Well, wanted to do some abstract again.. So.. I did :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The thing I really need to work on is my typo >.< I know it sucks badly, so every helpful comment on that is very welcome..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Version 2:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Version 3:

 

 

 

*squints*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eep, something in the color or the pixeley look made me squint. Probably my messed up PC :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its ok, lacks substance, and another color to give it balance and depth. Plus im not diggin' the sidebars, looks like a widescreen movie on its side :P But thats just my idiosyncratic opinion.

looks really cool, like a blaze of sparks! 9/10 ,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

at another glance it kind looks like its looking up underwater

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

weird, but cool,i like it! :wink:

You took the words right out of my mouth RF.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: came home. It's a whole new image with my display. Not too dark anymore.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PS Is this fully PSP or some render?

WOW!

 

 

 

I've heard that you use PSP, do you have any tutorirals? Im new to it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jim.

I like the sidebars, actually...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think all the diagonals almost distort the image... might be a bit overkill on those.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I agree with the color comment.

Ah, goody, comments :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ill try to use some mroe colour in it, Ill figure out something nice.. I was doing a wallpaper first, but I was too lazy to do a wallpaper abstract/brushed thing, so I made it into a sig. :lol: Thank god for lazyness :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Col, its a c4d render, with quite a bit of psp work..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

JIMMIE, sorry to say, but I dont really know any tutorials for psp..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keiph, hmm, you might be right on that, Ill work something out with the opacity of the lines..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for teh comments everyone, expect a newer version soon (sometime this month ;) )

way! to saturated, and take off the red tint, lower the saturation or make it blue.

Yea, as said before, way too saturated. But i like it :) And you really gotta fix that font. Some sort of contrast typography would be nice, with two completely different font faces, but right now they look too similar and plain. And i also dont like the full red hue on the fonts.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Or you can just do concord typo, as in one font face. Just make sure you choose a better font than that current one ;) hehe.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sweet logo though, and i like the tech-ish concept to it.

im diggin the diagonal pattern that you filled overtop and then applied a transparency to. it looks pretty cool, kinda like tv lines or one of those transmissions from a spy movie where the boss is talkin to him through his watch. AND THATS GOOD. probably didnt make any sense to you, but its cool. i like it alot. try maybe adding screws or something to the sidebars to make it look as if its two metal bars holding an interface or a pane of glass. that would be pretty cool.

Thanks guys :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I worked on it a bit, tried the font contrast venomai suggested..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Meh, Next abstract thing Ill do, is surely going to be wallpaper or something similar sized.. Should work on that anyways.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So, any new comments? :)

MUCH better dude. I think you could even carry the white more to the left and it would look awesome. Gj :wink:

Sorry man, but I liked the first one way better. There are just two things, IMO, that should be changed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One of them being the colour. With all due respect to red, great colour; I just don't think it brings out the best in this piece.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The other thing is the patterns, I would erase a bit of it at some parts in the image. Not too much, though... as it adds a nice effect!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that, great job. I really like the text and those side-bar-thingies. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

// Azvi.

Thanks guys :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Royal, hmm Might try that, thanks for the suggestion :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Azvareth, well I wanted to do a red one, so I did :lol: , Ill see if some sort of blue or green perhaps will fit it better..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh, and in which areas should I erase it a bit?

 

 

 

Thanks for the comments :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Will probably do one more edit and use it :)

What is that font you use? :?

Well, I assume you mean in the words Dreams Inside?

 

 

 

The first one is Bank Gothic Medium BT, which I heard is taken offline recently, and is now only being sold, lol.

 

 

 

The other one is French Scirpt MT..

Updated again, see first post..

Nobody? :(

v3, ownage :)