it's ok, you need a light source, and try to carry the shading through everything. your linework is very odd, it seems to be many shades of gray... try to add more to the rest of the sig, rather than just a main feature, anybody can see you didnt take as much care in the mountains as you did in the archer. Try not to use font to write on his stomach, instead try drawing the text. Also it looks like his cape needs an iron :lol: although i like the dragonhide texture. Overall, a 6/10