Everything posted by dragoncmd
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Gaal and Smoke 2: Tale of Two Cities
I love the pic. I'll get on coloring it tomorrow. I guess you just wanted to remind the world how much cooler you are than that flower loving Gaal?
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Story: Story of a Dead Man
Why did Jagex have to name that stupid priest "drezel"? It reminds me of a demon from the "cleric quintet" so when ever I hear it instead of thinking of a holy man I think of a short little bat like thing with a posion tail.
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Corrupt a Wish (IT's over Nine Thousand)
Your wish is my wish but what is my wish?
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The Legend of the Forum - [~3 Characters Needed!]
Kumlekar whirled around and drew his scimitar. Just as the demon reached him there was a bright flash of light. Thinking it was a trap Kumlekar rolled diagonally and came up swords at ready but the demon was nowhere to be seen. Instead there was a fine red mist surrounding two very familiar robed figures. ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅYou̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re, you̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re that guy who was at the bandit camp! I thought you were dead!̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
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Mein Kampf
I'm sending that to my nazi friends. (or for you politically corect people national socialist)
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NaNoWriMo
Archmage that is the most orginal topic you've ever come up with. I mean what other story is on these forums that hasn't been the same topic posted 4 times? I'm no writer so I won't try.
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Story: Story of a Dead Man
OOO :shock: a horror story, I like it. Not many of those around here. MORE!!!
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!!!!Merchant!!!!
intresting... Unfortuanetly the idea of people not merchanting would take out the most important thing keeping 99% of the money out of the hands of the top 5000 people (based on total lv or how good of a pker they are). Now write one about scamming.
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Corrupt a Wish (IT's over Nine Thousand)
I wish people wouldn't act like me with not posting wishes.
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A Pirate's Tale
I think you mean "farther" instead of "father". also again with shortening lines you might be able to get rid of into. I don't think you'll lose the meaning. Other than that its much better.[/i]
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The Fall of American Conservatism
paragraph form? I find it too hard to read.
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Book Of Creation
First of all good story. (I only skimmed through it because I don't like creation stories in general, it has nothing to do with your writing) secondly, just because I always have to comment on archmage (don't ask me why, I haven't figured it out): Its not that your stories aren't intresting, its the arguments about zaros evilness that follow. I don't think anyone can claim that Zaros is entirely good but I get tired of hearing people putting him as the ultimate evil diety past zaramok just to annoy you.
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How The Dragon Equipment Came To The Lands Of Runescape
could you please put it in paragraph form? It's just too hard to read like it is. Also you might want to check out the store where you buy d daggers and longs. It says that the mettle comes from some other demnsion/ land/ world thing. (I forgot exactly) There was also something about in in one of the old letters to the gods (it was one of Guthix's)
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Gaal and Smoke 2: Tale of Two Cities
I sorry but thats just rude. Most jokes I can handle but a full paragraph of spam? P.S. Oh I didn't notice the low post count. I guess you haven't learned common forum deceny yet?
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Mein Kampf
have you ever thought about the fact that its a cool name even if it was used by one of the most brillant, evil, and Bipolar men the world has ever known? An intresting side note: Hitler was bipolar so sixteen million people could have been saved by a few lithium pills if they had been around at that time.
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A Pirate's Tale
Good poem we don't get enough of them here. My only suggestion is to shorten some of the longer lines because they seem to get so long at points that you lose the rhyme scheme but other that that its great. 8.7/10
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only in runescape...
but what if its a chickens skeleton? Only in Runescape can a noob be insulted for asking for money (they only neew a few gp) and a higher lv player can ask for 5000gp and get it easily. Off topic: Only in RWK can you be a noob and have a kingdom worth 10Billion gold. (pm me if you understand that)
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The Dreamweb - my first attempt at fiction in English
Listen to archmage just because his grammar is better than mine.
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Gaal and Smoke 2: Tale of Two Cities
you know once, just once, I would like to tell you how horrible this stuff is. BUT YOU WON"T GIVE ME THE CHANCE!!
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Corrupt a Wish (IT's over Nine Thousand)
you have them but you waste first one on a 50 pound cake which land on your head killing you and preventing you from getting your second 2 wishes.
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"You Know When You Have Been... When..."
You hit your computer? (In order for it to hit you back, you would have to hit it...) uh, yeah I do it all the time. DO YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THAT?
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only in runescape...
knights online, WOW, GW (no not games workshop)
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The Dreamweb - my first attempt at fiction in English
great idea except for the Step 1: Re-write as screenplay Step 2: Pitch to movie studios as a film noir type sci fi. part. Youd on't want some idiot director to ruin it.
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The Legend of the Forum - [~3 Characters Needed!]
woot!!! fianlly.
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Gaal and Smoke 2: Tale of Two Cities
so when do we find out why smoke is evil?