well, ive lost most of my drive to continue completing goals, attaining levels and such.

 

 

 

i wanted to convey that now ive started to be more focused on having fun, even if, or especially if,

 

that means just hanging out and not grinding for levels.

 

 

 

i did this late last night:

 

 

 

 

 

 

rate /10?

 

i know its not super, but for me its decent.

 

 

 

constructive criticism is welcome!

i actually really like it bro : i do think you saved it wrong however if it is a pixel sig, somebody might be able to explain what i mean in better terms but pretty much you saved it as a gif which lowers the quality and "cleancutness" of the sig. dont worry ive wasted hours upon hours saving things as gifs or jpegs late at night :wall:

 

 

 

my C/C would be fixing the shadow the tree gives off, contrast it a tad more. Also, give the sky and ground more depth with various shades of blues and greens.

 

 

 

others then that id say its a great piece, id say just add some more detail to shading, but you can pretty much say that about anyones work.

 

 

 

 

 

looking forward to seeing more from you gil :D

 

 

 

C14

To be honest, I really like it. The simplicity and message it conveys is awesome. 10/10 for sure. I'd love to see more. :thumbup:

Looks pretty good.

 

Sky doesn't really fit it though IMO, could darken it up a bit.

 

Good job though.

 

7/10

If you still have the origional make sure to upload it as .PNG.

 

 

 

It looks good though, maybe add more depth to the sky/background?

thanks for the comments/suggestions,

 

 

 

im starting a re-do of the entire thing :)

 

 

 

and this time ill remember to save as png :oops:

 

 

 

edit:

 

 

 

heres progress so far:

 

the shadow still doesnt really fit in my opinion bud :/ what i actually like at the moment is the thing i did under my tree in my potm entry, i didnt make a specific shadow line but rather just darker thicker grass/shrubs. maybe give that a try :

I really like it Gilf! I didn't know you pixeled either :P

 

 

 

I would say work on the shadow of the tree (darker grass & shrubs), and Maybe a sun and some clouds?(Look at Unoalexi OR Cowboy14's clouds for that kind of thing).

I don't think saving in the wrong filetype was the problem here, it just look like you pixeled something and then made it smaller, and the edges automatically got anti-aliased in the process.

 

 

 

Either way, it looks pretty good, especially the remake. Ssome of the tree's branches need to be slightly thicker though, and the shading on the trunk seems off. One side needs to be darker than the other one, instead of having the darkest shade in the middle. I'll give some more comments when you update the signature.

v1

 

 

v1.2

 

 

 

 

and yeah, i realized the tree shading was wierd #-o think i got it right this time...

 

v1.25

 

 

 

 

ill have to work on clouds, im not very good at them. the sky is very basic atm.

 

and yeah, unoalexi's clouds are awesome, i love the flying pig pixel he did :)

 

 

 

and i hate doing grass :|

Wow Gilf. That looks really, incredibly awesome. Easily 9/10.

unoalexi's clouds are awesome, i love the flying pig pixel he did :)

 

 

 

 

She. ;)

Wow nice. 10/10

 

 

 

Make me one - I give you cookie powerrr and I love you long time :D

Wow Gilf. That looks really, incredibly awesome. Easily 9/10.

 

ty

 

She. ;)

 

oops :-#

 

Wow nice. 10/10

 

Make me one - I give you cookie powerrr and I love you long time :D

 

if i have time im open to working on one, pm me some ideas. :)

 

im still a pixel nub tho

I like the style of the grass in the WIP, the grass in your sig has too much contrast IMO. I like the soft colors. Same with the sky, a slight gradient would be nice but the one in your sig is too drastic.

 

 

 

Overall though,I like the peaceful style. Looking good. ^.^

Looking at your latest update (In your signature), It looks quite good, shading is awesome, most of it is great :thumbup:.

 

 

 

I'd give it a 8/10 :thumbup:.

just posting this again so you dont have to scroll up to compare:

 

v1.25

 

 

v1.25.1

 

 

 

 

yeah, the sky variation were a bit drastic, so i think it looks a little better.

 

its 4am now...might work a bit more on shading tomorrow...

 

i mean...today...when i wake up again...

 

 

 

edit~

 

and yeah, the grass is a bit more vibrant in my newer versions, i kind of like it that way though.

 

 

 

~gilf

Changes look good! :thumbsup:

 

Remember to make me one tomorrow

Grass looks awesome!!

 

 

 

Leaf looks a bit weird alone. Maybe add some on the ground around the tree?

i think the leaf is too big imo, but yeah big improvements since a day or two ago :thumbsup: