Hi, I noticed alot of RS movie threads going on atm, so I thought I'd post a link to my newest video, anyway, its the first in a series of videos in which a noob basically causes alot of trouble for my character, lemontail. Not much of a plot, more like an intro, my only regret is that I added too much that didn't have anything to do with the plot. I used my own voice for my character, I felt a bit weird doing it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://youtube.com/watch?v=z3TP7YdR-00

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope you like it, I'm currently designing part 2, I write the script pick locations, etc. All done via notepad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~lemontail

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what about their dads? :-w

Toast watch my vid pl0x

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was making videos long before I joined tip.it, ever since I started playing Runescape, I love sharing content with people, and Runescape videos seem a good way to do so.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please view my video before passing it off as just another silly try-out.

but why

 

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was making videos long before I joined tip.it, ever since I started playing Runescape, I love sharing content with people, and Runescape videos seem a good way to do so.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please view my video before passing it off as just another silly try-out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But you posted it because 5 other people have potsed vids.

 

 

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was making videos long before I joined tip.it, ever since I started playing Runescape, I love sharing content with people, and Runescape videos seem a good way to do so.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please view my video before passing it off as just another silly try-out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But you posted it because 5 other people have potsed vids.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hmmm... I see your point

 

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was making videos long before I joined tip.it, ever since I started playing Runescape, I love sharing content with people, and Runescape videos seem a good way to do so.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please view my video before passing it off as just another silly try-out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Viewed it. It was just another silly try-out that has no hope of going anywhere.

 

 

Every kid and their mom on tif is making a vid now

 

 

 

:uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was making videos long before I joined tip.it, ever since I started playing Runescape, I love sharing content with people, and Runescape videos seem a good way to do so.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please view my video before passing it off as just another silly try-out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Viewed it. It was just another silly try-out that has no hope of going anywhere.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Everyone has an opinion, I should of expected bad feedback lol... :anxious:

The cartoon was good

Viewed it. It was just another silly try-out that has no hope of going anywhere.

 

 

 

My answer.... word for word.

 

Viewed it. It was just another silly try-out that has no hope of going anywhere.

 

 

 

My answer.... word for word.

 

 

 

Agreed. Atleast post something worthwhile to watch.

Its like the flu!

lol nice hey check out my videos i comented and rated yours

Lame.

I'm glad you're all being very frank about what you think of the video.. -.-

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But seriously, what would have made it better? Different music? What? Don't just tell me my video is lame, at least tell me why....

Nobody wants to see a duck cartoon. Also, nobody wants a pointless conversation(the cartoon part).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was going ok when the "noob" was talking with Planet Hell on the background.

I explained right there that I put too much that didn't have a thing to do with the story line. Ok, what else is wrong with it? I thought it was a good idea to fictionalize a Runescape character watching television/a DVD; I thought it would be interesting because it was so strange. And when I sped up the show to make it look like I was fast forwarding it, I thought it was a great way to add to the plot. Anyway, sorry it turned out badly, :uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But you have to admit, it's not like I just threw together unedited crap and music together, I took some time (a lot of it) Trying to improve raw footage. Part 2 will be better because it will contain more of a plot (as I mention in the end of the video, if you had continued watching it till the end).

I explained right there that I put too much that didn't have a thing to do with the story line. Ok, what else is wrong with it? I thought it was a good idea to fictionalize a Runescape character watching television/a DVD; I thought it would be interesting because it was so strange. And when I sped up the show to make it look like I was fast forwarding it, I thought it was a great way to add to the plot. Anyway, sorry it turned out badly, :uhh:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But you have to admit, it's not like I just threw together unedited crap and music together, I took some time (a lot of it) Trying to improve raw footage. Part 2 will be better because it will contain more of a plot (as I mention in the end of the video, if you had continued watching it till the end).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yea I'm just telling the basis of a good movie, which is to have almost NO pointless storylines, it needs to work with plot somehow. You probably spent a lot of time on this, and believe me I know how you feel, I like to share stuff with others too.

 

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_9Np9QlG7w

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm not really sure on the whole voice thing though.

I spent like 5 days planning it, I really thought it was gonna be great. Anyway, I'm not posting links to videos because it's a fad, I have basically always made videos about RS since I started playing it, and seeing alot of threads linking to videos, I thought it was a good idea to share my video here. I didn't think it would be considered spamming.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, Risen thanks for the advice

I didn't like it much...

 

 

 

1) The cartoon part was pretty lame... Friggin' ducks?

 

 

 

2) I didn't like the plot. A noob going to trick some dude into doing stuff...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RuneScape isn't the kind of thing I'd use to make a video with a plot. But even those PKing videos are boring as hell to watch (Like some loud metal rock music with some guy pwning a noob... wow?).

I didn't like it much...

 

 

 

1) The cartoon part was pretty lame... Friggin' ducks?

 

 

 

2) I didn't like the plot. A noob going to trick some dude into doing stuff...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RuneScape isn't the kind of thing I'd use to make a video with a plot. But even those PKing videos are boring as hell to watch (Like some loud metal rock music with some guy pwning a noob... wow?).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :ohnoes:

I didn't like it much... But even those PKing videos are boring as hell to watch (Like some loud metal rock music with some guy pwning a noob... wow?).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I like the ownage music and the pking videos, especially the ones that have perfectly fair fights! :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just an annoying vid sorry...Random stuff, nothing really funny, random music with no content for half the time...you know.

Everyone [bleep]ed about my video so much I removed it, I really think I tried too hard. It was too detailed, had a plot. What people want is pk action or an ongoing sequence of fast paced events with new music. That is my insight on the point, anyway I'll keep making videos, hopefully the ones I make in the future will be liked more. Also I think some of it had to do with the fact that a lot of people think I sound like a little kid, so they become annoyed by my voice. So I ask a mod to please lock this thread up

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~13M0n7411