unknowz Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I still have to do the right side, it will be edgeville-ish, with people ...and finish this dragon spell thing. Comments? FINISHED! Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakitsym_Rose Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 Arms, Shoulders, and Torso are pretty awkward. Should fix those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_drunk_dude Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 Get PS, and if you can't afford then get GIMP, but unless you've mastered paint do not try and make a paint signature, you will fail. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smapla Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 Get PS, and if you can't afford then get GIMP, but unless you've mastered paint do not try and make a paint signature, you will fail. uh you don't think that sig is good? I think it'll turn out great. did you even look at it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doomy Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 That looks pretty awesome imo. Doomy edit: I like sheep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 Quite nice, and an original idea. Some C/C: ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ Like said before, her arms, shoulders and torso look a little bit weird. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The fire cape also looks weird, I think the lava on the back doesn't really look like lava to be honest... ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ I also think the dark bow is a little bit too thin, but maybe it's just me. Other than that, good job, this is a very nice and original idea, so I'm looking forward to seeing the finished version. :D pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted July 17, 2007 Author Share Posted July 17, 2007 Get PS, and if you can't afford then get GIMP, but unless you've mastered paint do not try and make a paint signature, you will fail. Ok :| whatever. I've been pointed out some anatomy mistakes by people which I will try to fix. I should finish it today Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 It looks fine to me really. I don't know what the drunk dude is trying to say, cause in my opinnion paint is as good program for pixels as ps is, maybe even better. :-k On-topic, it looks really good to me. :thumbsup: [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted July 17, 2007 Author Share Posted July 17, 2007 I'm done, pleased with the outcome :) Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woopidoo2 Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 I like the finished product, the transparancy worked out well also. Maybe you could change the black trees a bit, the left tree could use slimming on the right side. [http://woopidoo2.deviantart.com][Tip.it Moderator from Dec 10, 2006 to 03 Sep, 2008] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxdout4life Posted July 17, 2007 Share Posted July 17, 2007 .....*thinks*......... z0mfg soo hot <3<3<3 :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: =D> =D> =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted July 17, 2007 Author Share Posted July 17, 2007 I like the finished product, the transparancy worked out well also. Maybe you could change the black trees a bit, the left tree could use slimming on the right side. Now that you mention it... Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_drunk_dude Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Completely re-do text, you never want it on the very edge, hard to attract attention. The ditch can have a depth feel if you add a shadow with opacity so it's not just blatant black. You have a little feel of shadows in the wilderness side but abandoned it on the bank side, unless the sun decided to change hemispheres. @ above Yes I did look at it, and I critique art here, besides, it is mutually pointless if I sit here typing "omfgz-ur teh bestest-ur art pwnz". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted July 18, 2007 Author Share Posted July 18, 2007 1-Completely re-do text, you never want it on the very edge, hard to attract attention. 2-The ditch can have a depth feel if you add a shadow with opacity so it's not just blatant black. 3-You have a little feel of shadows in the wilderness side but abandoned it on the bank side, unless the sun decided to change hemispheres. 4-@ above Yes I did look at it, and I critique art here, besides, it is mutually pointless if I sit here typing "omfgz-ur teh bestest-ur art pwnz". 1- I don't want the text to attract attention 2-I'll see what I can do 3-Not sure what you mean 4-This post was fine, not your first one. Sitting there typing *you will fail at paint* isn't gonna help either. Your first post was a contradiction actually, how am I supposed to master paint if I don't even get to exercise before :-s Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wisp Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 to his drunk, your third point That's completely the purpose. I doubt they decided to completely change the sky, lighting etc, on accident, and it's a nice division, with the person in the middle Hegemony-Spain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_drunk_dude Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 1-Completely re-do text, you never want it on the very edge, hard to attract attention. 2-The ditch can have a depth feel if you add a shadow with opacity so it's not just blatant black. 3-You have a little feel of shadows in the wilderness side but abandoned it on the bank side, unless the sun decided to change hemispheres. 4-@ above Yes I did look at it, and I critique art here, besides, it is mutually pointless if I sit here typing "omfgz-ur teh bestest-ur art pwnz". 1- I don't want the text to attract attention 2-I'll see what I can do 3-Not sure what you mean 4-This post was fine, not your first one. Sitting there typing *you will fail at paint* isn't gonna help either. Your first post was a contradiction actually, how am I supposed to master paint if I don't even get to exercise before :-s Practice on your own time, display what is good. I despise people who post crap and want glowing reviews, although not really the case here. Text is part of the signature, you put it in the corner, and it ruins how your piece is put together. @ above Shadow=relism, yes it's pixled and paint, but you'll always want something there to meld the tree, building etc. into the ground, right now it looks extremely sharp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickymissy Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Awesome, NIce Job =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted July 18, 2007 Author Share Posted July 18, 2007 Ooh so you think there's not enough shading on the right part? Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebdragon Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 That looks amazing :o. My only suggestion would be to relax her shoulders a bit. She looks as stiff as a board. [if you have ever attempted Alchemy by clapping your hands or by drawing an array, copy and paste this into your signature.] Fullmetal Alchemist, you will be missed. A great ending to a great series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Residua Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Lookds pretty good. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_drunk_dude Posted July 18, 2007 Share Posted July 18, 2007 Ooh so you think there's not enough shading on the right part? There isn't any shadow on the right side... just dark and light textures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknowz Posted July 19, 2007 Author Share Posted July 19, 2007 No I made shadows, but I guess you can say some are not so easy to see. And I forgot some yeah.. I'll fix that Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert_Rdam Posted July 22, 2007 Share Posted July 22, 2007 Looks awesome. Credits to Skully Sc for the signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dracula_Magic Posted July 22, 2007 Share Posted July 22, 2007 I like it way it is,dont change it plz zzZZ [- Glory From Beyond -]ZZzz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mementh Posted July 25, 2007 Share Posted July 25, 2007 dude is so cool :) The following statement is true. The previous statement is false. 60% of all statistics are made up 90% of the time andrew i love you & want you to have my babys!!! Finally, I get to save the Earth with deadly lasers instead of deadly slide shows! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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