Hey guys. Been working on this for a while now. It is a children's version of the famous Chinese novels "Journey to the West". Check it out its hot stuff. But while your here...take a look at my children's renditions of the novel. Make sure to support and post a comment.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Enjoy! :sly:

LOL! AWESOME! 10/10 for monkey!

It looks great :) I love the cute pictures. My only real criticism is the cover, I don't really like the simple gradient that much :-k

lookign great i love th cute little monkey

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Isnt journey to the west what Drgona Ball Z is loosely based on?

There's a few spelling mistakes as well, you said "Form" instead of "from" in the picture with the monkey shooting sunlight. "ALL MAGIC POWER FORM THE SUN, MOON AND STARS"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also you have said "Where" instead of "were" for "ALL HIS MONKEY SUBJECT WHERE UNDER SLAVERY"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And there was one part where you missed out a word I think, I'll edit this in a sec to give more details. "THE KING OF CONFUSION HAS TAKEN OF THE AND

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

There's probably other mistakes as well, but yeah these are a few of them atm.

Ha! thnx for noticing, ill fix them before i send it to print.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh and yea...Son GOku is the jap translation of the name Sun Wukong. And the entire dragon ball and the beginning of DBZ is almost identical to the story...

I'd choose a different font :P Times new roman or whatever it is doesn't really fit the story or "childrens book idea "

9/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i personaly dont like the font thats all really

chaos your back!!!!! u have been awey for a while... :wall:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok as far as the story i love the pixtures and all of it but the only thing i dont like is the fact u used the runescape news background as the background of this... :-#

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but hey, great to see your back : \

Was this written by you or someone in the ming dynasty?

Cheng'en is the original author of the 100 chapter novel...I simply revised it to be suitable for children. and thanx Rik

10/10: simply because, I love the monkey! Was it originally an adult book?

Wow nice Story 10/10

you know he didn't write it tho rite^^?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats great very well done.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I LOVE the cartoon pics.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very good a 10/10 and a cookie from me =D> :wink:

Just a pointer, I hope you made the background yourself? :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Otherwise, nice work.

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