yey! i found a mistake/something that doesnt look right :

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the girl the the red hair, her lips look wonky and like dodgy, not very straight and it looks weird.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry to gloat, its just your work seams so perfect...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

looking great, and cant wait to see it finished =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21

ARE YOU MAD?? :anxious: :anxious:

 

 

 

its amazing the realistic looking version at the end, but imo i think its something that would look better as a kind of anime cartoon thing, like... cell shading stuff. manga inda thing, rather than realistic. damn good job - nothing else to say.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok yeah I was wondering what's wrong with her mouth. Will fix the width of her eyes too! Thanks!

 

 

 

I also tried fiddling with the water ><

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Brb

w00t! i think i found a anotomy problem :shock: look at the red haired girl and then her hands... looks like HER right arm (our left) is longer then her other.

w00t! i think i found a anotomy problem :shock: look at the red haired girl and then her hands... looks like HER right arm (our left) is longer then her other.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One of the hands is resting on the ground while the other oone is reaching towards one of the creatures, what i do notice however, is that her eyes are way to far apart, and too far from the nose.

Dunno about the mouth, it seems a bit wierd to me. What I think the problem is is that the corners of the mouth seem a bit too sharp but that's just my opinoin.

how long it take u to do?

Skull3k3: Um hours. Like lots of hours XDD

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Imhomer: Changed mouth a bit, better?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Despaxes: Yes changed eyes, they're closer but slightly bigger

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

WeeBoab: Yeah I'm caught between realism and the japanese style. Too hard to do realism but anime is too simple.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Smooth_dudes: Define mad?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

PJB21: Yeah her hips look odd, they look normal in the sketch, when you can't seee the tails. I think the main prob is the angle she's sitting and her hip is hidden by the two tails, her fox tail and the dog's mermaid tail thingy. Yeah and my work isn't perfect haha

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Xman: Shoot! I forgot the gerbil! *adds to note*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fatbill: thanks =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rik: I sure hope I improved! I learned how to do clouds, skies, water, rocks, and grass. Had to look at tons of pics of what water looks like at night, and it stiill doesn't look right lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Remoteman: Yeah I have prints for my walls since my mother got rid of my tiger posters. *sigh*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Did I miss anyone? Eyes fuzzing out O.o

holy s**t dude how can u draw that good

=D> Congradulations! A brilliant piece of work. The colouring in near perfect. The only bad thing I can point out is that he guy's mouth seems a little strange, and his eyes look like they might be in the wrong psition.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But still, very well done! :thumbsup:

The coloring is amazing as usual.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Xman: Shoot! I forgot the gerbil! *adds to note*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:D

HOLY SHIOT :ohnoes: (Sorry about the language tip.it.) :cry:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What program? :-k

Well, I've put off my reply to this for long enough (not as if it's any different to everyone elses... XD), but...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I envy your sheer talent. I always enjoy your work (whenever I see a new |\/\/|, I get so excited. :P), and this is no exception. Colouring is spiffing, and the anime-ish style is great as well.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Are the characters based on anything, or did you create them specifically for this piece?

Absolutely brilliant, I loathe the style you use, however this is a masterpiece, a few details need fixing, however they all are written down by you already, it is brilliant =D>

Very nice, you avoided all usual mistakes, you are obviously a master :