everybody was mad cuz noob is dead and then i bring him back and no one says yay or something on those lines? Come on, i know you people are happy that he is back and the king of hell.

can you all say hell yeah? It is time for the end of the necromancer saga.

 

 

 

CHAPTER 10: A NECROMANCER'S DOWNFALL

 

 

 

Snake watched as Archimage woke up and turned around to look at Snake. Arhimages once brilliantly white teeth were covered in blood. Archimage smiled at Snake and died. Snake yelled. He suddenly broke the shackles that held him onto the table he was lying on.

 

 

 

Snake had no weapons on him. He just ran out of sheer anger at the necromancer. They both flew over Archimages limp body and onto the floor. Snake continues to beat on the necromancer, only to see that in the necromancers place, there was now a shade. The shade pulled a knife out of his cloak and sliced at Snake. Snake barely dodged it and it sliced some skin from the top of his shoulder.

 

 

 

Suddenly, Noob appeared. He saw Snake fighting with the shade and with a fling of his hand, the shade was gone.

 

 

 

"Man it rocks to be a god!" he said.

 

 

 

The necromancer ran into the room and pulled off his hood. Noob screamed.

 

 

 

"Oh my...well I am a god so...Oh my me!"

 

 

 

Noob puked all over the red carpet.

 

 

 

"My lord, you do not look right. The prophecy shows you with a beard..."

 

 

 

"I will change your face before I talk to you." Noob waved his hand and the necromancer's face was a handsome guys face.

 

 

 

"Now then what have you to ask of me?" asked the necromancer.

 

 

 

"Hay, necromancer!" The necromancer looked at Snake.

 

 

 

"What?"

 

 

 

"Archimage was not the sacrifice."

 

 

 

"What?"

 

 

 

"He fooled you..."

 

 

 

"How?"

 

 

 

"While I was being dragged away, Archimage mind contacted me. It is one of his specialties, and I told him everything."

 

 

 

"Then who is this imbecile?"

 

 

 

"Me." Archimage morphed from Noob to himself.

 

 

 

"Nice acting, and nice magic." Snake said.

 

 

 

"Thanks. Anyway, I made a clone of myself using magic, made the shade disappear using a teleport spell..."

 

 

 

"Where is he now?" asked the necromancer.

 

 

 

"Somewhere in the wild getting killed. And I made your face change using magic to."

 

 

 

"I will kill you for fooling me!" Archimage watched the necromancer run at him. He then side stepped out of the way. Suddenly, there was a flash and the real noob appeared.

 

 

 

"You want to kill Snake and Archimage?"

 

 

 

"Yes."

 

 

 

"Snake..." Noob threw the sword of Zamorack to Snake, the god sword some called it. Snake then ran at the necromancer and toucked him gently with the tip of the sword. What would have been an indentation to the skin started swelling up. His whole body swelled up and the necromancer exploded. Blood was everywhere.

 

 

 

"Noob?" Asked Snake.

 

 

 

"What?"

 

 

 

"Have fun with him when he becomes a gladiator for you."

 

 

 

"O.K."

 

 

 

Noob disappeared and Snakes new sword suddenly became smaller and smaller. It then disappeared.

 

 

 

All the shades in Falador disappeared. All the slaves were freed and reconstruction began. Snake only had one question to ask after the battle.

 

 

 

"Why were the shades out during the day?"

 

 

 

The answer would not be know until the uprising of Zamorack, which was only two weeks away.

 

 

 

 

 

Noob sat on his gold chair and watched the armor plated necromancer fight a demon. He laughed. It was funny to watch. Noob was now the king of hell and had powers beyond no others. But suddenly, as he was watching the fight, he was whisked away to a cloud where Guthix and Saradomin were sitting and watching a crystal ball.

 

 

 

"You, Noob, must prepare..." said Guthix.

 

 

 

 

 

Snake was sleeping in the varrock inn when he heard a shrill scream. A scream that he had heard years ago, when he was almost killed by his father. He went outside and saw that Susan Ganda was being beat up by thieves.When she saw him a tear of joy fell from her eye. My boyfriend, she thought.

 

 

 

 

 

Archimage was heading back to the lost library. When he got there, an old man greeted him and suddenly plunged his hand into Archimages stomach.

 

 

 

"You are old enough now for the test. You took a test a long time ago, as a 20 year old, but the time has come to see if you are truly powerful and wise enough to be a keeper of the books." The voice came from his mind.

