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This time... (lol) it's not about being sexist. It's about being compared to a six-inch-high fabric model of a toy stuffed with cotton wool with no character, family, freewill or moral code! :P

YEah I know, I reported myself lol. And why the heck have you used the world 'doll'? I am not a doll. I am a person.

Hiyaaa there stranger I saw the 'most awesome ending' topic and for some crazy reason I thought it said 'building' and I was like oooh yay this could be interesting... But, yeah. So what do you think are the most 'awesome' buildings in the world? In terms of beauty, material, height, size, weight, looks, practicality, history, or whatever you choose. And please post pics : :thumbsup: Hehe I might just be stating the obvious... but no flaming here please :shame: If you haven't got anything nice to say then keep your mouth shut, and if no-one else has said anything nasty then you won't have to, will you? Not, you know, that I'm forbidding discussion or debate but we can manage that without swearing at each other. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yeah, but when you're showering you're not sitting in that filth as you wash. A shower get rid of it, cleaning you better.

ooooh nice, lovely start. Gripping, flows well, didn't spot any spelling/grammar mistakes (well except 'dyeing' which should be spelt 'dying'), though pleeease for your sake use ' for speech marks instead of ". Maybe spread out the sentences a bit more, and maybe add a second clause to the the second sentence to help get it started. So, great start, I like the way you didn't say the cliched '56 wildy levels' but modified it to fit the story. Nice work so far.

sausages. Smilies are yellow

Bye ryan, you've been such a cool guy all this time so thanks for that. Good luck with everything, and your life, and byee!! Who's that? :shock:

I would like to point out that the bible is thousands of years old. Most of the messages the bible tells are good, even if the storys are largly ficticious (sp?). The only thing is some of them are really only aplicable for back when it was written. That would suggest that the rules, laws, and ways of the so-called Christians six thousand years ago were based on the society they lived in, completely disregarding of moral right or wrong. Or it was written by someone extremely prejudiced and too caught up in their own culture to think for themselves.

Veeer possibly. But I do prefer have one thread for each... but then again that may be considered pretty spammy, so, yeah, I may do that ^^

Shower. Baths are too much hassle. And anyway, showers use less water, are more refreshing, clean you better, and hey you can't reeaaaally whistle in the bath. Unless you don't have your head underwater all the time.

The first one I think is simply beautiful. It is quite simple in a way but also quite sophisticated with the image it creates in your mind. The words seem to be chosen well, congratulations! :) As for the second, meh, I'm not sure. I think it has the potential to be a very moving, forlorn kind of paragraph yet I think it still needs more description and possibly to be developed a bit more... though that might ruin the abstracty kind of feel. On the whole I think you're getting better and better! I mean if you think back to your first piece, the one about Milly the crafter or whoever, well let's say it was ok but could have been alot better. (no offence, and i apologise for some of the horrible, horrible things I said to you then :oops: ) and compare them to the first verse and some more of your recent stuff, the change is pretty remarkable. Maybe I am going OTT but yes, I feel you're getting alot better. Keep it up and for goodness's sake KEEP WRITING! :thumbsup:

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Education, because it's linked to all of them. Technically, you could attempt to solve all of them (except possibly poverty) starting with education.

Thankyoooou lee ^^ Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me. But, alas, I know you can't, as it was fate, that we be seperated, on that very date, but yet in my heart, I still find love for you, even though, I know, I will never find you when love is drained to its river bed who are left, but the friends, responsible for what i've read so Issy, Andufus and Archimage too I'd like to take this moment to say thankyou! So, once again I try to enter the fantasy realm, To find the entrance barred, Tears pour down off of my face, knowing I can never see you again. thorns, [bleep]ed with remorse, [puncture]le your delicate hand whilst there appear to be man traps all over the land why is the once open door to imagination locked the entrance into a moment blocked Now I realise, my innocence has gone, and now, reality is no longer a con, I have to put up with the real world, but the worst part is, I have to do it without you can ever a moment like this be so fragile disappearing as quickly as a fleeting smile as the feeling inside is once again numb to pain and sorrow once again i must succumb But alas not all is lost For sunlight, for moonlight, there is no cost The golden rays, the silvery streams, Eternity of love and light of dreams. a sunset painted in primrose pink a sea of silky blues in which you can sink the gold i added to frame my portrait of you and the green in your whimsical landscape too Soft chalky sunset in chalky cream, Tranquil waves on the beach sewed up the seams A canvas of inky sky dotted with stars, The rolling hills our stone scars.

