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Original paintmash/psp version

 

 

 

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Properly made ones...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Version 1

 

 

 

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Version 2

 

 

 

06-08-05_notafraiddarwin.jpg

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Version 3

 

 

 

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Ok I just remade my sig to make it look a bit more graffiti like.

 

 

 

If anyone flames me for "ripping images" then I will personally track you down and set fire to your computer for being such a pleb.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Source pics used:

 

 

 

Underground symbol used as a guide (not used in final piece, I redrew the sign myself)

 

 

 

Brick wall for background

 

 

 

Darwin fish logo

 

 

 

Chitty bang bang the musical poster

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I tried to get it to look like it has been sprayed on but it still looks pretty crap.

 

 

 

Constructive criticism and advice welcome. Ratings are not.

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Ok I just remade my sig to make it look a bit more graffiti like. *points downwards*

 

 

 

If anyone flames me for "ripping images" then I will personally track you down and set fire to your computer for being such a pleb.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Source pics used:

 

 

 

Underground symbol used as a guide

 

 

 

Brick wall for background

 

 

 

Darwin fish logo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I tried to get it to look like it has been sprayed on but it still looks pretty crap.

 

 

 

Constructive criticism and advice welcome. Ratings are not.

 

 

 

It would be so much greater if you made everything in it. The background doesn't look like a brick wall. I didn'y know until I looked and the picture. And the text is kinda hard to read even though it is grafitti. :wink:

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yeh im liking it, what is all this stuff bout the mafia?

And no lol why do you always want to get stuff from John Lewis. Its over ̣̉300 more then than what i paid.

 

John Lewis is a great, great shop.

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It would be so much greater if you made everything in it

 

 

 

Thats the thing with photo manipulation, you take photos and manipulate them. If i drew the brick in the background and the darwin fish then it would be pixel and not the style of sig i was attempting to achieve.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The background doesn't look like a brick wall. I didn'y know until I looked and the picture.

 

 

 

Yeah I tried to get it to look like how the Underground walls are like. Kinda dirty cream walls. You can see what they look like in this image. I tried to manipulate the wall quite a bit. Warped it a bit flatter and significantly changed the colours. Could do with darkening the grout tho. What do you think? What makes it not look like a wall?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the text is kinda hard to read even though it is grafitti. :wink:

 

 

 

Thats why i posted this. I want tips on how to make it better. Saying its hard to read doesnt help. How is it hard to read? What bits are bad? What bits are good? Colour choice? etc...

 

 

 

I would really apreciate proper comments on this post. I very rarely post any of my work and i certainly don't do it to show off I only posted ot get comments on how to improve.

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yeh im liking it, what is all this stuff bout the mafia?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

#darkwebz is another irc and forum community made up from a lot of the regulars on off topic :P

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It would be so much greater if you made everything in it

 

 

 

Thats the thing with photo manipulation, you take photos and manipulate them. If i drew the brick in the background and the darwin fish then it would be pixel and not the style of sig i was attempting to achieve.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The background doesn't look like a brick wall. I didn'y know until I looked and the picture.

 

 

 

Yeah I tried to get it to look like how the Underground walls are like. Kinda dirty cream walls. You can see what they look like in this image. I tried to manipulate the wall quite a bit. Warped it a bit flatter and significantly changed the colours. Could do with darkening the grout tho. What do you think? What makes it not look like a wall?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the text is kinda hard to read even though it is grafitti. :wink:

 

 

 

Thats why i posted this. I want tips on how to make it better. Saying its hard to read doesnt help. How is it hard to read? What bits are bad? What bits are good? Colour choice? etc...

 

 

 

I would really apreciate proper comments on this post. I very rarely post any of my work and i certainly don't do it to show off I only posted ot get comments on how to improve.

 

 

 

I'm telling you what I think about it. If you don't consider it C/C, that's your bad.