 

 

 

"What was the test when I was a child?"

 

 

 

"A test we give to people before they enter and become apprentices, a novice test."

 

 

 

"THAT WAS A NOVICE TEST?" Archimage was stunned. The last test he took was the scariest thing ever.

 

 

 

"Yes, now then we will jump you to the master test, lets delve into your past first and remember the HAPPY days you had before you entered the library." He put a sarcastic tone to the word happy.

 

 

 

"No...I do not want to remember. NO!"

 

 

 

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED

 

 

 

Let me start by saying we will get through Archimages storyline then work to Snakes, which will interconnect with Noobs story and then I hinted an uprising of Zammy. That will be after these storylines... 2 chapters a day now, one for Snake and Noob and one for Archimage...Previews:

 

 

 

chapter 11:Snake finds his old girlfriend and she turns out to be engaged to Reldo...and also, when will the tournament come back?

 

 

 

chapter 12:the early years of Archimages life are told, and they are a lot different than you think...

Man! I this story! Its the best online story I've ever read!

 

 

 

10/10 :thumbsup:

 

 

 

Keep writing \

 

 

 

Oh.. and sheathed means to put it back in its sheath, the word you want is unsheathed or drew... :D

YAY!! NOOBS ALIVE!

 

GO NOOB!!!

 

 

 

[hide=Places I do not wish to go]

 

1. Wildy

 

2. Duel Arena

 

3. Noob's Hell

 

4. Chick Flick :mrgreen:

 

...[/hide]

 

Hehe :thumbsup:

Man! I this story! Its the best online story I've ever read!

 

 

 

10/10 :thumbsup:

 

 

 

Keep writing \

 

 

 

Oh.. and sheathed means to put it back in its sheath, the word you want is unsheathed or drew... :D

 

 

 

Lol...I will not use sheathed...ty for the help. Anyway, Thanks for liking my story....new chapters today. Like i said two new chapters a day to get through the new story arcs in at least a week in a half. Then, more brutal violence as the zammy's uprise against noob. And let me say thanks to all my loyal fans. It may not be the best story But i still think it will work. :D

Due to people liking my story so much...I will continue to write as much as I can. I know it will be sad when i give up but on a happy note, lots more on the way and congrats to me on 25 chapters of Snake and Noob (counting the originals and newspaper article ones and the new ones.) Now it is time for a special 25th chapter treat, Archimages past told! Here we go and thanks to Archimage A for allowing me to mess his character up.(Just kidding, it did take me awhile to come up with an interesting childhood for you.)

 

 

 

CHAPTER 11:ARCHIMAGES PAST PART 1

 

 

 

Blake woke from his sleep. He was seven years old. He was having nightmares about his mother, about his dad. He got out of his bedroll and opened the flap to his leather tent. He exited. Blake was in the thieves training grounds. Blake was a thief. He was also a mage. Thieves hated anyone who used magic, but not Blake. He was somewhat loved by some people in the camp.

 

 

 

Blake's father was a notorious thief. A leader of a cult who thought that museums were hogging all the valuables in the land. His father became the biggest thief in Runescape. When he was caught and hung, the thieves of the land were in an uproar. The war of thieves began.

 

 

 

Blake was born right after the war was declared. He was born to the king of Varrock's daughter. When the king asked who the father was when the baby was born,his daughter proudly declared:

 

 

 

"The best thief in the land, George Karrel."

 

 

 

The daughter was hung. The king could not tolerate his only daughter losing her virginity to a thief. It was not right. Anyway, the law stated that any association with thieves was forbidden.

 

 

 

Blake was hiding in his mothers house when he was found by thieves, raiding the house for all of George's things. They took him as one of their own. He lived in the thieves camp ever since.

 

 

 

Blake was somehow adept at doing magic. He learned how good he was at magic in Varrock. He met a magician on the street, passing by him. The magician stopped specifically to tell him he had a weird sort of aura around him.The magician then said to practice magic for someday he would be a fine mage someday.

 

 

 

Thats when Blake started learning magic. He loved it. The thieves resented it though.

 

 

 

Blake saw the leader of their camp sitting in front of a bonfire.

 

 

 

"Blake?" The leader turned from his battered book and gave a cold glance to Blake.

 

 

 

"Yes sir. It is I."

 

 

 

"You know, I really don't see the point of you being in this camp. You are a terrible thief."

 

 

 

"I will get better as I master magic. I will be the first magician thief."

 

 

 

"That is funny, do you think you will be as good as your father?"

