chaostayoko Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 Hey guys. Been working on this for a while now. It is a children's version of the famous Chinese novels "Journey to the West". Check it out its hot stuff. But while your here...take a look at my children's renditions of the novel. Make sure to support and post a comment. And remember, you may not reproduce, upload, or claim as your own... All rights reserved. Enjoy! :sly: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 LOL! AWESOME! 10/10 for monkey! ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 It looks great :) I love the cute pictures. My only real criticism is the cover, I don't really like the simple gradient that much :-k - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmo_killer6 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 lookign great i love th cute little monkey Isnt journey to the west what Drgona Ball Z is loosely based on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exbaj Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 There's a few spelling mistakes as well, you said "Form" instead of "from" in the picture with the monkey shooting sunlight. "ALL MAGIC POWER FORM THE SUN, MOON AND STARS" Also you have said "Where" instead of "were" for "ALL HIS MONKEY SUBJECT WHERE UNDER SLAVERY" And there was one part where you missed out a word I think, I'll edit this in a sec to give more details. "THE KING OF CONFUSION HAS TAKEN OF THE AND There's probably other mistakes as well, but yeah these are a few of them atm. 99 / 99 Mining 89 / 99 Smithing 87 / 90 Strength SKILL TOTAL: 1836 / 2000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaostayoko Posted February 12, 2007 Author Share Posted February 12, 2007 Ha! thnx for noticing, ill fix them before i send it to print. oh and yea...Son GOku is the jap translation of the name Sun Wukong. And the entire dragon ball and the beginning of DBZ is almost identical to the story... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junction Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 I'd choose a different font :P Times new roman or whatever it is doesn't really fit the story or "childrens book idea " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
limpbizkit Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 9/10 i personaly dont like the font thats all really Tif 360 MGC Leaderboard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rik Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 chaos your back!!!!! u have been awey for a while... :wall: ok as far as the story i love the pixtures and all of it but the only thing i dont like is the fact u used the runescape news background as the background of this... :-# but hey, great to see your back : \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tennvols21 Posted February 12, 2007 Share Posted February 12, 2007 Was this written by you or someone in the ming dynasty? -Click My Signature To Check Out COD:MW2- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaostayoko Posted February 13, 2007 Author Share Posted February 13, 2007 Cheng'en is the original author of the 100 chapter novel...I simply revised it to be suitable for children. and thanx Rik Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andufusthebronze Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 10/10: simply because, I love the monkey! Was it originally an adult book? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PKERZ3 Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 Wow nice Story 10/10 Runescape Username: P K E R Z3 | Type Of Pure: Tank Ranger | Combat Level: 36P K E R Z3 Short Long GoalP K E R Z3 Topics-Currently None-[/size:2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodredsword Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 you know he didn't write it tho rite^^? thats great very well done. I LOVE the cartoon pics. very good a 10/10 and a cookie from me =D> :wink: Listen to the mighty words of Bloodredsword. Tip it MGC Xbox live leader board! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varda Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 Just a pointer, I hope you made the background yourself? :P Otherwise, nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted February 13, 2007 Share Posted February 13, 2007 The background parchments are ripped from Jagex's RS site. Ripping from anyone, including backgrounds from websites like Jagex's, will not be allowed. This webpage and its contents are copyright ÃÆââ¬Å¡Ãâé 1999 - 2007 Jagex Ltd. Use of this website is subject to our Terms+Conditions and Privacy policy I'm not sure if you knew that it belongs to Jagex only, but you are free to repost your artwork that doesn't include ripped background or any ripped art in general. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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