3D scene. With guns! Gasp!

[Rath]

 

:-s

[expert1212]

Nice?

[Alduron]

Pretty cool.

 

What program did you use?

 

Did you model everything in it yourself?

 

I would suggest working on the materials to give the items a realistic look.

 

 

 

~Alduron

[pjb21]

mini guns have between 3 - 6 barrels not the 17 youve got there #-o

 

 

 

the shotgun looks way to shiny, it should be duller. whats up with the trigger grouping? and also there should be a visable ejection port on this side.

 

 

 

the m4, hmm... well theres no red parts on the real thing, the handel is talller, the mag is slimmer, the grip is shorter and not bent, the stock id longer and thinner.

 

 

 

the pistol/hand gun on the desk looks rather weird, but it doesnt matter to much snce its very small and isnt central really.

 

 

 

the pc srenn, light, chair and desk look good, as does the piccie of the drag med.

 

 

 

back to the mini gun, the handel is in the wrong position, the body, well it dont look like that. thats probably also the first red mini gun i have seen.

 

 

 

for mini gun referances look here: http://www.nazarian.no/wep.asp?id=371&group_id=25&country_id=181&lang=0

 

(theres also other mini guns on there)

 

 

 

for m4 referances look here: http://www.nazarian.no/wepc.asp?lang=0&group_id=5&country_id=97

 

 

 

the shotgun body isnt to bad so ill leave that be.

 

 

 

PJB21

[Rath]

mini guns have between 3 - 6 barrels not the 17 youve got there #-o

 

 

 

the shotgun looks way to shiny, it should be duller. whats up with the trigger grouping? and also there should be a visable ejection port on this side.

 

 

 

the m4, hmm... well theres no red parts on the real thing, the handel is talller, the mag is slimmer, the grip is shorter and not bent, the stock id longer and thinner.

 

 

 

the pistol/hand gun on the desk looks rather weird, but it doesnt matter to much snce its very small and isnt central really.

 

 

 

the pc srenn, light, chair and desk look good, as does the piccie of the drag med.

 

 

 

back to the mini gun, the handel is in the wrong position, the body, well it dont look like that. thats probably also the first red mini gun i have seen.

 

 

 

for mini gun referances look here: http://www.nazarian.no/wep.asp?id=371&group_id=25&country_id=181&lang=0

 

(theres also other mini guns on there)

 

 

 

for m4 referances look here: http://www.nazarian.no/wepc.asp?lang=0&group_id=5&country_id=97

 

 

 

the shotgun body isnt to bad so ill leave that be.

 

 

 

PJB21

 

 

 

Thanks for the CC.

 

PJB

 

-The huge number of barrels on the minigun comes about from me originally making it for a scifi type thing and merely merging it into this scene (because I really do like the model :3> ), probably should be less but I cant be bothered making a new one.

 

- The shotgun is too shiny, thanks for pointing that out ill fix it next time.

 

- The colour stuff is really secondary as guns can be painted.

 

- The pistol model is actually rubbish, I just wanted something to go on that bit of the desk, I might remake that at some point.

 

- And the mini gun handle, I was totally thinking duke nukem when I did that :-s I have no idea what a real life minigun looks like

 

Funnily enough the only ones you said you liked were the 5 minute rushjobbies that I did to take up space :lol:

 

 

 

Alduron

 

-Made in wings3D

 

-All models made by me (although not at the same time, M4 and chaingun were imported from earlier scenes)

 

- Yeah Im not much chop at texturing and the material creation in Wings3D isnt much good either so :(

 

 

 

Expert

 

What the?

[WeeBoab]

its good but, texture plz?

[beesafree]

mini guns have between 3 - 6 barrels not the 17 youve got there #-o

 

 

 

 

*cough* 16 *cough*

[Rath]

mini guns have between 3 - 6 barrels not the 17 youve got there #-o

 

 

 

 

*cough* 16 *cough*

 

 

 

People have waaay to much time if theyre counting the barrels :XD:

[videl]

It's very good except the bullets look like pill capsules. :shock:

[My_Eggs]

mini guns have between 3 - 6 barrels not the 17 youve got there #-o

 

 

 

 

*cough* 16 *cough*

 

 

 

yup, i came up with 16 also :P

[pjb21]

i just got 17 again o0

 

 

 

we must be looking at a different picture, or i need to take another dose...

 

 

 

most likely the phantom bars of soap twisting my vision, or maybe its the flapjacks of evil making you short sited by 1/17th...

 

 

 

their comming to get us!

 

 

 

RUN!!!

[Nadril]

Lol I get 16 too Pj. :lol: .

 

 

 

It's not bad, you have the basic models down. Now try and add texturing to it and make it not so flat. :)

[pjb21]

:cry:

 

 

 

well... my, er *sniff* my vision is *sniff* 1/16th *cry* better than yours!

[Neishc]

:cry:

 

 

 

well... my, er *sniff* my vision is *sniff* 1/16th *cry* better than yours!

 

 

i must say that i agree with pjb ;)

[xxsheepxx]

Looks ok. Needs a lot of work on the guns and textures.

[mitchelsmethisme]

yeah weres the trigger for the gatling gun? its kinda useless if u cant FIRE IT jeez

[Arctic]

Everything is too smooth; needs some textures on it.

 

Poor choice of light source too.

 

Not gonna point out the good parts since it's already been done, but I do like it.

[lazy_cat]

Counted 16 but I think pj got the point XD

 

 

 

Well done on the modeling. :thumbsup: But like most people suggested, add some texturing! Don't stop trying :mrgreen: Also, the lighting is alittle odd :-k For instance, the shadow cast on the table and minigun is very intense and there seems to be two spotlights (light source) therefore, there should be atleast two different shading casts. But I dunno, maybe someone can explain it better XD =P~

[Zonorhc]

Well, since most other things have already been picked on...

 

 

 

The computer screen shouldn't be a perfect square. They have a tendency to be rectangular.

 

 

 

And yeah, everything is too smooth and textureless. Make the wood rougher, put stains on the floor, cracks in the wall, what-have-you.