 

 

 

"I'll be better."

 

 

 

"You are the most pathetic excuse for a thieve ever!"

 

 

 

The leader took a knife out from inside his brown cloak.

 

 

 

"The only reason we keep you is because your father said in his will to keep you with the thieves. Then you meet that magician and you get in your mind that you will be a great thief because of your magic skills. We don't need you! Screw your father!"

 

 

 

The leader lunged at Blake. Blake side stepped and kicked him in the stomach. The leader screamed as he lost his balance and fell into the bonfire. He writhed in pain as his screams echoed through the camp. His flesh burned to the bone. The last thing he did was flick Blake off. The whole camp had heard the scream and surrounded the fire.

 

 

 

They stared at their leaders burning body, and Blake, who was wide eyed and thought he was dead.

 

 

 

"You killed the leader at seven?"

 

 

 

"Your father killed the leader at age thirteen! You are now the camps new leader!"

 

 

 

"Such a kill! And so young."

 

 

 

"You don't get it! I did not kill him intentionally! it is a misunderstanding!! I tried to protect myself and..." Blake was cut off.

 

 

 

"Our new leader!"

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Blake was sixteen. He was still leader. And it was time to take the test of manhood. Blake had been doing small tasks such as stealing from rich peoples purses. Now though, the biggest test was about to begin for Blake.

 

 

 

He stood before the thief elders. Four people who were as old as dirt, but as sly as a fox.

 

 

 

"Your task leader, is to steal the shield of the hero Arrav from the Varrock museum."

 

 

 

Blake bowed his head low."I accept this task."

 

 

 

The elders dismissed and went their separate ways. The elder known as Crulis walked up to Blake and whspered:

 

 

 

"Its a suicide mission. Get caught and your screwed."

 

 

 

"I wont get caught."

 

 

 

"Might see you again." The old man walked off.

 

 

 

Blake changed from his thief clothes to his civilian clothes. He then went to Varrock and took the side street to the museum. He got a map from the information desk and went upstairs to the history section of the museum. The shield glinted from the afternoon sunlight, coming through the window. He marked on his map where it was and all the windows were. The possible spots that security orbs would be placed was also marked on his map. magic security orbs activated at night and taped what was going on. All security personel would be upstairs watching through magic balls. In the palace, guards would also be watching them.

 

 

 

Blake left the museum and went back to the thief camp. It was time to figure out some possible ways to steal the shield.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Darkness engulfed the land fast. Blake was hiding in the weapons shop.The weapon shop owner told Blake he was shutting down for the night. Blake left, and entered a dark alley. He changed into his dark colored thief clothes and walked to the southern wall of the museum.On the third floor, a window was open. Good.

 

 

 

Blake took a grappling hook and threw it through the window. He scaled the attached rope and crouched on the window sill. Blake jumped down and saw that the guards noticed him. One charged at him. Blake ducked and flung the guard out of the window. A nasty splat was heard. Four down.

 

 

 

Two more guards ran at Blake. Blake used a fire spell and they burned like a pyre. The last two tried to run away. An air spell sent them into the wall with a bone shattering crash. The guards slumped to the floor.

 

 

 

Blake took the stairs two at a time, until he cam to the second floor. The shield was still in the same glass case. Two security orbs were on this floor. Blake uttered a spell and twin bolts of lightning struck the orbs, blowing them up. The coast was clear.

 

 

 

Blake ran to the glass case and searched it for traps. Blake saw poison spouts. These would be simple to deactivate. Blake took a sharp knife from the inside of his boot and cut the metallic box that held the shield on top. He carefully cut some wires and took the bottle of poison that was hooked to the wires.

 

 

 

Blake stuffed the poison into his rucksack,tied to his bely. He then took off the glass covering the shield. It was all his.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

The king of Varrock was awoke from his deep slumber. He heard a small siren go off. As he got out of bed, he woke up his wife. She too, left the bed to see what the problem was. Guards huddled together, watching a crystal ball, now put on the kings marble, dining room table. A lightning strike seemed to hit the inside of the ball and then all that was seen in the ball was darkness.

 

 

 

The king saw this and then saw that it was footage from the museum. He told his guards to go to the museum and search for the thief. The guards rushed. They saw that the shield of Arrav was missing and two guards slumped on the wall, dead. Someone yelled from outside and the guards saw a bloody mess on the pavement. Twin piles of ashes were also found. But no thief.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

The soon to be Archimage ran away from Varrock laughing, not knowing what fate had in store for him and the shield.

