elucin8er

(((Part 1 ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Introduce Dunhan, take a while, reflect on his past, explain his position as a mage, the fact that heÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s a gnome, etc etc.))) Part 2 ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Dunhan was now in need of some serious sleep. The walk to the castle had drained him, especially considering he was already drowsy from the unappreciated wake up call. Where was he going anyway? Why had the head guard called for him, of all people? Had he been caught once again fooling around with water? He recalled a few years ago being caught by a guard halfway through his noble attempt to wet the houses of a few humans. His punishment was far from nice, a hefty damage fine on the house plus a disturbing the peace fine. Serves them right, he always used to say. TheyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll think twice before laughing at a four foot Gnome again. Recently he has secretly been experimenting different ways to harness the waters power, with no real dazzling luck. Is this what he had been caught for? Dunhan shook the thought from his mind. CanÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t be, these matters donÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t require a visit to the head guard. ItÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s all done through mindless message boys, with a fine being passed on. So why had he been called exactly. Before he was able to think of other possibilities, Dunhan found himself inside the castle, the main courtyard. A few villagers were sitting around talking, some eating, others playing games with cards and small coloured balls. Nothing new really. The courtyard often attracted people from the village, admittedly it was a nice place to relax and meet others. Dunhan himself had been here many times, just to escape the noise from the merchants within his parts of the village. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅThis way, hurry up please.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I'm quite serious on writing at least one book, and have it published one day. I don't have any intentions to "become" a writer, I merely want to see a book I wrote in stock one day, that would be my dream. This book will probably take me a bit over a year to write, and I want it to be perfect, with no loose ends over the place. I have the main plot idea, and several dialogue sections scrapped away on my computer. During each month I'll just be merely putting together a skeleton of writing that needs to be fixed up every now and then to it's final version. If there are any writers here I'd very much appreciate some critisism and ideas. Enough of the talking, I'll begin with the prologue now, enjoy. (Don't forget this is a skeleton of the final version). Prologue ------------------------------- He moved stealthily, secretly, making no noise bar a few creaks in the floorboards beneath the carpet he was now making his way across. His clothes were wisely chosen, soft, tight and dark. He was a professional, he had to be. The pitch black night set the mood for what was about to take place this evening, in less than a few minutes. Because of this, he had to memorize the exact path he was now currently taking. A few steps forward, a few to the side. Precision was everything, and he had it down to a tee. Thud! Almost down to a tee. Cursing under his breath, he picked up the object from the floor that had just fallen from his back belt. He wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t too concerned, as the floor successfully muffled the noise. He was merely angry with himself, but he pressed on instead of thinking too much into the clumsy error. Suddenly, he knew he was where he was required to be, right on schedule. Excitement filled his head, and in turn he felt his heart beat a little louder, a little faster. He quickly calmed himself down and focused on what he was now about to perform. He reached around to his back, producing a small object from his belt, the same one he dropped moments ago, and brought it in front of himself. The realization of a successful plan was now finally hitting him, there was no failing from here. Sliding the stolen object under the door, a sly smirk came to his face. Tonight, there would be no possible way to discover who just got away with the biggest incident the world had ever seen. -------------- There is more to add, but it's all over the place. I can write up another section I put together, but there's a fair bit missing between the begginning and the section you are about to read in the next post. I feel I need to work for a fair while on the begginning of the story, and I'm not quite up to it yet. So, in the next post, begins section 3 :P Section 2 will come later.

You get to the point too fast :P We need time to relate to the character, to know what type of person she is. Slow it down, plan it out, and it will be much more enjoyable for us :P Naturally if this is to be a short story then you're doing fine. We only need the basic outline. Looking forward to more.

Very nice find. Now is it just me or did anyone else find Lunar Diplomacy quite funny? Mainly the part where you talked to people on the ship (navigator rofl). If anyone took any pictures or remembered quotes I'd love it. Jagex sure does have a good sense of humour.

Your attitude on the forums isn't very nice. I've been reading around and you seem to have a negative tone with everyone you come across. Stop your own whining, and let people talk. Either that, or get some rest, you sound a bit on the edge.

Ouch, chill.

Anyone read these guys? They are the best two authors in the world :oops: If you're a keen reader, I highly suggest you read anything by these two. Preferablly Seven Ancient wonders or The Da Vinci Code.

Ooo nice stuff. A bigger map would be nice though :oops:

They are also an ingredient used to make supercompost.

I remember Paul at lvl 123 in his pretty red shirt, hehe. I also remember just 4 worlds to choose from, although I am aware of the single world before that. Naturally at those times Paul and Andrew were more invloved in the game as they had few clients to attend to. Good ol' days, I miss em :(

No, lol. A lot of people high alch for levels, not for money. Would also destroy the mage place north of dueling arena. Perhaps an alch x that worked much like cooking, where it takes the time, but you're not just mindlessly sitting there. The randoms would also keep you at your computer, focused, which is what Jagex wants.

How could they really tell if your AFk training if you talk once and a while? You quoted me from like 2 - 3 months ago. :? Yea I'm not sure, I just overheard a lot of people saying and posting that. Edit: Welcome back elucin8er. :) Thanks Risen :D And yeah, that was a very old statement, funny how you found it to reply :P

Looks like Jagex is trying to make rs a more community friendlier place. This could bring people together when training, but also possibly affect edgeville pking. Should be an interesting week for everthing, looking forward to it :D

Don't panic and you'll be fine. It's damn tricky, but you'll be able to do it. Once you get set into motion with Jad, you'll find prayer switching comes as second nature.

Why lock it? I love discussion about new ideas. Horses would obviously be awesome, but could serve in much of the same was as it does for WoW. Some benefits could include: 1. Faster travel 2. Trophy item - only the rich could afford it 3. Acesses unique places They could only be used when you are not in combat with another ONLINE player. Meaning you could use it to pass monsters without it having an affect. Let's share some more ideas before putting him down. Who cares if it doesn't happen, it's nice to discuss.

Help and advice forum works very well, people can give you an answer almost immediently. While I'm here, I'm sorry, I don't know the stats of it.

Ouch, snappy people here :P Next time just post in goals and achievements, people who have fewer things to complain about :P Well done, try for 500 now :D

lol, mages get skoolage pking not warriors, warriors r the majority of the ppl who get killed You can't be serious can you? lol. Head to world 18 edgeville, I do hope you change your mind.

Those are the stats of a pker. 45 defence for zerker 52 prayer for smite 70 attack for whip High strength for ko's Become a pker.

bacab is very very very very confused. Question : Why do you want flies? Another thing... I don't wanna sound like I'm flaming you or anything but ... a good deed is it's own reward, posting it on a forum is a little too much like gloating. "Ha ha I did a good deed and you didn't \ " It's general p2p, he can post whatever he likes as long as he doesn't break the rules. Sure it may seem like gloating, but a few people may like the story. What I find odd, is why is a person who can special 30 - 25 carrying around a r2h at rune rocks.

House Canafis teleport? (H) Does that even work?

I don't think they're very strict on it. I haven't heard a ban or a warning for it yet. The evidence against can never be strong enough.

The quest is called "The Hand in the Sand" Glad to see you back and updating this guide. I found it very useful at times (especially the green dragons). Thanks and thanks :) When I have some spare time I'll try to come up with some other decent ideas. I'm just happy this post didn't drop off the list :)

Nah, you just gotta buy em :(

Superheat the ores there for magic xp and then drop the bars. If you would rather profit, then take the ores out and the dwarf takes them to the bank for you, and you can furnace them later. --------- Did a quick spelling fix on the original post and added an idea suggeted earlier.