I still have to do the right side, it will be edgeville-ish, with people

 

...and finish this dragon spell thing.

 

Comments?

 

 

 

FINISHED!

 

Arms, Shoulders, and Torso are pretty awkward. Should fix those.

Get PS, and if you can't afford then get GIMP, but unless you've mastered paint do not try and make a paint signature, you will fail.

Get PS, and if you can't afford then get GIMP, but unless you've mastered paint do not try and make a paint signature, you will fail.

 

 

 

uh you don't think that sig is good? I think it'll turn out great. did you even look at it?

That looks pretty awesome imo.

Quite nice, and an original idea.

 

 

 

Some C/C:

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ Like said before, her arms, shoulders and torso look a little bit weird.

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The fire cape also looks weird, I think the lava on the back doesn't really look like lava to be honest...

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ I also think the dark bow is a little bit too thin, but maybe it's just me.

 

 

 

Other than that, good job, this is a very nice and original idea, so I'm looking forward to seeing the finished version. :D

Get PS, and if you can't afford then get GIMP, but unless you've mastered paint do not try and make a paint signature, you will fail.

 

 

 

Ok :| whatever.

 

 

 

I've been pointed out some anatomy mistakes by people which I will try to fix. I should finish it today

It looks fine to me really. I don't know what the drunk dude is trying to say, cause in my opinnion paint is as good program for pixels as ps is, maybe even better. :-k

 

 

 

On-topic, it looks really good to me. :thumbsup:

I'm done, pleased with the outcome :)

I like the finished product, the transparancy worked out well also.

 

 

 

Maybe you could change the black trees a bit, the left tree could use slimming on the right side.

.....*thinks*.........

 

 

 

 

 

z0mfg soo hot <3<3<3 :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: =D> =D> =D>

I like the finished product, the transparancy worked out well also.

 

 

 

Maybe you could change the black trees a bit, the left tree could use slimming on the right side.

 

Now that you mention it...

Completely re-do text, you never want it on the very edge, hard to attract attention. The ditch can have a depth feel if you add a shadow with opacity so it's not just blatant black. You have a little feel of shadows in the wilderness side but abandoned it on the bank side, unless the sun decided to change hemispheres.

 

 

 

@ above

 

Yes I did look at it, and I critique art here, besides, it is mutually pointless if I sit here typing "omfgz-ur teh bestest-ur art pwnz".

1-Completely re-do text, you never want it on the very edge, hard to attract attention.

 

2-The ditch can have a depth feel if you add a shadow with opacity so it's not just blatant black.

 

3-You have a little feel of shadows in the wilderness side but abandoned it on the bank side, unless the sun decided to change hemispheres.

 

 

 

4-@ above

 

Yes I did look at it, and I critique art here, besides, it is mutually pointless if I sit here typing "omfgz-ur teh bestest-ur art pwnz".

 

 

 

1- I don't want the text to attract attention

 

2-I'll see what I can do

 

3-Not sure what you mean

 

 

 

4-This post was fine, not your first one. Sitting there typing *you will fail at paint* isn't gonna help either.

 

Your first post was a contradiction actually, how am I supposed to master paint if I don't even get to exercise before :-s

to his drunk, your third point

 

That's completely the purpose. I doubt they decided to completely change the sky, lighting etc, on accident, and it's a nice division, with the person in the middle

1-Completely re-do text, you never want it on the very edge, hard to attract attention.

 

2-The ditch can have a depth feel if you add a shadow with opacity so it's not just blatant black.

 

3-You have a little feel of shadows in the wilderness side but abandoned it on the bank side, unless the sun decided to change hemispheres.

 

 

 

4-@ above

 

Yes I did look at it, and I critique art here, besides, it is mutually pointless if I sit here typing "omfgz-ur teh bestest-ur art pwnz".

 

 

 

1- I don't want the text to attract attention

 

2-I'll see what I can do

 

3-Not sure what you mean

 

 

 

4-This post was fine, not your first one. Sitting there typing *you will fail at paint* isn't gonna help either.

 

Your first post was a contradiction actually, how am I supposed to master paint if I don't even get to exercise before :-s

 

Practice on your own time, display what is good. I despise people who post crap and want glowing reviews, although not really the case here.

 

 

 

Text is part of the signature, you put it in the corner, and it ruins how your piece is put together.

 

 

 

@ above

 

Shadow=relism, yes it's pixled and paint, but you'll always want something there to meld the tree, building etc. into the ground, right now it looks extremely sharp.

Awesome, NIce Job =D>

Ooh so you think there's not enough shading on the right part?

That looks amazing :o.

 

 

 

My only suggestion would be to relax her shoulders a bit. She looks as stiff as a board.

Lookds pretty good. :)

Ooh so you think there's not enough shading on the right part?

 

There isn't any shadow on the right side... just dark and light textures.

No I made shadows, but I guess you can say some are not so easy to see.

 

And I forgot some yeah..

 

I'll fix that

Looks awesome.

I like it way it is,dont change it plz

dude is so cool :)