axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 err yes well... i tried a diff style if you could tell, after i read a lil more on how to draw better manga. So err, well rate it X/10 pls. thanks. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAGE Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 Hmmm well atleast it isn't the worst I have seen, 7/10 for a first attempt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Author Share Posted March 20, 2005 First atte- im going to stop myself right there with that. But could you tell me what could be improved...? axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SAGE Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 Well the main thing missing is the lack of tone, an if it's pencil as I pressume it needs more cross shading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Author Share Posted March 20, 2005 I dont do much shading in sketches really. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
red123 Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 its better than all my drawing :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greatsilverwyrm Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 It's extremely anime-y...anime-y drawings are a dime-a-dozen. If you really want to draw, don't even think about Anime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zonorhc Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 It's extremely anime-y...anime-y drawings are a dime-a-dozen. If you really want to draw, don't even think about Anime. I second that. Find your own style. It's better in the long run. Varrock Library: Shattered Sky | Silent Thunder | The Emperor's FinestAstri @ MythWeavers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Author Share Posted March 20, 2005 I will never stop making anime, EVER. And... i tried a diff style if you could tell so i dont normally draw like that. But pls dont tell me what i have to draw and just rate the pic. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 why do you waste my time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Author Share Posted March 20, 2005 Who? axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 you who else :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Author Share Posted March 20, 2005 Why did you post then :shock: axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 bcuz ur making me spam ur topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 as sigs your drawings are good but as a drawing them self... well its not my cup of tea (dont really like teas.. unless its frechly dround ans such mmmmm) well keep practicing every day, youll get better thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 dig it 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Itachi Posted March 20, 2005 Share Posted March 20, 2005 The face looks... deformed... but other then that it looks ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 20, 2005 Author Share Posted March 20, 2005 i had a hard time with the left side of the face in trying to make it non-circle... and yeah... deformation. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mk Posted March 21, 2005 Share Posted March 21, 2005 you could try adding depth to the picture by shading it in photoshop or something. the guy (from NGE) on my sig i drew, scanned and coloured in photoshop. works pretty well, i think. i also did 1 other pic for RS sigs in the same way, posted it a while ago.. i'll just post it again to show: anime style pics, i believe, can look really good BUT pencil drawings never scan as good as they look on paper so i think you do need to smarten them up with some editing once they have been scanned. uh, and if u want to learn to draw anime the best way (imho) is not to read guides or those 'how to draw manga' books but just to try copying frames from ur favourite cartoons! i love foolycooly.. got a ton of myown copies of flcl pics on my pc ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 21, 2005 Author Share Posted March 21, 2005 Well thats actually what i used to do and i found it added to my chars somewhat... now i realise when you do one part mangaish its essential to do the rest the same style. The reason i didnt color it in photoshop was because there were tons of holes and very sketchy lines that i couldnt fill in. Anyway's im going to retreat back to my old style. For now... axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oilertay Posted March 21, 2005 Share Posted March 21, 2005 beautiful! now pixel it! [Admin Edit: Religious text Not permitted]~108 combat~5.9k dusties killed / dragon chain :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted March 21, 2005 Share Posted March 21, 2005 please change your style. no offense but pixel sigs don't look very good with that anime style to it. but at least make the head smaller, arms bigger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pocius Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 I don't care what it looks like, it is better than mine. :roll: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adolpha Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 I liked the work you did with the sword. looks very nice. The body joints are all awkward though. also, i know you probably dont wanto hear this, but if you learn how to draw seriously, anime drawing will come naturally. um...overall, i give a 7/10. [Jarkan (retired)]-[2001-2003][Adolpha (retired)]-[2003-2004] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pyromania Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 ..Well, I don't imagine Runescape characters as that crazy-go-nuts anime look, (especially since they have their eyes closed at all times) but it was sorta good... Not like I can do better. http:www.polykarbon.com/ I believe there are a few tutorials here... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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