Soooooooo another attempt at realism. Except I added emotion which doesn't suit the character ><

 

 

 

I drew his headset without a ref so it looks weird. I'll fix it later.

 

 

 

U know it looks REALLY weird.

 

 

 

I like it all except for the nose, mainly. It looks really good so far...but the expression is sort of like some chick walked over an air vent...:P

thats amazing <3

I don't know about realism so far, unless you're going for a "plastic surgery to make someone look like an anime character" thing. It's very good, no question, but it needs more depth and detail for it to truly be realistic.

 

 

 

There are several proportion problems and the features could stand to be more pronounced. Apart from that it's quite nice. :D

 

There are several proportion problems and the features could stand to be more pronounced. Apart from that it's quite nice. :D

 

 

 

whyd ont you tell her what they are instead of just saying they exist?

 

a "Theres something wrong with it" doesnt help anyone....

 

 

 

 

 

the main problem i see is the eyesm theres not enough depthj in them and the colors seema bit too contrasting

Well features, y'know nose, eyes, mouth, filtrum, bone structure etc.

 

 

 

Proportion as in size of facial features and head, distances between features etc.

 

 

 

I thought it was pretty clear. :?

 

 

 

Yes, announcing errors does help. I didn't think I needed to specify that much. It can be hard for an artist to notice things when they've been working on a piece for a while, so I assumed Princessa would pick up on my remark after being informed.

 

 

 

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W O W

hmm, have seen better from you, but some points that look rare to me:

 

 

 

 

 

* The hat thing is to flat, you can see the shading and stuff and its just to flat and soft.. :(

 

 

 

* His shoulders are to flat :P and i know u know that because with the most of your work you don't have it :-w

 

 

 

* At the bottem of the hat thingy, when the hair comes from untherneath it, it is lighter then the other parts of the hari, but it normaly is darker around those points...

 

 

 

* The hat is to light at the bottom, and there is almost no shadow untherneath those outcoming things what is strange, since the light ins't coming from untherneath :-k

 

 

 

* Aroung his neck isn't shadow from hte jacket :wink: jsut a little thing but it makes it more flat then he is :(

 

 

 

well, not realy much to say annymore, exept that his left eye is closed more then his right eye, because the angle at the nose side of the eye is alot less :P

 

 

 

Also i want to say that this looks pretty realistic exept the

That helmet looks like it'd do him a whole lot of good. :wink:

 

 

 

It looks good. I'm unsure how much of the realism you are trying to go for here (the eyes seem kind of lifeless to me) so i'm not sure what to comment. The skin seems a bit too perfect though for a realistic image.

i dont like it that pale, but the original is also pale so...

 

 

 

and the nose is a bit big, and nadril already pointed that the skin looks too "perfect". i dont mean that you should add a wart, just make it a bit irregular. and well the eyes, i dont know whats really wrong with them but they need something... maybe more reflection?

 

 

 

still a nice job :thumbsup:

I have an urge to post a large number 4 on his chest somewhere...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that, tis awesome

Looks good, is the helmet supposed to be bone though? It looks like it, but what you made looks more like plastic to me. Fix that and it'll look much better.

errr....i like it, but the lips are kinda wierd looking, but then again what anime picture really has lips? your pic looks like his hair is to long....just a tad....

 

but otherwise really good ^.^ i love your work!