awesome400 Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 first picture got kinda bored new resized pic sry about the giant one constructive critism only plz rate out of 10 1100 total achieved 03/02/09 880thousandth to reach it :P1200 total achieved 29/09/11 1.23millionth to reach it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 i lol'd. Serriously, his face is a combo of :shock: + :twisted: + :o . And why is his skin red? :lol: Really though, its horrible. its also incredibly big. But mostly it just looks like something a 9 year old would draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 1/10 I'm not usually mean, but unless you planned for that look its really bad. Even if you planned it like that, it could be way better. Bad anatomy, wrong weapon shapes (Ancient staff has a grey staff, its not pure purple! Why do people keep doing the entire thing as purple...), bad skin color, other clothing shapes are wrong (hat and boots). Take some time to practice, and get a ruler or something for lines. Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
happy123 Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Looks like a baby got in a fight with a red and purple pen :shock: You could honestly do much better. My Gallery :: Deviant Art ->Gallery :: Favourites :: ::My blog :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lovelydude Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 You coloured outside the lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_Erderik Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 You coloured outside the lines. :lol: Veni Vidi ViciI came, I saw, I conquered.Hail to the wiki! For all your information needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 God, I come to the Gallery looking to feast my eyes upon some beautiful work, but I get this as the first thing I look at. Excuse me while I go find some art to heal my eyes with. 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesome400 Posted June 10, 2007 Author Share Posted June 10, 2007 did you guys understand the part of "first drawing" "was bored" "contructive critism only" 1100 total achieved 03/02/09 880thousandth to reach it :P1200 total achieved 29/09/11 1.23millionth to reach it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laikrob Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Being bored is not a valid reason for posting a huge picture, though. Feel free to resize and repost it, but be prepared for people to rate it honestly. Laikrob, Tip.It Moderator You're accusing me of bigotry, how ironic. It's a nice attempt at argument, but your responses are facile and asinine, if not diatribe. Who's arrogant now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 my constructive criticism is that you spend more time on your work, as you may have seen, the gallery members DO appreciate effort. no effort=flames Excuse me while I go find some art to heal my eyes with. you can look at my latest pixel... lol jk Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 Ill give you some critique. Stop before casualties are made. Learn these things. -Anatomy -better line work -Shading -Patience. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 did you guys understand the part of "first drawing" "was bored" "contructive critism only" 1. I highly doubt that you've never drawn before, most little kids draw atleast something... 2. When I'm bored, I draw aswell, but I atleast put some effort into my drawing, I'll pm you some if you would like. 3. Some C/C- Work on your anatomy. 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runescapeloser22 Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 And why is his skin red? :lol: Sunburn... Really... Bad... Sunburn...GAH! :ohnoes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alduron Posted June 10, 2007 Share Posted June 10, 2007 I am going to remind everyone to only post if you have constructive criticism. This is your only warning as further insults will not be tolerated. ~Alduron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Diddy Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 very good try, at least you colored in the lines #-o plan it out better next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
My_Eggs Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 very good try, at least you colored in the lines #-o plan it out better next time. Umm, no, he didn't... 99 HP, Attack, Strength, Defence, Summoning, Ranged, Herblore, Prayer, Agility, Magic, Slayer, Fletching, Fishing, Woodcutting, Mining, and Thieving. Jagex'd out of my untrimmed hp cape on 6/14/2011. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doomy Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 very good try, at least you colored in the lines #-o plan it out better next time. Umm, no, he didn't... Close enought :lol: To everyone elses drawing: .0001/10 To my drawings: 7/10 Doomy edit: I like sheep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heartless619 Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 lol 1/10 to other peoples but to me...8/10 IGNORE THESE FOUR WORDS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomdavies90 Posted June 11, 2007 Share Posted June 11, 2007 i love the look of sadness in his face, almost as though he knows he's a disfigured freak, i love the way you've used minimalist shapes for the staffs, the perfect colours, and positioning of the legs, i love the way his feet appear to be made of cookies, i love the way he has little hands like the man out of Scary Movie 2, i love the way you have used the worst felt tips in the world, and still managed to give the robes such a textured look. Nah just kidding, the only thing i really love is the way you can see rubber marks...he actually...changed stuff...to get the desired result he wanted....which..urr...still sucks... Sig by me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 What Dharockslayer said. Have patience and put some more effort into it before posting it... :roll: pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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