Rape/hate pl0x.

 

Constructive criticism please.

its good, i really like the sharpness, and your blending style is pretty cool as well. seems to me though, that the render is to "hard" compared to the "softer" background. Prehaps intensify the lighting on the right, and extend the blur to the left?

Needs more effects for sure, it looks very empty as it is, though what you've done so far is great :thumbup:

What I would do to have that smudging skills.

 

Smudging is amazing.

 

 

 

KIU, but yeah more effects.

I don't have any C/C but that looks great :thumbup:

Those colours are absolutely win. Can I have the render link?

Teach me pro smudge? Looks awesome but I feel like it's missing something dunno what though :-k

I like it alot but all the way to the left needs something, Continue the design over there or put something else.

its good, i really like the sharpness, and your blending style is pretty cool as well. seems to me though, that the render is to "hard" compared to the "softer" background. Prehaps intensify the lighting on the right, and extend the blur to the left?

I'll give that a shot.

 

 

 

Those colours are absolutely win. Can I have the render link?

 

Got it from some renderpack that I downloaded half a year ago, I'll upload it for you though :thumbup:.

 

 

 

Needs more effects for sure, it looks very empty as it is, though what you've done so far is great :thumbup:

 

Got stuck, might edit later on.

 

 

 

Teach me pro smudge? Looks awesome but I feel like it's missing something dunno what though :-k

 

I could possibly lend you the smudge settings (My own btw).

 

 

 

Thanks everyone *love*.

I'd rape that girl. :lol:

 

 

 

But as for the tag, too oversharpened methinks. And the left side is too empty. Would like moar effects. And give us your smudge settings! (on GIMP, wasn't it?)

I like it as it is, the negative space actually works really well in this IMO.

What I would do to have that smudging skills.

 

Smudging is amazing.

 

 

 

KIU, but yeah more effects.

 

 

 

No. That ruins it. Most sigs here look like randomly placed c4ds. Effects would ruin the atmosphere.

By effects I dont mean, go spam 100 C4D's, maybe just something else, it just feels a tad empty around the focal.

Oh yeah, Julius. I'm a way better smudger than you.. :roll:

Correct there Justin :thumbdown:.

As stated the left is empty, and her right elbow should fade to the left more.

 

Edit: Her right wrist must be dislocated :-#

I feel like it could be more defined, right now it sort of looks.. half-done. Honestly I think with some tweaks it could be pretty nice looking. Right now it just looks unfinished though, which may just be the way your style works but still.