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Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me. But, alas, I know you can't, as it was fate, that we be seperated, on that very date, but yet in my heart, I still find love for you, even though, I know, I will never find you when love is drained to its river bed who are left, but the friends, responsible for what i've read so Issy, Andufus and Archimage too I'd like to take this moment to say thankyou! So, once again I try to enter the fantasy realm, To find the entrance barred, Tears pour down off of my face, knowing I can never see you again. thorns, [bleep]ed with remorse, [puncture]le your delicate hand whilst there appear to be man traps all over the land why is the once open door to imagination locked the entrance into a moment blocked Now I realise, my innocence has gone, and now, reality is no longer a con, I have to put up with the real world, but the worst part is, I have to do it without you can ever a moment like this be so fragile disappearing as quickly as a fleeting smile as the feeling inside is once again numb to pain and sorrow once again i must succumb But alas not all is lost For sunlight, for moonlight, there is no cost The golden rays, the silvery streams, Eternity of love and light of dreams.

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion where our quiet love drowned. and as I lie on this beachy dune, I wait for the beautiful moon, I sit here and think, my thoughts wonder to you, and silent tears stream down my face But for only when the end is near. Do we see what we feel is truely dear. Like a rose before a storm. Will we survive till tommrows dawn? My thoughts, they drift, they drift to you My thoughts, they drift, to all that you do I can't help thinking how nice it would be If you'd come, and sit here, for a while, with me.

I previously said my favourite smells were strawberry and wet dog. I forgot something... :shame: If anyone's got a fresh lemon/lime at home, just pierce it with your fingernail. It has got to be one of the most beauitful smells in the world, refreshing, slightly tangy. When I'm older I think I'll be making my own perfume.

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. but I'll always remember the good times we shared, and I'll always know how much you cared. If I could go back, I sure as hell would, But we now, are truely alone. The darkness creeps all around, all I want is your voice, your sound, for now I know the sorrow of the daemon, all I need, is to see you again You push up the daisys. That I lay. Now everyone. Is left to pay. Like a great wave. Time comes for you. My friends. With the love of earth shattering. Now your all I have to depend. Memories fade, slowly to dust, I always loved you, with a hint of lust, But now as I lie here, thinking of you, I wonder why, god split us apart Torn from peace like a rose from the ground, I had thought we were one, we were none, we were bound, Into the sea, into the ocean, Into oblivion, our quiet love drowned.

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very our land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand I remember those innocent days too, all those times I laughed at the word poo, but now, those days are forever lost, But, I still find Issy & Lee at my side Dripping blood anguished cry Tears splashing as we say goodbye One last time I'm in your arms, But you're slipping away. You're the price I have to pay. A bit abstract...

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows. Words flow, like our dreams, Children play, by the streams, in this land, our fairy tale! Where the story will never fail! Love flows, like our hearts, Kisses shared, we shall never part In this land, our very own land, We shall go strolling, hand in hand

No offence guys but can be stop talking about the rhyme itself? I know it sounds silly... but when this is finished, I dunno, it might read a bit... seethrough. :-w However I don't want to restrict what you write about, so... :-k __________ Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! But when you gun is spent. When you cannot go on. You can alway be lent. A rhyme this long. Words, flow, Words, go, Verses form, Wisdom knows.