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The background doesn't look like a brick wall. I didn'y know until I looked and the picture.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah I tried to get it to look like how the Underground walls are like. Kinda dirty cream walls. You can see what they look like in this image. I tried to manipulate the wall quite a bit. Warped it a bit flatter and significantly changed the colours. Could do with darkening the grout tho. What do you think? What makes it not look like a wall?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe put some adverts on it if u can fit it in and some tile type pattern?

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I know nothing about sigs so bare with me... Kinda apparent of my ripped image from Google and some basic text in fireworks...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also I just got up so I'm like... Dead. Or at least feel like it...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The bricks need to me emphasized a bit more you've used that really weird cream colour for the cement, try and get a slightly darker shade to bring them out a bit. If you wanted to go for a graffiti style you need more randomness, like maybe mix some of the bricks/cement different shades etc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The actual Mercifull looks pretty damn good, but atm it hurts like smeg, it's like 3D. I don't have 3D glasses though so I can't check. Try making it less 3Dish and more graffiti'sh... Yeah that's my word ©2000 and something Me. Anyway you might want to experiment with more colours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The #dw mafia bit, use another font... I like it how it is, but to make the whole sig's theme a bit more graffiti'sh (I can do this all day), you need to change it. It's just too grungy for graffiti, maybe remove the random lines (I know it's in the font) or just find another graffiti style font.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The fish, yeah well I don't think many people draw fishes on walls like that, so I can't compare it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ugh sneezing, I hate colds.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The "We are not afraid" rail thingy, if you layered it on alpha it a little to try and get the lines of the brick wall on it a bit more. As if it was drawn on, instead of stamped on.

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Thanks for the comments Chris.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I lightened up parts of the wall and changed the contrast a bit to make it look more like the actual tube walls. I also made part of the wall dirty and uncleaned.

 

 

 

I changed the colours of the "Mercifull" and the font of the "#dwm"

 

 

 

I also drew the underground logo this time instead of manipulating an image of one. I think it looks a lot better and no1 can say i ripped it then either :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Old version

 

 

 

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New version (points down)

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Touched up the #darkwebz text a little and added a few paint drips.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Things to improve on...

 

 

 

Make the darkwebz text less blurry. Bit too much i think atm

 

 

 

Grime up the underground sign, they don't normally get cleaned very often lol

 

 

 

Prehaps add an advert in the background thats been sprayed over

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"We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12

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Ok version 3 is done with the improvements i mentioned in my previous post.

 

 

 

More crits and comments welcome :D

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It doesn't really look like the words/graffitti are on the wall, looks like it's just floating above it. It think i'd be pretty awsome if you make the bricks more appreant and then add the texture of the bricks to the letters, like those lines seperating each brick.

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I think the last edit was a bit too much, the poster makes it seem a bit too crowded.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think it would look more realistic if you make some imperfections..

 

 

 

Like (if you keep the poster) some tears in the poster, faded colours, etc..

 

 

 

Dirt on the wall..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, it has been said before, I think it would look good if you would make the "We're not afraid" thing semi-see-through.. So the brick texture comes through a bit..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I do like the sig :)

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Yeah I'd change the layer settings of the stuff on the wall to get the brick texture coming through. I'm not familiar with PSP, but the modes I'd try would be stuff like overlay, screen etc.

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The underground we are not afraid thing is a sign. its not supposed to have been sprayed on the wall so the brick shouldnt be showing through. Ill have a play with the text graffiti tho.

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"We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12

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I really like it. Do me a favour and PM me the info for the IRC channel :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

#darkwebz is a private community. sorry.

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"We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12

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I really like it. Do me a favour and PM me the info for the IRC channel :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

#darkwebz is a private community. sorry.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is there anyway I could get in? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its a mystery. I guess if you find a way in then thats ok :P

 

 

 

Depends on if you are not liked by any people already in #darkwebz lol

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"We don't want players to be able to buy their way to success in RuneScape. If we let players start doing this, it devalues RuneScape for others. We feel your status in real-life shouldn't affect your ability to be successful in RuneScape" Jagex 01/04/01 - 02/03/12

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