Well around 2.5 hours ago i started on this:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's taking forever but its addictive lol, i wanna finish it. Its meant to be a space marine from Warhammer, but a bit different lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its 12:20 in the morning here so ill finish the linework tommorow. Please rate it so far and give and CC, also point out any irregularities in the anatomy / structure of the armor. Thanks :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bye for now, ill be back tommorow :)

linework is looking v.nice, the way he's holding the gun, it seems a bit...lose, maybe try and fix that, other than that looks fine if the shading is good it'll be awesome

Finished the linework, it took me around an hour. Now onto shading :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Btw i didn't really know how to fix his hold on the gun :? But its good enough for my first work lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lol I just realised that the gun has no trigger, ill fix that soon.

now this is either going to turn out really good or really bad, depending on how well you shade it :ohnoes:

Lol omni's got it right, gl with it mate. Nice to see you try something serious, and do u collect 40k?

 

 

 

Looks like u've got some anatomy problems, his head looks dis-proportionate , body should be wider and his feet and lookin weird. Someone with some expeirence in anatomy will probably tell you exatly whats wrong. You going to do a bg aswell? (just to let you know the backpacks aren't jetpacks, unless you're gonna do an assauly marine who has a much bigger version of it :wink: )

 

 

 

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Lol they look like jetpacks :( I used to collect em, only got like 5 left, but i got the game now :). Ill fix up some things and repost my final linework. And im gonna do a BG at the end.

awesome, get this coloured :

Looks great so far :) Not a ton to comment on, but I'll stay tuned for updates! :thumbsup:

Fixed a few things such as the gun, legs, the backpack and logos on the shoulders.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That should be the final linework.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(just to let you know the backpacks aren't jetpacks, unless you're gonna do an assauly marine who has a much bigger version of it )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I thought they were, so that the marine could move faster in their heavy armour? That goes against everything I believed in... #-o :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I can't help getting the thought in my head of the one that you drew, trying to use his jump pack and his head flying off... :XD:

Thats what it looks like lol.

Assault Marine with jetpack:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Normal Tactical Marine:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hopes that clears things up (got them from google, my painting is alright, but not that good:lol:). Might wanna fix up proportions based on the model :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You mean Dawn of War: Dark Crusade? thats the latest game, just finished it as the eldar today, awesome game.

Ive only got Dawn of war, only had $20 on me at the time lol. Im on mission 11 atm, might get dark crusade some time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For now ill leave it as it is. Its kind of hard to fix certain things, id have to make major changes to it, but its only my first pixel work lol.

I made a simple coloured version, it shouldnt be too hard to shade lol :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Done some shading to the head and backpack.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I done some more shading:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I havent posted in a while cause I wasnt home for a week. Well back to work lol.

contrast your colors more, meaning make each shade stand out a bit. make suer they blend, but not look like they are the same.

Woot it's very nice they look good, nice start!

add more contrast to your color choice, i know its still a WIP, but but its hard to tell what is currently shaded.

By contrast you mean I should make light shades lighter, and dark shades darker?

By contrast you mean I should make light shades lighter, and dark shades darker?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think thats what it means, in art i assume it means to make more of a difference bettween the darkness/lightness of shades.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

less -----> more

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

K, i thought thats what they meant. Well i get to work on that, i was just trying not to over shade it lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: Fixed some shading and put in a basic background. I plan to put some more space marines and other things in the BG.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fixed the linework for the upper part of the space marine, so the top is finished.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's looking really good without the black lines IMO, sadly I can't give you any advice, I am but a mere observer giving my opinion :P

That's looking really good without the black lines IMO, sadly I can't give you any advice, I am but a mere observer giving my opinion :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would have to agree - the effect of "no black lines" (technical name please?) gives it the effect of 3D