Godslayer

I'll be doing a portrait as well. :)

Thought yall might be interested in my newest WIP for a competition on another site

You should experiment with differant shades on shading- everythings to similar. :wink:

Nadrils return coincides with the resurection of fruities? A coincidence? I THINK NOT! DESTROY THE BRINGER OF FRUIT! Grab your torches and pitchforks! YARG!

I suceeded my Knowledge (Forum) check. :lol:

Hello Nadril. I'm still here. You're Monkey 933s brother, aren't you?

Any number of games in the d20 system.

Critical hit!

Yes! I love it :wink:

I dont care about his head, his body can even twist into a position like that, because the neck is in the entirly wrong place, as is his crotch. You cant move your body parts into incorrect places. Also, I did color count on graphics gale.

1409 colors. You realize how insane that is? Thats not real pixel art, is it? Anyways, heres the problem. His legs are in the completely wrong place. You see, his six pack, is not above his crotch, but rather his thigh, which throughs off the balance of the picture. Also, does this guy have a manhood? :lol: His neck is also in the wrong place- every body had a central line of motion. If your standing stiff, the line is straight, but if your arch backwards like this guy, the line is curved. Anyways, heres what I'm talking about: Your line of motion: The proper line of motion:

I'm sure penty of people have seen dragons on Animal Planet. Komodo Dragons almost killed Steve Erwin once. :lol:

This is how you color a dragon: Credit: St0ven. Rip and your a punk :wink:

You defend yourself from every critique like its an attack and we should know already that your 'going to do it later'. Just because I'm critiquing aesthetic and not technical details like anatomy doesnt mean you can't just be grateful your getting replies. Also- why pruple and green? They clash horribly, I dont see what kinda color scheme your going with for the overall peice. :?

Been on the DI forums recently? roflmao Something wrong with that?

Your characters look like you where trying really hard to stay in those black lines. Why? Take out the blacklines all together- they're gawdy and sharp because you don't anti alias. If those pants have so many folds, show the folds from the side as well. His clothes look like tights because you've adhered to the black lines too much. Also, the folds in his pants are way to random. Google picks of jeans- you'll see that folds follow a patern according to loosness.

The girl should have been basked in a red tint from all the flames, and the shadows would be going up from her feet, not down from her head.

Woah, I like the indepth critique MrX :) Great job DH, it was a close one. :wink:

Current points: GS 49.5 vs DH 49 IT'S A CLOSE ONE FOLKS!

Currently: DH: 23 GS: 25

Whats with you and seeing pecks through clothes? Take out the six pack at least, it looks like he has a bad stiching job or something. I can kinda understand the breast area being a bit more predominant under the clothes, but beneath that it should all be folds.

Nah, I think I got owned. I wonder who I want to duel next...its fun exercise!

LP, Mrxman, and Quer Skull. Unless you have a problem with this DH, I think this will be the judges.

I have to talk to Dementedhero...Who all wanted to?

Yes?