First of all good story. (I only skimmed through it because I don't like creation stories in general, it has nothing to do with your writing) secondly, just because I always have to comment on archmage (don't ask me why, I haven't figured it out): Its not that your stories aren't intresting, its the arguments about zaros evilness that follow. I don't think anyone can claim that Zaros is entirely good but I get tired of hearing people putting him as the ultimate evil diety past zaramok just to annoy you.