Sir_Erderik Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 I got my scanner to work, and I was looking through my notebooks for something to scan. Found this, thought it looked good, and decided to scan it. [hide=Ladys and Gentlemen, I give you Verac!] [/hide] I also found one of Torag, its not as good and I messed up on the platelegs. [hide=Here is Torag, he is corrupted.] [/hide] Please rate 1-10/10 or something. Note:The rune's on the left of verac say "Defiler". Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted May 18, 2007 Author Share Posted May 18, 2007 49 views and not a single post, come on now. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmo_killer6 Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 49 views and not a single post, come on now. Why is he wearing mittens? Happy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 49 views and not a single post, come on now. Why is he wearing mittens? Happy? He barley has any armour on, and he lives underground. It can get pretty cold in the tombs. =P~ 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted May 18, 2007 Author Share Posted May 18, 2007 Suppose to be barrows gloves, and I'm horrible at drawing hands, thats why they look like mittens. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 work on it a bit more, there are a lot of errors. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoswellCrash Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 Its a picture by a person, not Pablo Picasso ffs these guy's, very good nice work. I'll give you 6/10 Give the guy a break :-s There are a lot of errors, omg so its a picture it wont kill anyone he isn't trying to become then next big artist, you have to admit people in this world are nasty would it hurt to be nice every now and again? And work on it a bit, what he drew a picture.. he isn't planing to spend his life making it perfect because you think its not right, thats it finished if you don't like it rate it bad or not at all.. :anxious: - Twitter | RuneScape FB Group | My PC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted May 18, 2007 Share Posted May 18, 2007 Its a picture by a person, not Pablo Picasso [bleep] these guy's, very good nice work. I'll give you 6/10 Give the guy a break :-s There are a lot of errors, omg so its a picture it wont kill anyone he isn't trying to become then next big artist, you have to admit people in this world are nasty would it hurt to be nice every now and again? And work on it a bit, what he drew a picture.. he isn't planing to spend his life making it perfect because you think its not right, thats it finished if you don't like it rate it bad or not at all.. :anxious: :wall: . work on it a bit more, there are a lot of errors. Agreed. The guy is incredibly stiff as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zoidnerd Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 i dont draw runescape stuff but i do alot of metal music bands and stuff and thats what i do in 10 :3 WORK ON YOUR PORPORTIONS PLZ!!! My Myspace Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 Its a picture by a person, not Pablo Picasso [bleep] these guy's, very good nice work. I'll give you 6/10 Give the guy a break :-s There are a lot of errors, omg so its a picture it wont kill anyone he isn't trying to become then next big artist, you have to admit people in this world are nasty would it hurt to be nice every now and again? And work on it a bit, what he drew a picture.. he isn't planing to spend his life making it perfect because you think its not right, thats it finished if you don't like it rate it bad or not at all.. :anxious: Ok, I've seen two posts from you, and it's already clear that you don't know half of what you're saying. What we're giving him is called "Constructive Critsicm". Why should we praise someone on doing a bad job? To make a person get better, make them acknowledge of their errors, correct them, and the more this is done, the better a person gets. Sometimes, you have to be cruel to be kind. Anyway, about the picture, it's alright, though he's in a very static pose (alright for a data sheet, though). Try to make it more lively. Also, the proportions are a little off. Correct that, and you'll have a pretty good piece of work there. :thumbsup: Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted May 19, 2007 Author Share Posted May 19, 2007 Well, the picture is already finished and Ican't really fix anything already drawn on it. Thanks for the input on what the errors are, they really helped.[/sarcasm] Not sure what the proportion issues are, im assuming the hands and helmet mabey? Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fortress2000 Posted May 19, 2007 Share Posted May 19, 2007 Well, for proportion, hid biceps are HUGE compared to his body. Trying making his chest a little wider. His legs also seem a little short, and with his legs looking short, his feet do look a little small too. Other than that... =D> Writing in colour was fun while it lasted...The Tip.It. Furry! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted May 19, 2007 Author Share Posted May 19, 2007 Well, for proportion, hid biceps are HUGE compared to his body. Trying making his chest a little wider. His legs also seem a little short, and with his legs looking short, his feet do look a little small too. Other than that... =D> I see what your getting at there. In my experience only really buff people have wide chests like that, I wasn't going for "insanely muscular", but I made the arms muscular so it doesn't really match the torso. I think it would be better if I would have made the arms a little smaller, instead of making the chest wider. I'm not sure about the legs, they are a little longer than from the waist up, like it is in real life so I think there fine, mabey I just made the arms go down to far. If I could i would try remaking it but I don't have the time or will to do it. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jenkees Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 8/10 for quality of drawing. -3.5 for drawing about Runescape irl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted May 20, 2007 Author Share Posted May 20, 2007 8/10 for quality of drawing. -3.5 for drawing about Runescape irl. Lol, no life ftw. \ Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deloriagod Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 Its a picture by a person, not Pablo Picasso [bleep] these guy's, very good nice work. I actually hate Picasso's work. I'm more of a Macke fan.. His impressionism work is great I recommend taking a look through some anatomy books and practice drawing hands. You've got two references attachted to your arms ;). Also work on your shading. Most of the crosshatching looks nice but in the lighter areas it looks like you just scribbled the color in. Internet Marketing For Newbies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenslime89 Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 I think that they should be drawn at an angle rather than straight on as you have it. I find its easier to draw and gives the option to shade, I can't shade, but you maybe can? I've got some of my old drawings when I still played RuneScape. I've never been great at drawing so the limbs are at odd angles (some looking particularly uncomfortable!) but they might help you get what I'm meaning. [hide=Some examples] Pure Mage Pker A somewhat chubby looking Guthan A grim reaper-ish Ahrim [/hide] Photos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted May 20, 2007 Author Share Posted May 20, 2007 If I have time before the school year is out I can try redrawing verac with a different pose and better limbs. Oh, the lighter shaded areas on Verac were just scribbled in as I was running out of time to finish the shading. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 Well, the picture is already finished and Ican't really fix anything already drawn on it. Thanks for the input on what the errors are, they really helped.[/sarcasm] Not sure what the proportion issues are, im assuming the hands and helmet mabey? sarcasm? Why... they told you thier opinions... Basically i would A. use circles and lines to make and outline yeah that old show where joints are and such thing... it really does help B. don't drabble lines all over your paper C. use your eyes and see where your problems are... look at a human bicept or arm muscles, google male torso and see the differences to the bodies there and the ones you are drawing... New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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