 

 

 

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED

 

 

 

How about that? Was that good? Snake and Noobs storyline up later, do not miss that!

150 posts. I am gonna have so many soon...anyways...new chapter later tonight...probably after my wife tells me that I am allowed to have my chains removed and quit watching "Who wants to be a superhero?"

 

 

 

I like comics...but not ones based after geeky guys who think they are cool because they run around wearing spandex.

CHAPTER 12: SNAKE'S GIRLFRIEND

 

 

 

Snake saw the beefy looking guy try to steal Susan's purse. He got it and ran down the alley. Snake ran after him.

 

 

 

The guy took all the alleys he could. Snake eventually was getting so sick of the chase that he took a bounding leap and landed on a building. Following him was a lot easier now. Snake took another leap and landed on the guy. One of his ribs cracked when Snake pushed him to the ground. Snake grabbed the purse and walked off. The guy made an attempt to throw a knife at Snake but Susan's high heels crushed his hand.

 

 

 

"Thanks." Snake backtracked and handed her her purse.

 

 

 

"Come on, we can go tell the king of your heroism!"

 

 

 

"Why tell the king?"

 

 

 

"Because he is my boyfriend"

 

 

 

Snakes head drooped low. Reldo. He could not believe he took his girlfriend. The one Snake risked his life to save. He could feel tears, the first tears he had felt in years, well up in his eye.

 

 

 

"Take me to him."

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Snake sat at the marble dining table. Reldo had a steaming cup of tea in front of him while Snake had a glass of wine. Snake needed a drink. Something stronger than this.

 

 

 

"Whats the problem Snake?" Reldo asked.

 

 

 

"You." It was the only reply Snake could think of. Susan walked in. Her blond hair down to her shoulder and her baby blue eyes would keep you staring at her for a long time.

 

 

 

"Snake, whats the problem?"

 

 

 

"You took my girlfriend from me."

 

 

 

"She thought you were dead..."

 

 

 

"So the funeral...The funeral that I attended to declare I was alive...you were not there." Anger was taking over. This would not turn out good.

 

 

 

"There were other plans...more important..."Susan was cut off.

 

 

 

"What could be more important than the funeral of your boyfriend, who took a gaping wound for you to survive...from his own father..."

 

 

 

Snake could not comprehend what he was saying. He was to mad. Anger leads to fear. An old saying. It was his fear that his girlfriend hated him the whole time.

 

 

 

"Why did you like me Susan? Why were we together for so long?"

 

 

 

"Because...because." Tears were streaming down her cheeks. Reldo watched them cry. He acted like none of this bothered him.

 

 

 

"Why would I marry someone who's father is a god and resent our marriage? And to make sure that we don't get married, kill me."

 

 

 

"But it was me who got hurt. You ran, never came back. You liked me because I had power, was well respected..."

 

 

 

"Snake you are going to far!" Reldo finally put something into the conversation, or the emotional breakdown, whatever you want to call it.

 

 

 

"You are one to talk.We were friends! Best friends. And you go and start dating my girlfriend..." Snake got up from his chair. He walked for Susan.

 

 

 

"What the hell are you doing Snake?" Reldo got up and grabbed Snakes arm. Snake shook him off and punched his gut. Blood seemed to seep out of Reldo's mouth. Susan screamed a shrill scream that woke some of the guards. They ran in to see Snake strangling Susan and the king coughing up blood.

 

 

 

SNAP!

 

 

 

The final straw. Reldo got up. Snake dropped the limp body and watched as his former best friend took out a knife. He wiped the blood from his lips on his white button up. The guards grabbed Snake and held him.

 

 

 

"Blood stains are hard to get out." Snake said this coolly.

 

 

 

"But death is impossible to get out." Reldo walked up to Snake and stabbed him. Blood seeped into his clothes. The stain grew more and more.

 

 

 

"You happy?" asked Snake.

 

 

 

"A death for a death..." Reldo was stunned when Snake threw all the guards behind him onto him. The knife was pulled down. Snake screamed. He pulled it out, just in time for everyone of the guards and Reldo to get up. More guards came and Snake was quickly seized and thrown in a prison cell downstairs. His wounds were healing quickly. Must be an effect of being half hellhound he thought.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Noob stared at the giant,white bearded Guthix and Saradomin.

 

 

 

"Let me ask you this Noob. What are you doing to torture the evil?" asked Guthix.

