Dharockslayer Posted November 12, 2007 Share Posted November 12, 2007 Its a girl in the woods :P . Spend about 5 hours on the face, and far too little on the background >.< Commence commenting : Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaff2 Posted November 12, 2007 Share Posted November 12, 2007 i dont think the trees look right. they look funy the path is way to thin and as it get further away, you put no detail into anything. also, the shadow of the person doesnt seem right i like the person though 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted November 12, 2007 Share Posted November 12, 2007 I agree with Yaff, I like the person. Though, I'm not really fond of the BG. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The trees look a bit weird. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The grass looks unrealistic. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãââ The leaves of the trees in the background don't seem to have much detail. I do like the colours you used though. :) Sorry if I sound a little harsh, but I just don't think this is your best piece. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted November 12, 2007 Author Share Posted November 12, 2007 yeah, I know, I started out really good with the face, then I kinda rushed the background :? . First time trying to make a pine tree bark, really hard apearantly >.< . I should work on my grass too. I liked the path though, but thats probably just me. Critism can never be too harsh, I know Ive made far better pieces. But I really wanted to just get it over with. After all its a hobby, I don't earn anything from it and its my own free time. If it starts lacking fun, then there isnt really a reason to continiue working on it with full detail. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pomar1 Posted November 12, 2007 Share Posted November 12, 2007 I like it. I like style of background :D its just funny ----TheLair Game!----"Game isn't dead... You wish!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiimben Posted November 12, 2007 Share Posted November 12, 2007 Not one of you're bests in total, but that face is great, good work. The ONLY thing i'd say would need work is the tree's at the moment, you're sort of going for a simplistic background and it's pretty good, just the trees ruin it :( Oh, and I also <3 the path :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
venomai Posted November 12, 2007 Share Posted November 12, 2007 I love the background -- it has a cool fresh style and some nice shading. Granted, the trees are a bit strange and distracting... But otherwise good. The foreground (face) needs a bit of work. You've got most of it down right, but it's a bit flat and needs more midtones. You should soften (anti-alias) your lines, especially the ones around the chin. Also, those eyes are massive. I'm not a fan of the pink text and border. Great work though. Nice attention to detail and lighting. Nice style, too. :) Keep 'em coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RazorAce Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 Its great but has a lot of great potential. Id say you should turn it into a WIP rather than a completed sig. http://s9.invisionfree.com/pec <--Best clan ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rushrock Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 I love everything about it! The person really displays some impressive craftsmanship. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted November 13, 2007 Author Share Posted November 13, 2007 The foreground (face) needs a bit of work. You've got most of it down right, but it's a bit flat and needs more midtones. You should soften (anti-alias) your lines, especially the ones around the chin. Also, those eyes are massive. I'm not a fan of the pink text and border. Aye, if I used more midtones, the face would come out very, very old. It took me 1 hour to make the face and 4 hours of constant refining to get it right. You are probably right about the anti-aliasing though :oops: . Never really do that. Oh, and the pink text and bored arent really my choice either, but the girl I made it for likes those colours. So not much say in that. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shivers21 Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 I like the grass. the bark looks wierd though... and the shadow of the person is off too. but over all, VERY VERY NICE. {DeviantART}{Last.Fm}{Join Sublime GFX, great community for artists!}Back to RuneScape, Again.Avatar by Brian The Great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chazimcgee Posted November 13, 2007 Share Posted November 13, 2007 I like the face and the path and the effect the sun has in the far distant sky. Tree bark is a bit wierd but i like the rest :D Sn'C Events Team Member942nd to 99 hunter 2/8/07|26,042nd to reach 99 fletching 27/10/07|Quest Cape Achieved 22/1/08|50,000th to 99 Cooking 29/10/08Dagannoth King Drops: 7 Zerkers 2 Axes 3 Warriors | Armadyl: 1 hilt first ever trip and kill | Barrows: 2 Dharok Legs 1 Ahrim Skirt 1 Torag Helm 1 Guthan Spear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tennvols21 Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 The neck looks very odd... post this on RSM we need more topics lol.... Good Luck in pixeling -Click My Signature To Check Out COD:MW2- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert_Rdam Posted November 16, 2007 Share Posted November 16, 2007 I like it very much! :D I can see there's a lot of work in this. :thumbsup: Credits to Skully Sc for the signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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