Reading through the quest, all it seems is that it is a long Master quest. Ok, thats alright, but it doesn't help but on top of this on that it is too easy! You need to make a couple of difficult puzzles, and intrigue upon more intrigue And it needs to be across Gielenor as far as i'm concerned - new areas of the Underground Pass, new areas of While Guthix Sleeps dungeons, and other things This is just what I think - the second (or third) grandmaster quest would have to be more difficult than the quest prior And you need to add Elemental Workshop Part 2 to the requirements - since there would probably be 300 (assuming 270 now) quest points in the game, meaning it would be easy for people to get the points! Plus, you need it to do the quest so it needs to be a requirements Still, good quest and good ideas!