May 24, 200719 yr little practice fixing up portraits and still getting use to CS2, havent used it much since i got it. Cs2 - 1-1 1/2 hrs to finish i screwed up a little on the collar of the shirt, but whatever.
May 24, 200719 yr wow your really great with photoshop! although this should be in the gallery.. and im not sure whether or not it breaks the RL pics rule. Still, great work
May 24, 200719 yr Author whoops... mis-post.. if a mod sees this please move to the gallery, thank you... And if it does break the rules, mods also feel free to remove. :
May 24, 200719 yr The clothing changes and the lips look good but the eyes look noticably fake. You took an already emo looking girl and made a caricature emo girl out of her. Shame. Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12
May 24, 200719 yr It all seems too strong. However, I really like the eyes, They seem sharp and clear. I wouldn't have changed the colour of the tee though, the original matches the eyes, Which is good. IMO.. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008.
May 24, 200719 yr You made that girl hot =] Imo, she was far more attractive before the manipulation. The girl has midly assymetrical features, which you've softened nicely. However, you've made her look like she's wearing a lot of makeup. She's wearing far too much in the original photo. You've also taken away much of her facial definition, especially her cheek bones, and you've made her eyes grossly emphasised. Her mascara (seems to be around every pair of female eyes nowadays :( ) makes her eyes almost like a caricature of real eyes even without the manipulation, the manipulation just makes them look artificial. She has beautiful eyes. (pity about the mascara)
May 24, 200719 yr the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o My photobucket
May 24, 200719 yr the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o lolololololololol. Eye liner looks really bad LP, other than that its nice. Maybe a bit too overdone but nice.
May 24, 200719 yr btw is that u LP? O.o who knows, as long as (she?) doesnt say its (her?) own photo, (she?) isnt breaking the rule that states that you cant post photos of yourself. nice manip, like many people said, the eyes are a bit overkill, but its still nice. by the way shes really hot Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay!
May 24, 200719 yr the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o lolololololololol. Eye liner looks really bad LP, other than that its nice. Maybe a bit too overdone but nice. shes taking the pic herself so i thought maybe it was LP so (s)he could practise ;P My photobucket
May 24, 200719 yr Off-topic: Can I get her number? :lol: Jokes aside, very nice. I know nothing about photomanips, but thats pretty good here!
May 24, 200719 yr the black on the eyeliner is too overpowering. apart from that the pics been much improved :P remove some of the wrinkles :thumbsup: btw is that u LP? O.o lolololololololol. Eye liner looks really bad LP, other than that its nice. Maybe a bit too overdone but nice. shes taking the pic herself so i thought maybe it was LP so (s)he could practise ;P LP is a he dude.
May 24, 200719 yr The eyes bug me so much, lol. Especially the pupil, which looks like random scribbles, and the eyelashes, which are too thick imo. The lips are good, do that for the eyes, the shine, I mean. do u wow?Cassiius|Level 70 Night Elf Preist|RunetotemSambora|Level 37 Tauren Shaman|BurningLegion
May 24, 200719 yr Author The eyes bug me so much, lol. Especially the pupil, which looks like random scribbles, and the eyelashes, which are too thick imo. The lips are good, do that for the eyes, the shine, I mean. Yes, this was the first time ive really tried retouching a portrait. I had seen a tutorial on Deviantart about retouching eyes so they stand out more and are sharp. I tried doing it without looking at the tutorial and thought they turned out ok, but they can be better, maybe soften them up more. As for the eye lashes I wanted them there to draw attention to the eyes, but like some of you said I may have over done them a little bit. I was using a 90% opac brush when doing them, so next time ill bring the opac. down so they are softer but still draw attention As for the softening of the facial feature thats a common thing people do especially in magazines etc. I wanted to lighten up her skin to, as she looked a little sun burned and i didnt like that very much.
May 25, 200719 yr should have done a gradient map for the eyes rather than scribbling away at em. My photobucket
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