Abyssalwhip Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 Due to the high maturity level of this topic i have deceided to get it closed and remake some other time and to whoever was just complaining and only giving CC to rip on it keep away from my remake Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 thatas not a pixel lol... thats what i like to refer to as bucket tool abuse :wink: wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 thatas not a pixel lol... thats what i like to refer to as bucket tool abuse :wink:Thats what i like to refer to as illiterate WIP means work in progress not Wafting Idiot Poo Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 sorry but the anatomy is throwen out the window!! hes like a stick figure :wall: Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 sorry but the anatomy is throwen out the window!! hes like a stick figure :wall:ummm your accusing me of having a bad pixel its gana be 10x better than your sig when its done just wait... oh and learn what a WIP is Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 very messy black outlines - no, no :shame: And as mentioned, anatomy is really off. I'd suggest to fix it BEFORE you start colouring. What else is going to be on that sig? [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked ina gradiednt, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap) Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 so retarted... IM GETTING RID OF THE BLACK LINES ONCE IM DONE SHADING CANT YOU PEOPLE READ? Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 so retarted... IM GETTING RID OF THE BLACK LINES ONCE IM DONE SHADING CANT YOU PEOPLE READ? You never mentioned that. [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 so retarted... IM GETTING RID OF THE BLACK LINES ONCE IM DONE SHADING CANT YOU PEOPLE READ? You never mentioned that.oh yeah... but a WIP means that there could be a ton of changes its just to help ME out for now i will be matching the shading in with the lines when im ready and people please stop making nasty comments before its done just rate how it is for now also adding another updates version in right now Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 17, 2006 Author Share Posted November 17, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked ina gradiednt, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap)like you kay? Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked ina gradiednt, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap)like you kay? AHAHHAHA (falls out of chair laughing) how old are you...5? you ask for C+C we give, you act like a 5 year old.... :XD: Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viktorkrum77 Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 Work on the bones and D chain, both are very incorrect. Me doing staff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 18, 2006 Author Share Posted November 18, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked ina gradiednt, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap)like you kay? AHAHHAHA (falls out of chair laughing) how old are you...5? you ask for C+C we give, you act like a 5 year old.... :XD:hahahahah your acting like that and your critisizing me about being 5? its not done its a WIP seriously... (hypocrite... oh wait your 5 year old mind cant figure out what that word means) I need a mod to clean up all the spam on here Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked in a gradient, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap)like you kay? AHAHHAHA (falls out of chair laughing) how old are you...5? you ask for C+C we give, you act like a 5 year old.... :XD:hahahahah your acting like that and your critisizing me about being 5? its not done its a WIP seriously... (hypocrite... oh wait your 5 year old mind cant figure out what that word means) I need a mod to clean up all the spam on here Be careful using big words, as you have no understanding on what they mean :roll:. When you post a WIP, people come in and criticize what they think could be fixed. your supposed to listen, not say "NO YOU ARE!!!!" that is the whole point of WIP's. Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viktorkrum77 Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked in a gradient, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap)like you kay? AHAHHAHA (falls out of chair laughing) how old are you...5? you ask for C+C we give, you act like a 5 year old.... :XD:hahahahah your acting like that and your critisizing me about being 5? its not done its a WIP seriously... (hypocrite... oh wait your 5 year old mind cant figure out what that word means) I need a mod to clean up all the spam on here Be careful using big words, as you have no understanding on what they mean :roll:. When you post a WIP, people come in and criticize what they think could be fixed. your supposed to listen, not say "NO YOU ARE!!!!" that is the whole point of WIP's. Way to have an immature arguement. Calling someone 5, and then calling them it back. Seriously, try something better next time. -.- Me doing staff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 sorry but the anatomy is throwen out the window!! hes like a stick figure :wall:ummm your accusing me of having a bad pixel its gana be 10x better than your sig when its done just wait... oh and learn what a WIP is hey dummy mines w.i.p too! oh and do lines first.(''...sighs to self thinking 'he will never learn!'...) I'd rate a what... 3.5/10 looonnnggg waaay too go. :evil: :shame: Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkjestrup Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 its not shaded, you just pluked in a gradient, which makes it no longer a pixel, (pluss it looks like crap)like you kay? AHAHHAHA (falls out of chair laughing) how old are you...5? you ask for C+C we give, you act like a 5 year old.... :XD:hahahahah your acting like that and your critisizing me about being 5? its not done its a WIP seriously... (hypocrite... oh wait your 5 year old mind cant figure out what that word means) I need a mod to clean up all the spam on here Be careful using big words, as you have no understanding on what they mean :roll:. When you post a WIP, people come in and criticize what they think could be fixed. your supposed to listen, not say "NO YOU ARE!!!!" that is the whole point of WIP's. Way to have an immature arguement. Calling someone 5, and then calling them it back. Seriously, try something better next time. -.- ya agreed. naughty boys! :shame: ol Thanks Terly for the best Avatar in TipIt -winks- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taco Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 Too much flame. Please stop. Let the kid finish his sig/pixel/thing and then post *Constructive* critisizm. Not omgaoll youe a fu5ve year laold. Stop Flaming. I play World Of Warcraft.