i just hope this is better then my first i realy worked for it but ... hope to heare some ideas about how to make it better here is the link

 

 

 

http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?image=evolution6gs.{censure}swf

Hmm....Link dosen't work for me,just brings me to imagshack home :?

don't write {censure}

First off, The Gallery forum is there for a reason. Second, stop trying to promote your site. Third, Rune isn't the same colour as Adamantite. Fourth, your flash is FRIGGING CRAP! You really think people are gonna appreciate incredibly amateur drawings that look like they've been done by a 5 year old on crack?

 

 

 

If you want constructive critisism, here it is. Next time (oh dear god), try to make your drawings JUST A LITTLE bit better. Slow down the text speed so it's easier to read, and spell "chance" correctly. If you're gonna upload something to show hundreds of people, at least spell check your work...<_< And lastly, what the hell are up with your guy's shoes? I mean, come on? Really? "I realy worked for it"? By worked, do you mean spent 5 minutes cobbling together a piece of barely litterate crap? For God's sake man...Really. Just. Really...

a bit better than the first but once again the frames sometimes didn't last long enough especially at the end and also i hate to say this but the drawings are pretty crappy

 

 

 

EDIT: your flash pics make my sig look good!

cant work it.plz tell me how

first of all i spen 1 day on it and secodn i made it for fun not for comercial purpose and it doesn't have to bee perferct! :wall:

ty for the guys that have a nice critic :)

lol it made me luagh

sometimes its better to keep things to yourself

 

 

 

oh and btw if u worked a whole day on this u gotta be really bad or really slow

first of all i spen 1 day on it and secodn i made it for fun not for comercial purpose and it doesn't have to bee perferct! :wall:

 

 

 

Of course, and this is FAR FROM PERFECT. Seriously, what did you expect? For everyone to compliment you on what an awesome Flash maker you are? You can't even spell Flash, for the love of God. If you're gonna post something, at least make it average. This is just sub-standard. It doesn't even get a rating from me. Normally, i would just look at this topic, shake my head and leave. But you need to be told. Train your flash making first. Look up tips that could help you. Find out tools of the trade. When you think you are thread-worthy enough, show us. But this; it's just REALLY BAD. Yes, it may be better than your last one, but just barely. With that in mind, keep trying. :P I wish you luck.

First off, The Gallery forum is there for a reason. Second, stop trying to promote your site. Third, Rune isn't the same colour as Adamantite. Fourth, your flash is FRIGGING CRAP! You really think people are gonna appreciate incredibly amateur drawings that look like they've been done by a 5 year old on crack?

 

 

 

If you want constructive critisism, here it is. Next time (oh dear god), try to make your drawings JUST A LITTLE bit better. Slow down the text speed so it's easier to read, and spell "chance" correctly. If you're gonna upload something to show hundreds of people, at least spell check your work...<_< And lastly, what the hell are up with your guy's shoes? I mean, come on? Really? "I realy worked for it"? By worked, do you mean spent 5 minutes cobbling together a piece of barely litterate crap? For God's sake man...Really. Just. Really...

 

 

 

=D> Exactly.

Hahahahahaha! That was terrible!! LOL!!!!!!

btw i made pictures to look kind of ugly for it to be funny next time il spend more time on this :)

i would liek some advices like what program beter to use and so on :)

O brother.. mods, rahter delete this then moving it.. because this I can't apreciate.. I don't like it.. sorry :notalk:

better program to use?

 

 

 

Uh Macromedia Flash?

 

 

 

:wall: :wall: :wall: :wall: :wall:

better program to use?

 

 

 

Uh Macromedia Flash?

 

 

 

:wall: :wall: :wall: :wall: :wall:

 

 

 

You mean Macromedia Falsh? :P

False?

way too fast. cant read all of it.

Wow, what did you put in that weed you smoked before making that?

 

:wall:

can i see the pic?

 

the link just redirects to image shack.

i would liek some advices like what program beter to use and so on :)

 

 

 

Best program = Quit. Irl

first of all it made no sense. second of all that is the most adamantish rune ive ever seen. third of all why does the guy in dragon piss on a bunch of smiley faces?

better program to use?

 

 

 

Uh Macromedia Flash?

 

 

 

:wall: :wall: :wall: :wall: :wall:

 

 

 

You mean Macromedia Falsh? :P

 

 

 

You mean ADOBE Flash :wink: .

 

 

 

If you want to make little cartoony movies, stick with Flash. If you want something more serious and realistic, stick with Flash. Great program, if you have talent that is, it's a great program if you can draw and make use of it's intricacies then you'll do well with it, if not, then stop with the program all together and find something better suited for yourself.

 

 

 

Also, are you saying that the first character is wearing Rune? The armour is green and looks like Adamantite armour. Am I missing something?