 

 

 

"Putting them in gladiator suits and making them fight!"

 

 

 

"Hay, that is a good idea." Said Saradomin.

 

 

 

"Heh...thanks."

 

 

 

"Oh, no problem I mean, I can see the road signs in heaven now, "you are now entering hell, home of the evil souls gladiator matches".

 

 

 

"Oh my me....you have to be kidding." said Guthix.

 

 

 

TO BE CONTINUED

 

 

 

Tomorrow:

 

 

 

CHAPTER 13:Archimage is a loner, who stumbles upon the place, where he will reincarnate into the greatest wizard ever.

 

 

 

CHAPTER 14:Snake is about to be hung, but he has a plan to escape...can he pull it off?

Hey Ratchet, In the story, if you mention Blue Jay he now uses a dragon long :mrgreen:

 

 

 

EDIT: Got post 100 on your story :)

Hey Ratchet, In the story, if you mention Blue Jay he now uses a dragon long :mrgreen:

 

 

 

EDIT: Got post 100 on your story :)

 

 

 

kool. I may include you someday, but at the moment as you can see there is not much room for the noob policeman. Archimages story arc has already been written out and Snakes is almost done...You will probably be used for something after these two story arcs. I swear.

When Archimage comes back he is gonna have a hell of a time writing a long report. It will have Zammy,the necromancer,Snake,Noob the king of hell, local gladiators,with the power of ghost speak SUsan,Reldo,and Archimage. Do that. That would be one hell of a news report and make up for the time you have been gone.

has anybody been reading these stories :?: Please tell me what you people think...

new chapters to be posted this afternoon.

The story totally rocks! It has a cool plot, weird characters, and an aura of raw power, similar to that of powerent's in ShadowBlood. I have middle school, and it's quite time-consuming. I won't be able to post as much, but it's good so far and you should keep going on the story...forever!

CHAPTER 13: ARCHIMAGES PAST PART 2

 

 

 

Blake was back at the camp. Well, what remained of the camp. The camp seemed to have burned down and a large dispute was what seemed to have been the cause. The thieves were in the training ground. When Blake came over to the training grounds people looked stunned to see the shield in his hand.

 

 

 

"What is going on?" Blake asked.

 

 

 

"Those people want to follow the elders instead of you!"

 

 

 

Blake walked over to the people who wanted to follow him.

 

 

 

"Why?"

 

 

 

"They think you are to young and thought you would be caught and killed anyway."

 

 

 

"Well to bad. I wasn't."

 

 

 

One of the elders walked up behind Blake and grabbed the shield from his hand. Blake held it tight and a fight broke out. Everyone was killing each other. The shield broke. The old guy had part and Blake had the other part.

 

 

 

"Black arm gang, come." The old men and some thieves followed the old guy with part of the shield.

 

 

 

"Pheonix gang, follow." Blake followed them into Varrock, where they entered an abandoned house. Blake handed the shield to a young man who was entering the door and walked off.

 

 

 

Blake walked for years. He could not stand the seperation and was sick of being a thief.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

At 20 years old Blake was on the other side of Runescape. He was way south, and on the beach. From the beach, he could see a building, coming out of the water. A circular building. Blake decided to swim out to it.

 

 

 

The swim was long and hard. When he got there a rope was thrown down to him. He grabbed it and was heaved up by an old man.

 

 

 

"Welcome to the lost library." The old man was wearing orange robes.

 

 

 

"Why are you out here?"

 

 

 

"We are not in the ocean, we are everywhere! The lost library IS the space time continuem!"

 

 

 

"You are weird I am leaving..."

 

 

 

"Not so fast...you found this place because you are destined to be a guardian of the library for the rest of eternity!"

 

 

 

"WHAT?" The old man stuck his hand into Blake's stomach. Darkness.

 

 

 

Welcome to the test Archimage.

 

 

 

What did you just call me? Who are you?

 

 

 

I am Jebediah, a guardian of the library. And I called you Archimage.

 

 

 

Why?

 

 

 

Because,the name suits you, your going to be an Archival mage if you pass the test.

 

 

 

What test?

 

 

 

This one.

 

 

 

Archimage was now in an arena. He saw someone, a dark figure appear out of nowhere.

 

 

 

Who are you? He asked.

 

 

 

Xarosen. Your dark side.

 

 

 

You must defeat the evil in you to become a guardian Archimage. The old mans voice said.

 

 

 

A sword was in Archimages hand and he ran at his dark side. He sliced his dark side in half. Xarosen just laughed.

