 no! :D i encruage all edits! wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 I did my best to try and get the lips right. I thought a smile :D couldn't hurt. So here it is Edit: Yay, 400 posts, has a party by himself : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 I did my best to try and get the lips right. I thought a smile :D couldn't hurt. So here it is Edit: Yay, 400 posts, has a party by himself : lawl she has a moustache and the lips are like attached to her nose Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 That was totally the look I was going for. You mean to tell me women don't usually have moustaches and lips attatched to their noses :o So much more in life to learn :cry: ... :lol: , Anyways, hope I could help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 What i noticed... take it or leave it... New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 basically what nazgul said about the eyes and nose to close, and the lips are still a bit strange Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 What i noticed... take it or leave it... =O thank you! thats what i needed! ill try and fix some of it. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 also move the lips down, they look too high atm 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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