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looks well done, but kinda looks like you screenied a rune pl8 and a d chain, paisted the symbol offa the chain and colored the pl8 red and added horns lol

great guide, but how the hell do you get buddy kits? lol

is that the scorpion pit? im oging to assume it is, and say that you need to make the clif stand out more by creating some light spots, dither the sand, and make it different shades. also im not sure why the sky is pink, i dont really like it. i would consider changing that blue, or if you were trying for a sunset, make a sun and add shades of orange and purple and even some red

me: w00t pking time zezima: j00 n00b! d13 pl0x n33b!!! me: hits a 98 on zezima zezima: h0lY n33b3rz pl0z!!!!! j00 fr00b!!! you cannot hold it much longer zezima: respawns 1 hp me: hits a 1 z0mg you have to POO *you take a crap* oh dear you are dead

i actually lol'ed at that... its the charicter and the rats outlines that need smoothing out, to sharp of angles and all that stuff

i like it, but i think you should have made the light thing on the left side green.

i think im firmiliar with the comics, but your link is taking ages to load?

i like most of them, i especally like the idea in the last link

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today i was listening to koRn and P.O.D and N*E*R*D* twisted transistor, in my pants liar, in my paints boom, in my pants youth of the nation, in my pants pogo, in my pants brain, in my pants

i ban the d00d above me coz i asid so i also ban the d00d under me coz hes going to try and bann me

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true actually =) havent mined much tho -.- only from lvl 33 to 62 lol... TPUM is not me.

cool. i think.

lol!!!!!!! yeh do that!!!!

the first few seem avrage to me, but the link has potential i think. you should make the background darker, and mabe add a ring of fire surounding them? lol just thinking out loud ((or on the keybord)) maby some lightning too? lol just thoughts

i personally like your style drawing. i like the way that its kinda cartoony. this one should be interesting to see done. as for cc, im not sure how your going to get the thrid charicter in there..... you will need more room i think

+1... cant see and i am to lazy to zoom in, but doesnt look like you shaded the grass at all. also, use more then just the basic colors it gives you borders also help alot. add one.

cool 3d things (forget the name atm) the pixel needs work. and btw, dont double post

geese cut the spam damnit...... and somebody else cut the white out.

even the 0oc made an appearence

great for a first attempt. i woiuldnt have made the party hat green because it belnds in with the grass to much. also, shade his arms, and in the future, dont use the spraycan on the grass because (cant say for sure but looks like thats what you did) it looks like crap. also, make the other people a little bigger. i had a hard time understnading what was happening in the picture when i first looked at it. very good as a first attempt, and i like the cape, the sky neer the sun, and the guys shoes, you did a great job on all of those parts. 8/10 for a first attempt

cc = constructive critisisisisism... (sp) so lets start with the critisism (sp again) like i said on the other thread, needs facial expression, eyes, nose, ext. his muscels also need definition, and his hands are not in a great position for fletching as for the constructive part, i love the background, his ahrims looks cool, and if we are ever able to mine ruby or something, thats what the rock should look like lol. at the end, animate the portal. that would be cool =) :lol:

its not just a bump, its an offical bump... lol i like the background, i hate the charicter. just because i hate it so much, and even though its not, im going to call it a buddy just to make you mad. BUDDY!!!!!! muahahahaha :twisted: :twisted: back on topic: the charicter has no muscel definition, and he needs a nose and eyes. in one of the first pictures he had eyes, i liked that beter. even besides that, his hands arent in a very good postion for fletching, and i think there should be more people in the background maby and yes, i understand your not done with the portal, but it does look like a damn rock lol... make it more transparent, and also, if your animating it, make the portal move or glow or something lol. that would be cool yes i know my spelling is off by miles, to lazy to edit atm

needs alotta work, but thats funny lol