 

 

 

Your hatred for me keeps me alive.

 

 

 

Archimage tried to clear his mind of thoughts. He tried to thing in a good way.

 

 

 

Why are you so mean Xarosen?

 

 

 

Because I am who I am.

 

 

 

But why? Why can't you be nice and not use thievery to get happiness. You have controlled me for so long. Why do you do it?

 

 

 

I thieve for fun.

 

 

 

But all your fun is hurting others.

 

 

 

So?

 

 

 

So, why not be nice and help others.

 

 

 

AUGH, Shut up Archimage!

 

 

 

Why? You have controlled me all these years, why should I shut up to the likes of you?

 

 

 

Because...

 

 

 

Xarosen was gone. The old man's voice said:

 

 

 

Now let us delve into your past. All the terrible times and the thievery. And now that Xarosen was gone, Archimage was able to not do that, to be able to make decisions.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

After his past was seen Blake was reborn into Arcimage, who ended up leaving the library for using it for his own purposes, to talk to his dead mother. Nobody found out about this until Archimage pasts his next test, which was to make a codex bubble. After the test they found out and banned him. He still had his codex bubble, his moms only remaining possession, her diamond ring, and his robes and knowledge he had learned. The people told him to come back in two years, after he had thought hard about why he would contact his mother and if it helped him.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Two years had passed and Archimage had figured out that it was wrong to contact his mother. The test would make him a true guardian of the library. And the next test was to go into his nightmares and face what he worst fears...

 

 

 

To BE CONTINUED

 

 

 

Next chapter: Archimages worst fear may be his downfall, and if he does not pass the master test, he will be killed!

The story totally rocks! It has a cool plot, weird characters, and an aura of raw power, similar to that of powerent's in ShadowBlood. I have middle school, and it's quite time-consuming. I won't be able to post as much, but it's good so far and you should keep going on the story...forever!

 

 

 

Thanks a lot and good luck in middle school. If you need any help with middle school talk to the pro...me. PM me if you have problems with kids making fun of you or anything. I have a lot of tips for you if you do.

has anybody been reading these stories :?: Please tell me what you people think...

 

 

 

Ive been reading it from the first word to the last period. This story, I thought at first, was just going to be another story that has no story line and just about a big 126 who finds a noob, and kills him (yes there are storys like that). So I was surprised. This story rocks and should not be critisised (Archimage ur the exception Because of your bite attack)

 

 

 

So in short, WRITE MORE!!!!

has anybody been reading these stories :?: Please tell me what you people think...

 

 

 

Ive been reading it from the first word to the last period. This story, I thought at first, was just going to be another story that has no story line and just about a big 126 who finds a noob, and kills him (yes there are storys like that). So I was surprised. This story rocks and should not be critisised (Archimage ur the exception Because of your bite attack)

 

 

 

So in short, WRITE MORE!!!!

 

 

 

I will write as much as I can but I am sorry to tell you people, I have a life. After Doctor Who I will write another chapter.

CHAPTER 14: THE ESCAPE

 

 

 

Snake was being dragged out of the castle. Thee guards pulled him all the way to town square, where the gallows were set up. An executioner with a black mask on watched as Snake was pulled up the stairs to the wooden deck.

 

 

 

Snake let the guards put the tied rope over his head and the guards still held on to him as Reldo spoke.

 

 

 

"Snake, you deserve to die! You killed Susan, you attempted to kill me..."

 

 

 

"I could have if your pathetic and stupid guard weren't holding me ba..."

 

 

 

One of the guards punched him in the stomach. Snake was gagging on the tightened rope.

 

 

 

"Goodbye old friend. May Zamorack spare your soul eternal pain and..."

 

 

 

"Zamorack? Ha!" Snake was choking on the rope as he talked.

 

 

 

"Kill him."

 

 

 

Snake saw the man with the black mask over his head pull a lever. The floor under Snake was dropped and he flew down, bouncing as the rope tried to straighten. He was seeing lights, and red. It was time to put his plan into action.

 

 

 

The transformation was quick and before he knew it, Snake the hellhound was running out of the city. The ropes knot was too large for the small head and neck of the hellhound.

 

 

 

Snake ran. And ran. When in Lumbridge, he stopped running. He transformed back to his human form and went to the church. Father Lawrence was rummaging through his gods bible.

 

 

 

"Father."

 

 

 

"Snake? Why are you here? I thought you were to be hung?"

