i think you need to start moving away from brushes, and learn -to focus lighting by adding gradient and defualt brushing -getting mroe "flow" -making your render stand out a bit, and make it the main focus -depth; as of now, there is none. -adding focus, and slightly less bold colors. -different types of borders, as of now there is so much black you can hardly tell the difference some good things are -the text seems to belong there, although i cant really tell if its an antirip rofl... -good colors, but they are kinda bright imo. -great render choice in general -you are quite good at brushing, i love that "partchment" kind of texture you gave it, although i dont like brushing because you cant really achieve flow with them, unless you create your own on every occasion you decide you need one.