it's ok, but of your stuff, like wc, is off. Starting teaks at 35 is very inefficient, you can't cut them fast at all. You should get around 70 or 75 before starting teaks. Also, high alchemy is definetly not the best way to train mage. With level 6 (or whatever onyx is), you can get up to 90k xp an hour, and if you super heat gold or (with the gauntlets), you get 85k mage an hour and 90k smith. Also you should do ape atoll all the way to 99, don't do the goblin one.