 

 

 

Dammit. Rumors go around to fast.

 

 

 

"No, that was one of Noobs little jokes."

 

 

 

"Where is Noob?"

 

 

 

"Um, lets just say he is not with us at the moment."

 

 

 

"He has died?"

 

 

 

"Well, if you want to put it that way..."

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Guthix looked at Saradomin and Noob.

 

 

 

"As the god of balance I must get rid of one of you imbeciles and put in someone smart."

 

 

 

"You may be god of balance, but I am the god of good." Said Saradomin.

 

 

 

"And I am the god of evil. It evens out."

 

 

 

Guthix looked at them some more. He was about to go crazy.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

The funeral was attended only by a few. Susan was buried in her hometown of Lumbridge. Snake knew nothing about his and ended up being seen by one of Reldo's guards.

 

 

 

Snake ran for it, into the swamp. He took out his dramen staff, his only way to escape this wretched land. He kicked the small sheds door open and was instantly teleported away to one of the only places to see faries.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

The sighting of Snake and his disappearance was related to Reldo. Reldo stared at the guard, wide eyed.

 

 

 

"That is the way into the city of the faries. He told me of his adventure to get a dramen staff and enter the city a long time ago."

 

 

 

"Where is this dramen staff located?"

 

 

 

"That I can't remember."

 

 

 

"Then that does not help."

 

 

 

Reldo walked away from the grave and went to Varrock as fast as he could. He needed to alert everybody in the land of Snake.

 

 

 

****

 

 

 

Snake left the fairy city when the cost was clear. He was going to go to the lost library. It was on the far eastern side of Runescape. That was what Archimage had said.

 

 

 

Snakes walk was about a day. He teleported as much as he could and was not caught or seen by anyone on the way. That night, he was on the beaches and could see a circular place in the middle of the ocean. He swam to it. When he got there a rope was thrown down to him.

 

 

 

He climbed it only to see Archimage face down on the ground with an old guy staring at him and another old man pull up the rope he threw down to Snake.

 

 

 

"Hello Snake, we know much about you and you are needed for Archimage's test."

 

 

 

The old man plunged his hand into Snakes stomach and there was darkness. Then, an arena and Archimage.

 

 

 

Whats going on?

 

 

 

Fighting you is Archimage's worst fear, so we will pit you in a fight.

 

 

 

What the hell are you doing here Snake?

 

 

 

I don't know.

 

 

 

Next chapters:

 

 

 

15:The battle is rough but only one person can win.

 

 

 

16:Snake now guards the lost library. Him and Archimage will use it though, to make everyone forget Snake is an enemy. And the other library guards have a severe punishment for them doing this.

It is the weekend and lord knows if I will have time for some more writing on here this weekend. Maybe will. Depends whats going on tonight and tomorrow.

ARCHIMAGE LIVES!!!!!!

 

 

 

Anyway not news story right this second because this is gonna be just a getting back into it post. Ok then from the top!

 

 

 

Story: I thought the Necromancer was an excellent addtion of the whole state of affairs and it was pretty interesting to have such a character that was sort of Archimage's rival. The demon seal was a good idea, and it made sense of alot of the different elements in the story, and just worked well...On the other hand....Noob returning, ok my fav character, but still it sort of dragged the story from its position an an Epic, to an Epic Comedy. They both are pretty much the same, but it just subtracted from the serouis nature of it all...But then again it was my fault because you probably felt that you had to be serouis to counter balance my comedy...but still. The story worked but perhaps was not the serouis story I wanted...but anyway...

 

 

 

BlueJay, because I love ya I am gonna put you in the next edition of Not the 10 O'clock News.

 

Powerent sorry to hear you have school...but School isn't that bad...Well not always anyway...

 

 

 

Love the god side story, it really makes everything seem more comical and subtracts some of the comic from the serouis of the main story.

 

Blake is an interesting name, not one I would have used because it is not in my repotior but it was a good name and I like it. I like my back story, it really works and I want to know more about my life...

 

 

 

I also share the opinion that comics are ok...but acting like a superhero is like throwing yourself off a building in a cape and underwear on the outside....In the both the sense that it is weird and that they need to come back down to earth....

 

 

 

The whole snake reldo things seems a bit...random, almost a sort of after thought that just connected things...So I felt it sort of ruined the story a bit...But then again as they say "Its come from nothing, so it can go back to nothing and you have't lost anything" not quite at nothing but it was definately a low point in the story.

