dragoncmd

I personally use a ti 84+ silver and am very happy with it though i don't know anything about the 86. compared to an 83 though the 84 is nearly the same but is 2.5 times faster (or so I've heard) and has far more memory. (so the 84 is better but obviously more expensive)

pretty god and I agree with archamage's comment.

I thought it was really intresting though I didn't understand what the "ticket machine" was.

when I saw a gold piece on the floor... intrestingly enough gold is what jewelry is made from. you can mine gold and combine it with gems to make cool stuff. for some reason gold pieces can't make cool stuff. the cool stuff often has magical properties. My favorite type of cool stuff make me rick but doesn't work. So my second favorite type makes me strong and lets me break the speed of light. the speed or light just so happens to be squared in the E=mc2 but I don't know that cause Enstien hasn't been born yet. Enstien was this guy who made a weapon out of uranium. Uranium is an element like gold. So after I saw the gold piece I picked up up and strange stuff happened...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, pant, phant phant NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!11!!one!!11!!! I'm going to have nightmares for weeks after that. But serisouly good story and a great way of describing every rs player's worst nightmare.

:shock: um...lol? :shock:

NOOOOO!!! I HATE cliffhangers!

great story (like every one of yours that I've read) though the last few chapters felt a bit rushed. your battle scenes were pretty good (I prefered the ones in blood warrior better but I really loved how you described the fallen guild in the earlier chapters. Also this is the first "crossover" story that I've ever liked, GOOD WORK!!

um...more?

I love it especially the first paragraph. very orginal. MORE!!!

Devilkiller, a few inconsistencies in your post: When did you get pulled into the past? Or has the oracle been killed multiple times? And when did Zaros become so talkative?

the Movie was pretty good but not as good as the book (obviously) my favorite one of his books is the Salmon of Doubt though.

I got really confused at the battle scene when you kept on saying "he" so much. whose getting out teh dart? it would make more sence for the ranger but that means you very quickly switched perspectives. I'm confused. :( other than that the story was pretty good.

I know, I know. I just like to complain :wink:

what in the world... :shock:

a mediocre story. I like the poem at the beginning but your rhyme scheme could use some work. I have a hard time reading stories with this style of dialouge though.

I think its pretty good but I've never played the megaman games so I don't know the backstory.

thanks for pointing that out smoke my commp lagged so i didn't notice.

I see I've missed a few posts archmage:stuff your ego Necromagus I really like your character hopefully forsakenmage will approve it. devilkiller, yours seems overpowered to me but not too bad. maybe a little emotional problem is in order? (cool name though) I am having a serious case of writers block. Also in addition for giving an excuse to go back into the past I have to cross dementions?!? you guys are evil. :(

I am highly embarrassed to say that I agree with archmage_a. This is quite possibly the best story I have read on these forums. MORE!!

yes I know but keep in mind that since hes watching your story you can't mentiong anything to do with zaros that does not portray him as the deity of cute fuzzly-wuzzly kitties :D

Have you ever heard of constructive criticism? obviously not. they never asked for ideas they asked about how to make their writing styles better. (gaalsien or smokeeagle can correct me if I'm wrong). also how in the world are they going to sell these ideas if their posted for free on the forums? I think that that is one of the most rude and insentive remarks I have heard on these forums. please remove it.