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hi, i recently discovered the wonderful world of making pixel art. i want some advice from a pixel expert on techniques, zoom setting, shadows, etc. but heres my first real pixel painting pkerip3.png

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lets see how many faults i can hit on this one...

 

 

 

1. bad anatomy

 

 

 

2. the head hes holding is just floating

 

 

 

3. the head hes holding is far to small compared to his own head

 

 

 

4. theres no shadding at all, shadding can imrpove a lot of things

 

 

 

5. the tree just looks like a hand coming out of the ground... sorta...

 

 

 

6. his nose is to pointy (its pretty much a triangle (that goes with anatomy i guesse))

 

 

 

7. his feet shouldn't point the direction that they do (that to is an anatomy problem)

 

 

 

8. the eyes shouldn't be rectangles (more anatomy)

 

 

 

9. the mouth looks a little funky (anatomy i guesse)

 

 

 

10. put detail into the birds, don't just make them m's like pre schoolers do

 

 

 

11. the whip looks a little mis-colored, but that might just be me..lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

those are just a few things that i see that need to be toouched up, someone can correct me if any of those are wrong, cause i'm not a pixel expert lol

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lets see how many faults i can hit on this one...

 

 

 

1. bad anatomy

 

 

 

2. the head hes holding is just floating

 

 

 

3. the head hes holding is far to small compared to his own head

 

 

 

4. theres no shadding at all, shadding can imrpove a lot of things

 

 

 

5. the tree just looks like a hand coming out of the ground... sorta...

 

 

 

6. his nose is to pointy (its pretty much a triangle (that goes with anatomy i guesse))

 

 

 

7. his feet shouldn't point the direction that they do (that to is an anatomy problem)

 

 

 

8. the eyes shouldn't be rectangles (more anatomy)

 

 

 

9. the mouth looks a little funky (anatomy i guesse)

 

 

 

10. put detail into the birds, don't just make them m's like pre schoolers do

 

 

 

11. the whip looks a little mis-colored, but that might just be me..lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

those are just a few things that i see that need to be toouched up, someone can correct me if any of those are wrong, cause i'm not a pixel expert lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ty vm mate for your feedback ill try to fix it

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well..err...everything

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

everthing said above

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just don't take it to personally..first pixel sigs always arn't that great(mostly)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

do as many as you can to practice :thumbsup:

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Ok lets start this...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Moon, craters same (or close) color to the bg sky

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Text of p.k. looks pretty random... doesn't fit all that well

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Birds aren't lines... draw the bird not some squigildly lines (made a new word!)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Santa hat, have you ever seen a hat go straight up and tilted like that

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hair, is it a wig...? No seriously...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ears, I don't see any ears... who took my freaking ears!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nose... erm a acute angle doesn't = nose... ever

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eyes... look at how small those pupils are!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Neck, too long

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Head shape... looks similer to a fork...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dang forgot the smile... Smile, truth be told alot of people don't draw that great mouths on thier character no excuse for you not to though! And his teeth are yellow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fury, the strings are flat on his shirt, they should be sticking up a slight bit as the strings are round... watch where you color at the top right corner your fury isn't square and the coloring is a bit random...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Arms... wow, you got to work on them arms man! look a bit oddish... arms are NOT at right angles...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Whip, too small

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hands, WAY too small...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Skirtish thingy? erm... white lines won't cut it mate ::'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

head he is dropping is much too small...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what is the grey thing on the ground... a rat?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tree needs major work...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bush doesn't look that bad but could use some colors...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

feet are all wrong, no feet ever go to the side.. its unnatural...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its not terrible for a first real try at pixeling... nor that great either...

 

 

 

you need to work a TON on anatomy and such as that is essential to makeing decent sigs... You also need to look into some dithering and shadeing tuts so that you can start working on that some...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not that bad you just got to keep at it

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a yellow guy holding a miniature head wearing a whistle around his neck with a santa hat on with a white... "thing" on his legs and two little blue ovals attached to his "legs"? i dont get it #-o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-ok, not to be critical or anything but, mabey you need glasses, even if my drawing is absolutely horrible, i think we all know the articles of clothing you described as "blue ovals attached to his legs" are called shoes/boots, and they are attached to his feet, not legs, and in runescape you can't wear whistles, so make a guess, and know that its probably an ammy or necklace. :?:

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NOTE to L0rd: not everyone here plays runescape... so believe it or not, you shouldnt expect EVERYONE to know what the items are suppsoed to be

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and NAZ besically said all my thoughts, only better thought out and with better grammar...

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naz you have way too much time :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah don't i know it, when i get started C\C'ing then i try and find everthing that could look better... I spend like 15 minutes looking at his pixel... :wall:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

course I don't get much chance to C\C many people these days, so few pixel'ers left...

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