dragoncmd

wind walker is horrible, stick with OOT and Master quest (majora's mask is alright too) the best game though is the SNES one. (A link to the past is it?) Links awakening is also good but it has a very diferent style of gameplay, and the orginal is just too hard.

he is but hes also slightly abusive I wish I could not wish to have a wishful wish.

Ug, busy again, maybe I'll get a chance to post tomorrow.

woah just found this, Cool story! I've read a few stories that did similar things with entering paintings but this was by far the best. I didn't like the ending though, it seemed like a bit of a let down.

Archimage do you just have to annoy people? (jk you're cool) cool story, but what is the power of gee?

because your 42 members aren't lv 100000000 (and yes I am that level... In noobiness) I wish I was smarter that Einstein and Stephen Hawking combined.

so he goes and talks to the kbd (yes little did we know hes the slayer masted for monsters) and gets a slayer task so he can level up to evil chicken.

ME ME!!

"Thy speed pales compared to a dead tree stump. " Good line. the first one could use alot of work though, the opening quantian is strange because all of the line rhyme instead of alternating. You did miss the main point of a sonnet though, It is always in iambic pentameter. That means alternating soft and hard sylabuls (ug, I can't spell) This applies to both Shakespearean and Italian Sonnets, and since you mentioned It I won't bother you about the number of sylabuls in each line. and lastly, The additional quantain makes the first sonnet seem too long, you might want to delete the 3rd one. Sorry If I'm a bit harsh, I know how hard it is to write these so actually they're very good compared to most other ones I've seen. (I'll stick with longfellow and shakespeare though :D )

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the first two verses are a bit strange (2nd and 4th line for both don't rhyme well) Other that that it was great! I liked the way you described "hats of party"

wait wait WAIT!! just because I posted a profile It doesn't mean I ever entered the story. at least let me add my entry instead of sticking me in the middle of a battle scene. (also remember my characters a merc so he rarely develops hatred towards anyone) waking up Burak found himself tied to a rock in the middle of the abyss. Fortuanetly some idiot who had tied him didn't take into account that most of the rocks were a sharp redish obsidian. He quickly cut himself out and grabbed his gun. Suprisingly all they had taken was his shortsword and one knife, though his armor was him bad shape but still functional. as his memory returned he thought of the human and elf who he had the pleasure of meeting. Wait, no, that wasn't a human it was far too powerful. He set off to find a way to the surface.

The first part of that chapter was very cool but a bit confusing, try fixing up explaining what happened. From what I gathered a mage killed a unicorn with a zamarok spell (Ug I can't remember the name of that, I haven't played rs recently). The second part was also good but I found it a bit strange that Glenthor would trust a mage that doesn't even show his face, especially after having to kill his brother, unless I am missunderstanding his character?

Guildwars is cool, (I have the game but my comp won't run it) but I'd rather see you guys contimue your rs comedies. And as for romance, don't let it over take the story and it will be good.

ug I just can't seem to find time to post a section. maybe later this week...

maybe someone can pm me with more info about this game? (I'm always looking for more mmorpgs)

ug, someone_els should drop it before somebody_else picks the topic up again. Leave the guy alone He wrote it as a poem more than as a critique of merchanting lifestyle. I'm going to refrain from putting my two bits in on merchants. actually, maybe I won't, It's a necessary evil.

I love your comment about the previous owners of the rune chains.

when I say confusing I mean whose doing what not how the plot fits together, fix up that stuff before writing more.

I give it a 8 out of ten, its intresting but really confusing, by the end of the story I still don't know who nathan is.

ok I'll join, I'll be bending the laws of rs magic a little bit though: Name: Burak Ironfang (hes mentioned in a few of my other stories) Race: dwarf Class: Blackpowder Warrior / rogue in combat he uses a hand cannon (he usually get one shot off before resoting to normal combat) and it has a battle axe blade on the bottom side. He usually carries two daggers and a short sword, and wears full plate armor of elven design thats made of dwarven forged steel and enchanted to not give off any sound. Currently hes a mercenary and gets most of his jobs guarding shipments between kelagrim and human cities. Currently he is with a caravan going to ardougne that is exiting white wolf mountain (it has to pass through seers village and will use the carts there to reach the other dwarven outpost before heading south to ardogune.) Unlike most dwarve he does not hold preduces against other races and is far more accepting of strangers, it is this trait that allowed him to become friends with the half-elf assassin, Kumlekar.

yes

you know, hes right, unless... will you rewrite my stories for me :D

you get your wish but you also become a lumberjack (and you are NOT okay) I wish I was a butterfly.

I read the second and thrid chapters but now, Who is Vera?