Punkage Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 Just finished this, I guess I would like to see what you guys think. Slight animation in the magic trees and butterfly... Hi to Godslayer mostly, I miss you. :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 the color composition is nice, all things nicely excecuted i like the grass moste. the only problems i can see now is that the trees are a bit gradientish flat, tho for some reason i dont seem to bother it that much. and the sky is a tad empty, clouds or/and birds can do allot to that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercifull Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 Shame about the lack of clouds. Looks really good those well done ^_^ Mercifull <3 Suzi "We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plya Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 dat is totaly sweet weldone .. Visit TipRs for Rs Tips such as Money Making Guides Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 Very nice, I would have to agree with an earlier poster about it needs a cloud or 2 but the colours and style are very good the animations are good you see them, but you don;t at first realise as it were they are animations. Man the more i browse this forum the more I wanna finally find time to try and turn my imaging and pixel skills to make a sig or two Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Futurama Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 Yea, aside from the plain sky it's very detailed and well made. Love the Anim̮̩̉̉ eyes too :) Love the animation too! As for CC, it's just the sky that seems plain, plus i'm not a fan of the bevelling on the text as it's a pixel sig, but that's just a personal prefence. Excellent work, you've got a lot of talent :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 Very nice Punkage, I wouldn't think that it'd be a crime to love your style 8) and yeah, I do. very cartoony and eyecatching :lol:. For crits as people have said it may help to add a few wavey clouds and add more of a texture to the trees cus they look very smooth, also Ive noticed theres no shadows :? is that cus you forgot or just figured it'd look better without? well very well done, nothing wrong with the linework and you've coloured and shaded it in a great way which suits your art style :) . 9/10 cus I love that style :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teenageloser33 Posted August 22, 2005 Share Posted August 22, 2005 Just finished this, I guess I would like to see what you guys think. Slight animation in the magic trees and butterfly... Hi to Godslayer mostly, I miss you. :oops: :( Fine don't miss me, even though I talk to you online a lot :wink: anyways I already gave you my crit and yeah try and add a cloud or bird or snorkelhunch back to the sky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CommandoSGT Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 Cheating on me eh? :oops: Looks lovely k? At least put in a small cloud. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boogie Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 I like it alot. Your skills are amazing. :wink: Be more active, okay? You're a great person. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 Just finished this, I guess I would like to see what you guys think. Slight animation in the magic trees and butterfly... Hi to Godslayer mostly, I miss you. :oops: Look at teh butterfly! Ee is cute! 8) U mek sig??? Hi to you to, Punkage. How goes it? Well, the empty sky can be partialy solved by a dithered-gradient Differant dithering patterns, of even two colors, can make alot of differance. Subtle, yet effective. I'd say ditch the black outlines, and make the color outlines just darker shades. Your still not using antialaising, its a simple (midly) step that can help smooth out 'jaggies' or places where the pixels show the true blockyness of their nature. Some stlyistic pieces can make use of this blockyness, but your shading betrays your desires for smoothness. So, I'll assume you have no idea what I'm talking about. Well, to start, AA stands for 'anti-alaising'. What means this? Basicaly, AA is creating a one or two pixel gradient to blend things into eachother, therefore creating the illusion of curves. And example. Mr smilie, some dude I just made. (Pm me if you want this as a free avatar-anyone) He's heavily antialiased. He looks rather smooth (perhaps sauve, in his more serious moments?) But wait? How do the pixels become smooth? Boom! A two color gradient helps destroy some jaggies. This guy is still alittle jaggy, but thats because alot of the lines werent drawn well. :oops: I have more to say, but unfortuanatly, I have this horrible habit- sleep. Gotta quit that some day... Be ready for critique- the SEQUAL! on the 'morrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Punkage Posted August 23, 2005 Author Share Posted August 23, 2005 Thanks GS, that really helps. I'm gonna try that out. :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted August 23, 2005 Share Posted August 23, 2005 Something quick before school: Don't AA 45degree angles, it only makes them blur. And your welcome, it was my pleasure. :o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 I miss you Elvy :cry: We'll all be happy to see you come back once you make that move :D J272 Btw, another beautiful sig, really top notch :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korla Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 nice piece, I really like the colours, and the linework is awesome. I don't really like the faces on the chars, but I suppose that's just my personal preference. keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted August 24, 2005 Share Posted August 24, 2005 good but sky doesnt look good thats the only fault ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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