issy2

Nevermind, question answered :thumbsup:

Ok, doesn't matter... forget the render, leave it without, thanks. Issy

nvm

It seems to be written slightly childishly and the description and flow could be lots better in some places. However the storyline and ideas seem to be very interesting. I do really admire the quote you based it on - Technology has reached it's highest peaks... etc, it's true. I suggest that once you've written a certain amount, say, a paragraph, read through it aloud and make any changes you want to make, add more descriptive words, etc, join sentences up, until it sounds perfect aloud. I think you've got a great imagination and this story has alot of potential. Just keep going, and editing. Some authors write about 50 drafts of a story before they've decided it's right. It's not bad so far.

You really don't need to double post every time you update your story... when there's about 4 minutes difference.

I predict a riot - teh Kiaserchiefs

whoops sorry about that... couldn't find it lol Kind: underbanner Style: abstratcy/slightly grungy Size: default 300x19x10kb> Render/Stock picture: http://img59.imageshack.us/img.....tarau9.jpg Colors:darkish background fading into blue, ie, extreme right and left are black, the middle is kind of mid-blue. not very much black thanks, don't want it to look too gloomy B/W? No, but black at the very sides Text color:Red Text:ZoneRed Subtext: none thanks BorderRed border plese Brushes you want to be in the sig: um, brushes... none thanks... or (i have no idea what a brush is anyway) if you think it would look better, can you try it pltease Other stuff: none Font wish: Font 'akka' http://www.dafont.com/theme.php?cat=103&text=ZoneRed Other message: runemetsa please

Sex is a sin. However... 'Go forth and multiply!'

Hiya, could I have an underbanner please? Kind: underbanner Style: not pixel... abstracty.grungey Size: not sure about this lol... hmm... 750 x 80 Colors: darkish background fading into blue, ie, extreme right and left are black, the middle is kind of mid-blue. not very much black thanks, don't want it to look too gloomy Render: http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/6069/guitarau9.jpg Font: hm... not sure about this. it's a band logo, so something that just suits the rest... Text: ZoneRed Subtext: Other stuff: Can runemetsa make this please? If it's not too much trouble to request a certain person. Thanks so much! Issy

Grease... like you say, hands down 8-)

Dancing.. one reason why I think it's Karen Hardy... :-k

Omg, is that Karen Hardy? :shock: :)

Tooooo shoooort... and I'm not trying to be horrible here but it kind of sucks. Nice try though, btw ruble is Russian currency as opposed to rubble, piles of bricks from a torn down structure.

yes we are friends ^^ :thumbsup: :thumbsup: irl

Thanks alot lol, ^^ If you're really serious about giving it to your boyfriend... :shock: I feel honoured lol. Go ahead :)

*shrugs*

... because English people went to Australian many Years AGo why does this smily dance all his life and never get tired? \ and these guys - :lol: :cry: :wall: =D> :shame: :boohoo: :boohoo: \ :thumbsup:

Me too... also, I'm sorry for arguing with you. I don't like this story, but as Lee said, it didn't lower my opinions of your literary abilities. So, sorry...

Thats one of the least intelligent things I've heard today. I'm a heterosexual and an avid supporter of gay rights. Wow your a real model of society. Good for you sonny jim. I think you should all clamber off your high horses its pathetic. If someone doesnt like gays they are perfectly entitled too. Dont let the elite left tell you otherwise. I personally think that's quite like saying 'if you don't like black people, you're completely entitled to,'. I'm not comparing homophobia to racism (well, technically, I am...) but they are both pretty much the same concept - hating or disliking someone purely based on their sexuality or race. It's just 'pathetic' and it anyone needs to get off their high horse, it's you. In my opinion.

I hope you know I'm deeply offended. :wink: This is the Scallop sculpture on Aldeburgh beach. If you look at it from one way it's a scallop and if you look from another way it looks like a dolphin. It has the words 'I hear those voices that will not be drowned' inscribed along the edges. It's a quote from Benjamin Britten's opera, Peter Grimes, which was set in Aldeburgh. EDIT WHY DO MY PICS ALWAYS COME UP AS THUMBNAILS! urgh, so frustrating... and yes i do use the hotlink to image thing.

Number 3. I supposed I don't really embrace the concept of homosexuality, but I definitely don't think it's 'morally wrong', and therefore I don't have a problem with it. I've never had a crush on a girl, so I'm guessing hetrosexual... still maybe too early to tell? I dunno lol. Why do people hate gays? I'm just curious... aiming that at MPC and 1canadian1, as neither of you have posted anything about why you find it necessary to dislike someone purely based on their sexuality.

You know, this thread is a war between Science and Religion. The bible can't be true because carbon dating (or whatever crap) is over 6000 years old!! Yes it can, the bible says so u prat!! But what if we stopped taking science for fact? I mean who's to say all the world's carbon didn't get jacked by a load of Martians from outer space and then replaced with new carbon 6000 years ago? So if we took being narrow-minded to the opposite extreme, you might as well just admit there's no point arguing over this, because we'll never know... And please don't pull the but-science-says-it's right! card because that's the whole point... if you were to stop taking science for fact, nothing would ever be proved.. BTW I am not a creationist or Christian-basher. Just pointing out a thought.

Please don't take this the wrong way and I mean no offence but it seems like you are exactly the kind of person who gives Christians a bad name. You base all your beliefs on a book. I don't have anything in particular against Christianity - just the people who assume it's all correct just because it's in a book.

lol 3/10

Someone's being ridiculously narrow-minded.