Sunwarriord Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 -removed because it sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Splotchy Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 The shark fins look funny. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Punkage Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 Not enough shading in the clouds, but good job. Looks like you've improved your shading. 7/10. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiseTSM Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 The body of the guy seems kind of rigid. My Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carlos74 Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 The shark fins look funny. 8/10 I find there's too many shark fins. Take some out, and maybe turn some so they're goin the other way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 Everything just looks... flat. But good shading nice job, 6/10. axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunwarriord Posted March 24, 2005 Author Share Posted March 24, 2005 I know. rushed job, was really just looking to improve my shading. next pixel will be mostly linework. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_Maras Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 depth is a definate need on those... the water is just like... sprawling up like a tidal wave or something but you already said that.... i like the guy though... http://www.rampid.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neanderslave Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 Linework isnt as good as in your other sigs but your shading has improved! Neanderslave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 the water seems to be just on top of the land.... 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ran_Shadow2 Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 Linework isnt as good as in your other sigs but your shading has improved! Neanderslave there either is linework or there isn't, and i havn't seen any of sun's sigs with linework yet. It's pretty cartoony which is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oilertay Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 you did an awesome job on the face. The BG is kinda weak and the cloud doesn't look good. But your char's linework and shading is excellent. keep it up. [Admin Edit: Religious text Not permitted]~108 combat~5.9k dusties killed / dragon chain :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
numba1fletch Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 cool i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 Everything just looks... flat. But good shading Nice contradiciton..... I suggest you actually do what everyone else does and actually shade pixel by pixel. It looks like you drew some lines, and magic-wand-ed the area, and filled it with a gradient. For water, look at some reference. There are lots of extreme highlights and reflections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alienpostie Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 looks good to me, but then im a n00b to these forums. :? The waters a bit wierd but apart from that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tttommmmm Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 the sig you have now is really weird it says zamorak warrior and theres a guthix guy in it :? but the sig you posted..5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 IMHO its not very good..this is definatly my least favorite of all your works thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 clean up the damn lines.. gradient is never good :roll: its flat, if shading is flat its bad, read my tut i explain further about that one in it. the background is just bad.. messed up shark,cage, fins ever seen a fin that big from that distance..? in that shape..?must be a grey supersized killer whale.. wonder how they got so close to the shore anyway? dont like your style of characters either but that is just personal preference.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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