Started as a mini, moved on a little, and made this guy. Then added girl, then created a funny lesson.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hell, he looks alot like me. :-k

Welcome back. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good job on the pixel aswell. Nothing bad to say about it.

Welcome back! Sorry your vacation was crap.

Good anatomy. :thumbsup:

hmm i like it but it looks like either

 

 

 

1. hes embarrased

 

 

 

2.his pet grasshopper just ran away

 

 

 

3. hes thinking "if i ran into the road and died, would anyone really care?"

 

 

 

4. he's thinking "hmmm shops own razor blade or gillette razor blades, well i guess shops own are cheaper oh wait what does money matter, what does anything matter!!! why do i matter!!!!" *dies*

 

 

 

a.k.a he looks kinda emo

Just added an interesting 2 scenes.

Just added an interesting 2 scenes.

 

 

 

lol you should make little emo comics they could be rather hilarious, make another one, there she was my sweet heart, the one i loved.... this was it i was going to ask her to the dance finnally.....

 

 

 

then next slide, him beaten up again, and another friend saying "still not figured out the love triangle thing then? or maybe his only friend is the janitor and the janitor says that lol

lol that part about the boyfriend is so true :shock:... For some reason i come out of dances missing a shirt and almost always with a black eye...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, getting back on topic... its not really pixeled is it? it looks more cartoony\pillow shadeing....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think that if you dithered a bit on some of your shadeing it would look a bit smoother such as the girls skirt

 

 

 

2.his pet grasshopper just ran away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That one made me laugh lol.. =P

welcome back :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it looks good exept for the skirt...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and hope u post more often now :P

hehehe... nice comic... make me too >.< i wana be the boyfrend

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not really any crits, just dont pillowshade peoples shirts, and learn to aa, and everything will look a lot better.

great overall, it made me laugh, anyways...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

his black eye should be darker to make it stand out, and the girl looks like shes anorexic, cause she is really skinny

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

9/10 overall tho

Funny :)

 

 

 

The dude could look abit sadder in the second one, or more happy in the first one, so there's a bigger contrast between the two frames.

I love it :D

 

 

 

I like how u made it, and funny aswell.

 

 

 

Found it yourself?