hmmmm....i like your fakes, the new one is simple, but text looks almost perfect....but the ":" looks out of place, and i believe the book title would fit on the same line as "you find a book titled", the ":" wouldn't look so much out of place, if you did put it on the same line. at least you are getting better, most people don't get better at all, but i suggest check everthing twice (spelling, angle, grammer, ect) the thing that puts me off when looking at a fake is when a monster or something looks like it is floating in mid-air, or when something is unaligned....try doing something simple like putting a cow in the middle of the dessert and make it look right, that'll help you on angle... i am still here to help, still living :mrgreen: pm if you have any questions :mrgreen: