:: Lone Fighter

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One with background one without it. The background is dodgy, because RS isn't working for me, and I was too lazy to draw a background so I took a random screenshot from google. XD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Girl in MS Paint, background in Adobe Photoshop. n___n

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I already know a couple of faults, but please rate the one without the background, cause the backgrouns sucks. XD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rate and cc please!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

New pic (old, from half a year ago or so):

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tenshi-chan

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tenshi-chan

If that is MS Paint that is truly amazing :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Only thing is the hand and the sword looks a bit weird :P

OWNS PLSSSS?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Very nice, only issue I really have with it is the sword is kinda messed up, cant tell if its a fat shortsword or a small 2hander. Lovely.

I rate it 1337/10 I like it...

wen eva i scroll thro these media boards i hardly eva post on a thread, i just like to look at stuff without comment... but i cudnt help myself... that looks absoluetly amazing, if you wud spend the hours to make a good bg then it wud be pure ownage... but its up to you great work anyway!

looks good still the background was stolen so 7/10 for 2nd 7.5/10 for first i dont like the sword and the outline looks horrible mainly on the legs and stomach

yeah the outline is rough

 

 

 

did u zoom in or something

 

 

 

but the sword is really weird

 

 

 

it doesnt look sharp

wow thats really nice :D the shading on it is awsome

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

gj :D

Yeah the sword is too short.

Nice one. 8) And no, the sword isn't too small, it's just perfect for girls.

the handle of the sword is to thin, it would break off on that sword, the end of the sword is to stump , not good for fighting.

 

 

 

the rest is amazing nice colors, a bit of a short skirt , but hey thats anime..

Well, the edges are really jagged, you should try some anti-aliasing and the breasts are a tad bit saggy. Other than that [and the sword, its to blunt] its pretty good.

the perspective on the stomach seems a bit off, I hate black lines, and I wonder if that's realyl how a shirt falls...those are my crits, but all-in-all it's a nice piece, ver ygood shading on it, and a quite good feel for anatomy. why haven't you made anytihng here before?

Other than what people said before and the fact that there's no head, it looks good.

i have serious doubts of how she holds the sword with that hand aswell

The only thing I really wonder about are the highlights on the blade. Otherwise nice work. And come around more often :) What does RSC have that we don't anyway? lol. (ok, maybe firefreek, and occassionally trunks, just get them back over here).

the sword isn't too small, it's just perfect for girls.

Excuse me?

Great shading and drawing, but like the others said, the sword is serriously messed up :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Perhaps a smaller... more Sabre type weapon or a Japanese weapon of some sort (a katana would look great) would be better? :)

The only thing I really wonder about are the highlights on the blade. Otherwise nice work. And come around more often :) What does RSC have that we don't anyway? lol. (ok, maybe firefreek, and occassionally trunks, just get them back over here).

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It has people I know now O___O Starting on a new board is so hard...plus I just got CL of graphics discussion =3 I think I'll stay there for a 'lil while longer, definitely XD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But yeah, I suck at folds, hence the hastily stuck on folds everywhere XD People have commented on the sword, and told me to put in one of my other designs, and not a big fat old thing like that XD But my response was always "thanks, but I'm way too lazy" XD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Umm, the "no head" was actually to give it a darker feeling, if that makes sense. Eyeless people in my eyes seem to be mysterious, and like they have some dark secret. =) Also, it was going to be put in a contest scene, but it kind of died, so I finished her off and didn't do the background. XD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tenshi-chan

i think its sexy

I really Like it. I know I wouldn't be able to make anything like it, especially not in MS paint. I have no room to critisize and if I did it would just be repeating what was already said. SO I'll leave the critisizing to others and Just Applaud your work. Well done!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

For me when drawing I have certain things I cannot draw very well,

 

 

 

such as feet and Hands. So I usually try to Hide them some way until I can do them better. Which I practice seperately and not on the piece itself. It seems your hiding the hand and not showing much detail. thats what brought up what I just said. :D Oh and No feet! lol. Not that I have a problem with it. I was just wondering if you did it for the same reasons I do... :D

I, for one, quite liked the sword and the hand. It's the type of art I like so my opinion is a bit biased. :P

Omg. ur too great in that.

 

 

 

Good luck with your other works.

 

 

 

10/10

I like the first pic more than the second one, I guess the white and black areas clash quite well. Very good control of the linework, the shading also follows the three dimensionality and texture of everything instead of being random or arbitrary. Cool that it was done in Paint, shows how the best things can be drawn from the simplest of tools. Hope to see more of your work. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

X-man

How can you make that in MS Paint???????????????? Can someone tell me?