Noobish111 Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 It only took... roughly two and a half hours for this one. Please rate 1/10. Thankies! Noobish Ex-Runescaper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugger_88 Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 The D-Long is upside down :-s other than that Its ok...But 2 1/2 hours?! - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noobish111 Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 roughly two and a half hours for this one. Ex-Runescaper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alduron Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Spam/flaming removed. If you do not have constructive criticism to offer then do not post. ~Alduron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Ok then. - very little shading. - Characters look as if they are flat, they have no depth at all - An actual person's head is not a round circle, contrary to what you think. - The grass is a blinding green. I mean, I think if I looked at it too long it would blind me. Tone it down a lot. The shading in it is fairly decent, but can't see it through the blindness. - The sky is also very, plain. It's a blue rectangle, not a sky. The horizon is incredibly straight, fix that. - The way he has his shield, looks realy odd. overall: - Lineart. They don't look like people, at all. - Shading. Half of the sig isn't even shaded. - Lineart. - Bit more lineart. - Add a boarder. - work on the coloration too. No more blinding green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neishc Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Oh noes! Another Pixel by Noobish! Took the words out of my mouth. CC - Must shade it better, specially the people - 2 colours :lol: Would be 6/10 - Because it's not terrible - Better than your other works. But you said it took you 2.30 HOURS!?!?!?! Final score 5/10 ~ Keep practicing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lonk41 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Keep at it it's ok, shade the people, and the grass, then it will be much better... 5/10 for me Remember ~ Nothing Is Impossible - Lonk41 My Blog :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lonk41 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 At least her tried. Remember ~ Nothing Is Impossible - Lonk41 My Blog :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megakiller32 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 a new style of pixel- Spray pixel :shock: I would practise a bit more, instead of spraying the grass and sky, do it in layers, if you nuderstand what i mean. 4/10 :) Quit Runescape 30th May 2006.Thanks to Hawkxs for my signature :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 i will say it again, make sure that you can actually draw on PAPER before you consider shifting anything to your computer. No offense, it is evidend that you have put effort into this peice, but your people are not looking like human beings. I suggest that you look up some sites, or better still, borrow a book on anatomy or drawing humans. Getting the proportions and muscle shaping is all that you need to make your artworks more sucessfull. Using a spray can on the sky and floor is also a big no-no. Depth perception is another important ingredient in a quality sig. Proper shading, whether it is dithering or standard shading, helps bring the picture to life, making it more realistic. I hope that you take this on board, and actually attempt to improve, rather than other people who just want attention. I suggest that you look at Terley's pixeling tutorial for beginners (found in the sticky at the top of this page), it will help you alot. Goodluck with your sig making, Remoteman. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoopster211 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 I'd give it a 1/10 [/bads] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noobish111 Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 Ok then. - very little shading. - Characters look as if they are flat, they have no depth at all - An actual person's head is not a round circle, contrary to what you think. - The grass is a blinding green. I mean, I think if I looked at it too long it would blind me. Tone it down a lot. The shading in it is fairly decent, but can't see it through the blindness. - The sky is also very, plain. It's a blue rectangle, not a sky. The horizon is incredibly straight, fix that. - The way he has his shield, looks realy odd. overall: - Lineart. They don't look like people, at all. Ummm, how do I do that??? - Shading. Half of the sig isn't even shaded. - Lineart.? - Bit more lineart. - Add a boarder. - work on the coloration too. No more blinding green. My comments are in RED. Ps: Thanks Auldren Ex-Runescaper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Use your imagination on how to draw people, watch cartoon shows and see how they draw them (anime anime anime.. :D :D :D) or look how other pixel artists drew them. You can learn a lot from just looking at others signatures. Honestly, i don't think you've taken in much or any of the CC everybody's provided in the past... *sigh* (Please prove me wrong..) axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noobish111 Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 i will say it again, make sure that you can actually draw on PAPER before you consider shifting anything to your computer.I stink at that atm. Ex-Runescaper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megadedhed Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 lessons and practice Sigs made by Runemetsa, Nuzza, Dark_Shadow, Kuroi and Me.liquid blobs attacking eachother American Anime... YAY! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigsword33 Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 if you stick on paper, you can do something called practicing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
remoteman Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 i will say it again, make sure that you can actually draw on PAPER before you consider shifting anything to your computer.I stink at that atm. then you will be 10x worse on the computer. i suggest you heavily practice on paper first, it will save you from the insults/flames/being laughed at etc. "A disbelief in magic can force some poor souls into believing in authority and business" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alduron Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Thread cleaned again. There are no more warnings. The rules are plain and violations are being dealt with accordingly. It seems that some people have forgotten what it felt like to be flamed when they started out right Nadril? I recall folks standing up for you when you were getting flamed to pieces... how can you turn around and treat others the same way you did not want to be treated? I expected a lot more from you. Neishc I would not make fun of someone else when I am just starting out. You may think that jumping on the bandwagon will gain you more respect on the forum but the only way to earn respect is by treating others the same and by proving yourself through your skills. This forum should be about helping others not making yourself look better by putting others down. If you have nothing positive or helpful to say the rules are simple, say nothing at all. We do not need folks that derive pleasure by creating an unfriendly environment on our forums. Everyone is welcome to stay and everyone is welcome to post their creations, be it a person starting out or a fine artist. ~Alduron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hugger_88 Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 =D> Pretty good for a begginner...Actually very good =D> - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 it seems that some people have forgotten what it felt like to be flamed when they started out right Nadril? I recall folks standing up for you when you were getting flamed to pieces... how can you turn around and treat others the same way you did not want to be treated? I expected a lot more from you. Replied to you in PM. @ Noobish: I should have clarified. If you realy want to get better, just start drawing what you see. In school, for example, when you don't have any work, just sit there and draw. Look at something , anything, and draw it. As you progress try and chose harder stuff. For example, start by drawing the teachers desk maybe. Than expand to the whole room based off of your viewpoint. It doesn't have to be clean, and rather it's a sketch. What it's doing though is giving you an idea on the human anatomy, perspective, the whole 9 yards. This is the only way you will realy get better, is practice. I realize that me and jacob came off as harsh, but the answer realy isn't simple. You see, there realy isn't any "magical trick" you can do to draw better. You don't simply one day become good. So practice, practice, practice. It doesn't have to be much as I said, but I promise you if you just start (even tonight) by grabbing a sheet of paper, a pencil or pen, and drawing the first thing on your mind you will be getting better. Also, pay attention to details. It's the smallest of details in a piece that can bring it together. The scuff marks on a desk or the wrinkles in an old mans face, everything brings together a piece to make it seem more realistic. I know your only 10, but I do think that if you put your mind to it, you can do it. It might seem hard but I was where you were when I was younger and drawing. I simply just kept drawing what I saw. Mostly it was images in magazines (cartoon characters, video game characters) and over time I did get better. Best of luck, ~Nadril Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lonk41 Posted August 18, 2006 Share Posted August 18, 2006 Good Idea guys *who everr said try on papur first* I tried yesterday and wel... I think mine is pretty g00d, I will be posting it later on today... N00bish: Do it on paper first It is much easier. Remember ~ Nothing Is Impossible - Lonk41 My Blog :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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