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i really dont like that cartoony area, it really doesnt look good imo, may just be me tho... could do with more contrast imo, also darcer, but again, thats me and my morgish mind, heh. could try and give it more depth by using a gradient darc in the center and lighter at the edges lightly on a new layer. the text is unclear, either duplicate the layer, or if its fairly transparent make it more opake (sp?) lighten the stars, the line looks good tho =) the boarder is kinda harsh, try adding a 1 or 2 px gausion blur and see what it looks like. PJB21

thanks ds, and here it is, i had a go at editing the helm (cut out front and more [bleep]es) and a red ammy instead of that skull thing... PJB21

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hmm, will probably make another soon... but what?

confusious says: "when picking colours dont get them right at top, go colours around half way down, else is painful on eyes" and he was vey wise... so do as he says =) oh and if i can get feedback, should i make another topic for my 3d work? PJB21

kitsu, ioll keep yours in for now, but if you do any more please follow the guidelines. as to those who have posted thanks. and ive had a thought regarding the transparentness, ill make the bg colour of the template the same colour as the bg of the first post (got this idea from one post that was so) PJB21

woo! quality! PJB21

hmm, the should sections just fall down to much, its like he doesnt have very much in the way of shoulders o0 i suggest making the top one point out more, on both sides. metalic, it needs a brighter highlight to give it a good metalic feel, atm its rather dull. havnt really got comments about the chain texturing, im not the kinda person to ask about that since i dont have a clue... at least it looks like a chain as DS said. arm arm looks good, right hand doesnt, well, between the fingers it just looks really weird, maybe too much contrast. define the muscles more on his left arm, it kinda seems, well its weird around the elbow, make the curves clearer. well, thats the chainbody and arms done for now : its looking really good tho, so try and finish this =) PJB21

ganondorf656 you may post it if you wish DS i agree with faelenof, go to uzzisoft or something and have them both, they're both ownage : oh and DS can i have a quick go at editing it? PJB21

kitsu, looks great, im just about to add it =) and not everyone, i dont dither, woo for us! ah, i make myself laugh :anxious: PJB21

yeah height isnt a problem. as tall as you like (well, within reason but yeah....) PJB21

i took it as a heavy burden, but either way its really cool =) i think i can see something along the lines of 'propety of samwise' just opening paint... oh its sauron, lol. i just assumed it was more elfish at first glance... but yeah its cool =) PJB21

remember you can make it longer if you want (eg show the whole people) and i did flames:

wow kitsu, thats looking great, should be very good once finished, but please dont forget that we want the top and bottom line of pixels to be the same as in the template =) and flame, i guess i could have a go at making it fit *sigh* PJB21

please please stick it on the template, with the flat ends and the right dimentions

: likes to hear ones work is apreciated

eww, its all sticky.... yey! and yep, lots of people said theyre gonna take part so lookingfoward to seing it finished =) PJB21

more =) PJB21

home made ftw i made a full length hooded cloak : PJB21

nope, hasnt be posted in the judging area yet

its pretty cool, spotting a few linework mistakes (my fault #-o ) the shading on the main character looks cool and i cant really spot many problems with that, i like the trim effect, but doint forget to shade it =) add a darcer coloured background that white you have atm is rather painful, and having a darc bg can help when pixeling, due to less contrast. dont forget the inside of the protaganists hood, that shouldnt be white :wink: the sword looks good, if slightly weird, but i dont know why... :-s the mage could do with some shading as could the spell. warriors right hand has the outline missing in places :o its looking good tho, and it also seams to be a popular linework, its always intresting to see what people can do with the same starting point =) PJB21

yeah that [bleep]e you pointed out i have since fixed, it was only after taking that screenie that i realised it #-o also im not much of one for many polys, i prefer low poly counts, after all i place every poly myself... takes a not-short time :wink: but thanks for the CC all the same =) PJB21

please can you keep the width the same else it can get very confusing... but thats looking very nice =)

yey! i want to see a carved horse =) or anything really =)

ok the idea behind it is as goes... close your eyes and dream (well dont close your eyes unless you can telecneticly read....) its a darc place, a forest a jungle or similar. you are walking along exploring with your 'cronies' suddently out of the corner of you eye you capture a glimpse of light. in this darc area it seams strange. intrigued you go too see what is happening. step by step you get closer, the light grows brighter, glowing. you get close to it, you can alomst touch it. its weird, unusaral. youve never seen anything like it before. one of your friends is back behind you, dragging back quite a way, due to alot of heavy equipment. you pick up the object. its very heavy despite its small size. you see the glow it emits despite being solid and not a single light adorns it. you listen to it. like a clockwork pocke[bleep]ch it is ticking in scyn to nature itself. one of your friends asks to look at it, so you let them. as it transfers hand it glows brighter. your friend walking last is still struggling under the massive weight. he feels the darc is closing in on him. a tree root is there across the path, he doesnt see it. a stumble, a trip and hes on the floor, the weight of the equipment crushing down on him. he has a very important object around his neck, he musnt get crushed. hes trying to hold himself up, he calls for help. you hear him as does your friend standing with you, you leave the forenin object and run to help him. the object spins in the air where you left it. you run onwards towards your friend in the ground. tick tick tick. the object spirals towards the ground. a meer blade of glass prods into is at it falls against the ground. everything slows down for your friend on the ground. he see you running towards him, hes struggling under the weight. the light glows brighter. silence. a bright ring of light erupted from where you once were. the trees vaporise. it [bleep]es you in the back. the squarks of small animals scream out everywhere. yet its still silent. a small rodent like creature stumbles foward, you see it. trip after trip, over its own legs. its claws flail around in hurry. you dont understand. nothing but this rodent fills your vision, only a painfuly bright glow. the animal vanishes unto the light. the image image is what your heavy burdened friend see's just before your final sight.