Rate and C&C and stuff, I'll update as I progress. No, you are not welcome to color the lineart.

wow pretty nice! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but it looks like he's giving the finger for a little bit...

 

 

 

LOL?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1st Post wo0t!!one,one!1

Looks like it's a picture taken with a small camera and a massive flash :lol:

Very nice!

 

 

 

but the hand looks weird to me(coz i dont know what hes doing)

 

 

 

Keep up the good work!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ronnie

nothing wrong with the hand..

 

 

 

he's just holding a cookie between two fingers, chocolate chip i presume.

 

 

 

that or a coin.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

perhaps a bit more hair on his rightside(our p.o.v.) forhead

looking nice so far, personally ur skin tones aren't what i like but each to thier own of course. Probably got work to do but forehead in particular looks a bit flat from lack of muhc shading as of yet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and i reckon it'd be better if it were a coin, more rs make him look like an evil rich guy :twisted:

cool pic

looking nice so far, personally ur skin tones aren't what i like but each to thier own of course. Probably got work to do but forehead in particular looks a bit flat from lack of muhc shading as of yet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and i reckon it'd be better if it were a coin, more rs make him look like an evil rich guy :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His forehead isn't shaded at all, prolly cuz it's a WIP?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice 1 GS, but I think the purple skin shade looks a bit weird though.

 

looking nice so far, personally ur skin tones aren't what i like but each to thier own of course. Probably got work to do but forehead in particular looks a bit flat from lack of muhc shading as of yet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and i reckon it'd be better if it were a coin, more rs make him look like an evil rich guy :twisted:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

His forehead isn't shaded at all, prolly cuz it's a WIP?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice 1 GS, but I think the purple skin shade looks a bit weird though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Pay attention to the bits i made bold in the quote of my original post. I completely acknowledged twice that it was cause of the WIP. If u want to pick on what I say atleast read its full context or pick a time when I am actually talking aload of rubbish

It looks really good so far... Yep.

Pretty good so far. The shaded sections on the cheeks etc. seem a bit too round. They jump out a bit more that way. But otherwise, coming along nicely.

Very nice. Neck seems almost too large for the head size though.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Can I color the linework please :P that is a joke do not take it seriousely. take the red pill Neo.

imo, either his neck is waay too big, or his head is too small.. I'm thinkin the head is too small =x

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But nice work anyway =)

i think its his neck maybe too long? looks awesome anyway 8)

The necks definitly to big, and the head could be longer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But as said before, it looks realy, lol.

Can i colour the lineart? :lol:

highlights are too extreme

leave it to godslayer to make almost lifelike faces 8)

 

 

 

Good work, i'd like to see this one done ittl be good :D

Looking great. Can't say much yet, still a WIP.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Although, even though its right, it does look like he is flipping me off. LOL.

I don't see much of an issue with the neck actually. It is just supposed to be a more muscular fellow. Some people have thick necks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And as for the highlights, purple skin tones etc., there are purple, green, etc. tones in skin. Mostl likely they will become somewhat more subtle as he finishes up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also certain lighting can certainly cause that effect.

lol a cookie. i no the comp its for, its a 15m one on media market. u HAVE 2 make it a cookie when u hand in ure next wip ok? lol that would be funny. and its meant 2 be a coin if u havn't caught on yet......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway lookin good, gl with the comp!

 

 

 

RM

I always find that syle very realistic but very odd. Maybe if he adds a cookie he could make it larger - After all bigger is better.