I again laughed. Dude, you need proper equipment to play. In this video you have two kids sitting on chairs pretending to play the drums and dance their arms around like fools. At least age some more before you even attempt death metal so you have the right voice tone, try clean vocals instead, get a person who is dedicated to camera work and not keeping it in 1 spot, and learn how to play the guitar properly. Also, don't dance like [developmentally delayed]s when your attempting this sort of music. Also, what are your favourite bands? Just wondering were you are getting influenced from.