ALright, clear on the banana part. But still, there's some weird tuff in your writing. I was young, yea I was looking at God himself Riding high in a helicopter imagine how it felt I mean, that's weird. You go from looking at God himself to 'riding' in a helicopter. Sure, the link is that you were high, and God is suposed to be high, but it doesn't fit. Maybe it's the 'riding' as you don't 'ride' a helicopter 8 Years old they tell me that I might die Imagine how my pops felt when he began to cry Weird again. Imagine how your pops felt when he began to cry? Probably not too good. It doesn't work. To him it doesn't matter if he cries, it doesn't make it more dramatic for him. It would be more logical if it would be "Imagine how I felt when I saw my pops cry" or something, but still it doesn't hold together well. And when you put it together with the previous lines it's even weirder. DId they tell you you was going to die when you were in a helicopter? And the first verse has got some weird stuff as well. Built street ways for the future to roll on Pavin oppurtunities for the poor, praise for the rich The pavin oppurtunities is a clever found with the street building, but what has got the praise for the rich has got to do with that? It's safe to say I'm the king place the crown on my head Cause I'll be damn sure I make it big before I'm dead If it's safe to put a crown on your head, so then you made it big already, nothing to be damn sure of.