Hmm.. the ground could need some more rocks, and overall it needs filling. Its quite good for a first, i like the ammy most :P. Shading is good on most things.. but remember that rune is a metal, thus it needs to shine a bit more. Text is wrongly placed. i'd rate it an 7,5/10 for a first, there are some faults on shading, the moon looks a bit odd, and its empty