(http://www.worldofwarcraft.com) Draka [Alliance] Squeeky Mage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 The maturity level of this conversation has plummeted. A decent start I guess, work on anatomy, and make it less...squiggely.... I like the dust devil skeleton, that is pretty origional. Check out human anatomy (in your case, male) and draw that, then build on the anatomy to get the armor placement right. The arms look a little to long, or the legs to short. I beleive, when drawn human heads fit 7 or 6 times into the height of your person, yours fits 4 times, so he has a very large head :? . Agian tese problems will be sovled if you check out some anatomy guides, deviantART has some amazing guides, that are incredibly helpful. In Closing... Good- Shading starts Semi origonal Decent linework Need improvement- Anatomy Anatomy ANATOMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :oops: HINT- when shading the lava take your time, you don't want to ruin it because it was rushed, lava is tricky, but can turn out very nice. Good luck :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 The maturity level of this conversation has plummeted. A decent start I guess, work on anatomy, and make it less...squiggely.... I like the dust devil skeleton, that is pretty origional. Check out human anatomy (in your case, male) and draw that, then build on the anatomy to get the armor placement right. The arms look a little to long, or the legs to short. I beleive, when drawn human heads fit 7 or 6 times into the height of your person, yours fits 4 times, so he has a very large head :? . Agian tese problems will be sovled if you check out some anatomy guides, deviantART has some amazing guides, that are incredibly helpful. In Closing... Good- Shading starts Semi origonal Decent linework Need improvement- Anatomy Anatomy ANATOMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :oops: HINT- when shading the lava take your time, you don't want to ruin it because it was rushed, lava is tricky, but can turn out very nice. Good luck :) Reddawn, I hope you realise some could interpret your first sentence as, "I'm joining the conversation, so it's about to get a whole lot stupider!". As for the pixel, the anatomy is very incorrect, so instead of ignoring critique, perhaps agree, and then fix or don't at your discretion. Just don't act defensively because someone finds a flaw in your artwork. Most of the major problems have been listed, so I won't go through them all again, but perhaps read through all the replies and keep them in mind. No-one is going to give praise where it is not due. Blergh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 18, 2006 Author Share Posted November 18, 2006 The maturity level of this conversation has plummeted. A decent start I guess, work on anatomy, and make it less...squiggely.... I like the dust devil skeleton, that is pretty origional. Check out human anatomy (in your case, male) and draw that, then build on the anatomy to get the armor placement right. The arms look a little to long, or the legs to short. I beleive, when drawn human heads fit 7 or 6 times into the height of your person, yours fits 4 times, so he has a very large head :? . Agian tese problems will be sovled if you check out some anatomy guides, deviantART has some amazing guides, that are incredibly helpful. In Closing... Good- Shading starts Semi origonal Decent linework Need improvement- Anatomy Anatomy ANATOMY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :oops: HINT- when shading the lava take your time, you don't want to ruin it because it was rushed, lava is tricky, but can turn out very nice. Good luck :) Reddawn, I hope you realise some could interpret your first sentence as, "I'm joining the conversation, so it's about to get a whole lot stupider!". As for the pixel, the anatomy is very incorrect, so instead of ignoring critique, perhaps agree, and then fix or don't at your discretion. Just don't act defensively because someone finds a flaw in your artwork. Most of the major problems have been listed, so I won't go through them all again, but perhaps read through all the replies and keep them in mind. No-one is going to give praise where it is not due. Blergh. well its not that its that this whole topic has turned into a giant spam fest so i might try to get it closed and remake the same topic Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssalwhip Posted November 18, 2006 Author Share Posted November 18, 2006 well i was bored so i spent a couple hours making a dust devil pixel i know its kind of bare now but i will be updating it soon, when im done shading myself (yes thats what i wear dust devil slaying i like strength training there) i will add some more bones and drops on the ground maybe some nature, water, earth runes and peaches in a pile and if your going to spam or flame please leave Edit: 1 plate shaded edit: 2 legs shaded Edit 3: scimitar shaded i made this a 8 months ago but working on more now Your name is "bet you fail", and you're starting a business with your mom? I'm not even going to touch that..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 sorry but the anatomy is throwen out the window!! hes like a stick figure :wall:ummm your accusing me of having a bad pixel its gana be 10x better than your sig when its done just wait... oh and learn what a WIP is Ok first he can give his opinion on your wip all he wants too... Just because he might not be the best at making a pixel doesn't mean he doesn't know correct anatomy... Also, your shadeing your character... that means that your anatomy is done... or should be... so him knowing or not knowing what a wip means is utterly pointless... For my C\C Black lines - shade darker instead Messy lines on the dragon plate legs - your shadeing should mark where indentions are not black lines... Hands- too big and you shaded the fingers from bother hands Face - try to avoid just takeing the easy way out and haveing no eyes and such Facemask- too light needs to be darker to see the difference from the skin Feet- those aren't feet, those are illogical roung blobs of browness Ammy- fury has a red dot at the top of it but iits really hard to see, make it brighter Arms- too thin im suprised the guy could hold that sword Overall its not terrible, but it looks really really messy for some reason. I like the idea you have of useing a skeleton of the dust devil thats a pretty cool idea, but the whole sig has been done many times before... Still, once you clean up the anatomy redraw hands and touch up some of the sig it should be pretty nice, gl New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted November 18, 2006 Share Posted November 18, 2006 so retarted... IM GETTING RID OF THE BLACK LINES ONCE IM DONE SHADING CANT YOU PEOPLE READ? calm down spaz... you want people to comment on it but when they do you freak out on em... 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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