 

 

 

Anyway looking towards the future and I need to get on because I wasted most of the morning now...So to the Studios!!!!

 

Might be up today or tommrow...depending on the number of crashes being above or below 100...lol(Serouisly)

Welcome back Archimage.

 

 

 

Now let me tell you something.

 

 

 

1. The noob thing was because I did not see Noob being used enough

 

2. There is a secret behind Snakes sudden murder of his old girlfriend and attempted murder of Reldo

 

3. Here is the next chapter

 

 

 

CHAPTER 15: A LITTLE PROBLEM

 

 

 

Snake thought that this was crazy. He was not going to fight his best friend. But the old man had said to him that this was Archimages test and Snake would not be killed, and Archimage would not be killed either.

 

 

 

Snake drew his sword and pointed it at Archimage.

 

 

 

"Sorry if I hurt you to bad." Snake said.

 

 

 

"You won't."

 

 

 

Archimage let Snake lunge at him. Archimage then used his codex bubble on him. Snakes sword cracked on impact with the bubble. Suddenly Snake felt a pain in his stomach. He screamed as blood seeped through his shirt.

 

 

 

"Stop the fight!" Archimage called. The darkness diminished and now Snake was in a rotunda, filled with books. Archimage pulled off his shirt and saw to his horror, that his diamond was not sealed in the demon jewel. It was in small shards, surrounding the jewel like a fort. Blood seeped from the edge of the jewel, like last time.

 

 

 

"Dammit." Archimage must not have sealed it good enough. There was no way to stop the demon now.

 

 

 

"What is going on Archimage?" One of the library guards asked. Archimage pointed at the jewel and the guard understood.

 

 

 

"We need someway to get rid of the jewel." The guard ran up a set of stairs, and entered a long hall hull of books. He picked one up and ran back to Archimage.

 

 

 

The guard flipped through the book until he found the page he wanted. He marked the page and ran to a room full of potions and other magical stuff. He grabbed some stuff and ran out.

 

 

 

"When did it open Snake?" Asked Archimage.

 

 

 

"I don't know, but it almost took me over when I killed my old girlfriend."

 

 

 

"I am back." The guard set all the things he collected down and took a potion from a bag first. He opened it and poured it into the jewel. Snake screamed as the jewel spewed steam out of its crack. The guard then began creating another potion. It had a lot of ingredients to it. When it was finished, the guard took out his staff and plunged it into the crack in the jewel. He yelled a spell and fire started melting the jewel. The potion was then dumped on it, as Snake screamed. The jewel suddenly melted away.

 

 

 

Snake got up and looked at his bare chest, now with a circular scar there instead of the jewel. Snake thanked the guard and took Archimage to a private room to tell him what had been going on. Archimage then said:

 

 

 

"The only way to erase everyones memory of your murder and escape is to use the large crystal ball on the top floor. But, it will get us banned from the library. I would like to leave. I like being able to hang out with you. I don't want to spend an eternity guarding a library."

 

 

 

"Good, because I want to be able to go to the mainland and not get killed."

Frame 44...the world and its wife has been talking to me...not least of all because of the holiday...But I am getting there...and it only crashed a few times...

 

Anyway I understand the points...just sort of felt Noob took away from the story. Anyway I am interested to see what will happen next, and tired from working all day, so nice short reply...waiting on the completion of my next master peice movie. It will have sound!!!! and some of the graphics will be better than Runescape Graphics I have used so far...Well one or two anyway...

Frame 44...the world and its wife has been talking to me...not least of all because of the holiday...But I am getting there...and it only crashed a few times...

 

Anyway I understand the points...just sort of felt Noob took away from the story. Anyway I am interested to see what will happen next, and tired from working all day, so nice short reply...waiting on the completion of my next master peice movie. It will have sound!!!! and some of the graphics will be better than Runescape Graphics I have used so far...Well one or two anyway...

 

 

 

Whens it come out? I cant wait to see what you have done. And I am sorry if Noob is not to your liking anymore but he will return as a real person afterwhile. How? That is something that you will have to read and find out!

BlueJay, because I love ya I am gonna put you in the next edition of Not the 10 O'clock News.

 

First of all: Archimage is back!! YAY

 

Second: Sweet im gonna be in the Not the 10 O'clock News :D

 

Third: Remind me to get a password I can remember, I've sent 5 requests to change it :-k :-k Thats why I haven' been replying quickly to new post here.

 

And finally: Hope to see the new graphics soon :thumbsup: