Gilformen Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 well, ive lost most of my drive to continue completing goals, attaining levels and such. i wanted to convey that now ive started to be more focused on having fun, even if, or especially if, that means just hanging out and not grinding for levels. i did this late last night: rate /10? i know its not super, but for me its decent. constructive criticism is welcome! 32,606th to 99 magic || 15,388th to 99 dungeoneering || 12,647th to 99 farming14,792nd to 99 range || 24,954th to 99 herblore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nash Posted August 7, 2008 Share Posted August 7, 2008 i actually really like it bro : i do think you saved it wrong however if it is a pixel sig, somebody might be able to explain what i mean in better terms but pretty much you saved it as a gif which lowers the quality and "cleancutness" of the sig. dont worry ive wasted hours upon hours saving things as gifs or jpegs late at night :wall: my C/C would be fixing the shadow the tree gives off, contrast it a tad more. Also, give the sky and ground more depth with various shades of blues and greens. others then that id say its a great piece, id say just add some more detail to shading, but you can pretty much say that about anyones work. looking forward to seeing more from you gil :D C14 Pixel Signature Made By Me.Pixel Art Tutorial * Pixel Gallery * My Free Pixel Sigs Shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cup Lion Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 To be honest, I really like it. The simplicity and message it conveys is awesome. 10/10 for sure. I'd love to see more. :thumbup: |Signature by Jason321| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lukabo969 Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Looks pretty good. Sky doesn't really fit it though IMO, could darken it up a bit. Good job though. 7/10 Ranger Boot Count: 1 :lol:Zerkers: 4 Hatchets: 2 Warriors: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 If you still have the origional make sure to upload it as .PNG. It looks good though, maybe add more depth to the sky/background? [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gilformen Posted August 8, 2008 Author Share Posted August 8, 2008 thanks for the comments/suggestions, im starting a re-do of the entire thing :) and this time ill remember to save as png :oops: edit: heres progress so far: 32,606th to 99 magic || 15,388th to 99 dungeoneering || 12,647th to 99 farming14,792nd to 99 range || 24,954th to 99 herblore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nash Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 the shadow still doesnt really fit in my opinion bud :/ what i actually like at the moment is the thing i did under my tree in my potm entry, i didnt make a specific shadow line but rather just darker thicker grass/shrubs. maybe give that a try : Pixel Signature Made By Me.Pixel Art Tutorial * Pixel Gallery * My Free Pixel Sigs Shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 I really like it Gilf! I didn't know you pixeled either :P I would say work on the shadow of the tree (darker grass & shrubs), and Maybe a sun and some clouds?(Look at Unoalexi OR Cowboy14's clouds for that kind of thing). 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 I don't think saving in the wrong filetype was the problem here, it just look like you pixeled something and then made it smaller, and the edges automatically got anti-aliased in the process. Either way, it looks pretty good, especially the remake. Ssome of the tree's branches need to be slightly thicker though, and the shading on the trunk seems off. One side needs to be darker than the other one, instead of having the darkest shade in the middle. I'll give some more comments when you update the signature. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gilformen Posted August 8, 2008 Author Share Posted August 8, 2008 v1 v1.2 and yeah, i realized the tree shading was wierd #-o think i got it right this time... v1.25 ill have to work on clouds, im not very good at them. the sky is very basic atm. and yeah, unoalexi's clouds are awesome, i love the flying pig pixel he did :) and i hate doing grass :| 32,606th to 99 magic || 15,388th to 99 dungeoneering || 12,647th to 99 farming14,792nd to 99 range || 24,954th to 99 herblore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Wow Gilf. That looks really, incredibly awesome. Easily 9/10. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 unoalexi's clouds are awesome, i love the flying pig pixel he did :) She. ;) pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mylez Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Wow nice. 10/10 Make me one - I give you cookie powerrr and I love you long time :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gilformen Posted August 8, 2008 Author Share Posted August 8, 2008 Wow Gilf. That looks really, incredibly awesome. Easily 9/10. ty She. ;) oops :-# Wow nice. 10/10 Make me one - I give you cookie powerrr and I love you long time :D if i have time im open to working on one, pm me some ideas. :) im still a pixel nub tho 32,606th to 99 magic || 15,388th to 99 dungeoneering || 12,647th to 99 farming14,792nd to 99 range || 24,954th to 99 herblore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 I like the style of the grass in the WIP, the grass in your sig has too much contrast IMO. I like the soft colors. Same with the sky, a slight gradient would be nice but the one in your sig is too drastic. Overall though,I like the peaceful style. Looking good. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Looking at your latest update (In your signature), It looks quite good, shading is awesome, most of it is great :thumbup:. I'd give it a 8/10 :thumbup:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gilformen Posted August 8, 2008 Author Share Posted August 8, 2008 just posting this again so you dont have to scroll up to compare: v1.25 v1.25.1 yeah, the sky variation were a bit drastic, so i think it looks a little better. its 4am now...might work a bit more on shading tomorrow... i mean...today...when i wake up again... edit~ and yeah, the grass is a bit more vibrant in my newer versions, i kind of like it that way though. ~gilf 32,606th to 99 magic || 15,388th to 99 dungeoneering || 12,647th to 99 farming14,792nd to 99 range || 24,954th to 99 herblore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mylez Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Changes look good! :thumbsup: Remember to make me one tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cup Lion Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 Grass looks awesome!! Leaf looks a bit weird alone. Maybe add some on the ground around the tree? |Signature by Jason321| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nash Posted August 8, 2008 Share Posted August 8, 2008 i think the leaf is too big imo, but yeah big improvements since a day or two ago :thumbsup: Pixel Signature Made By Me.Pixel Art Tutorial * Pixel Gallery * My Free Pixel Sigs Shop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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