Definitely Herbal Essences. ^^ Pantene Pro V is a trumped up overpriced bottle of cabbage. (Not literally)

Smiling kid fluttering tree Waving flower buzzing bee Delight in nature all around Doesn't take much to be able to see. Crashing waterfall, soaring bird. Floating lily, magic word. Powerful feeling, connect us too. What emotions are in you? I feel the loneliness, feel the pain, Sitting here watching the gentle moon wane, Sitting here watching the sun say goodnight, Sitting here watching the world without light. Take out the packet, the happines in twisted plastic Credit card forward, do the cutting, I'm spastic Desparate escape, that hyper manic state Tube up the note, and take the bait Why bother with the long wait? You'll never feel alone again mate. Yeah, never alone with the thoughts of my mind, The enlightenment you're trying to find, Is gone forever now you've taken the short cut You may be dying inside but it's a chance to unwind... And now, under the stars I sleep, Whilst the dying moon, does weep, My phone credit is running low, So to top it up I go! A knock on the door followed by a creak its your little sister come for a peek invite her into your soft warm bed then tuck the covers round her sleepy head She giggles, she groans She whines, and moans! But soon she falls, asleep on your shoulder As the fire in the grate, begins to smoulder. flames flicker and ashes fall your eyes wonder from ceiling to wall its coming to the end of a very long day you close your eyes, goodnight I say Dreams flicker, reality stays You're watching, you're waiting, counting the days A moment, a second, could change your life, It just takes time to keep your dreams at bay happy king, smiling queen remnents of a long lost dream a hope that fades like a flame in a fire as your imagination begins to tire As you feel, soon the dream will end. As your creativity is about to bend, With a lot of luck, and pixie dust. If one doesnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t work the other must Where dreams, are reality And reality, a dream Where all you need is vitality Just you, any your team Laughing face crying eye Waving hand as we say goodbye With fire in my blood and a song in my heart The dreamers, we're off, for a clean new start. This fantasy realm, of elves and dwarves Take away your breath, making a small pause. This is the way you see my lad, To keep your heart away from the bad. The elves they float on enchanted ground Graceful and beautiful - it's magic they've found Cunning and deceitful though they know what is right, Golden blonde hair, it shines in the light. the dwarves they are short, they are stout, they are bauld. well kept caves, away from the cold. sharp battle axes, and tempers short a trusty friend, and one very well tought. The unicorns, the nympths, of shimmering thought, The knights, the fights, of the royal court, A merchant's bargain sold at last resort, Every colour, every shape,our imagination sought. But, as adults we all know, its only our thoughts keeping them their, whilst our dear children, stop and then stare. They are to be children, in this humble land. What is better, they get to play in the sand. The waves rise. Like the sun. Across the horizen. The fiend stares across. Humbug. His eyes despisen. Bah. No one notices. This time for enjoyment, will not wilt. As they play. The way childern do. You pull up the quilt. He starts to hunger, forever more. his bin, with only an apple core. His stomach growls, as he waits for his pray and he pokes at his fireplace, made of clay. A snap. A crack. An animal in the traps. Soon eaten. Tied in wraps. all the while, innocents play on the beach. whilst the daemon prepares his leech. he plans and schemes to murder the all, yet, he is near his downfall. a battle begins on a blanket of snow purity, virtue and innocence go to fight for the freedom of a long lost soul whilst the winds of change take their tole As time moves on. So must we all. Death glance upon. Like statues, tall. We get closer to it. Each passing breath. Advancing until. There is nothing left. death, something we can't attempt to deny death, something we'll never defy somehow closer to our hearts than life oh how human minds are consumed by strife Life of pure. Life of dark. Life of a kind, found in a park. Love keeps it warm. Hate keeps it torn. So when your mum wants a hug When your baby sister's scared of the bugs, Or even when your tore your dad's favourite rug I hope you can only find... love. That love of bold. The hate of cold. Spread the love. Like a fire doth. 'I love you,' are words we hear Alot, and to my heart is near, The warmth when you hold me tight in your arms, I'm safe, I'm glad, I'm away from all harm Then again, you pull away. As our live, does being to fray. A shout here. A shout there. And suddenly our love lies thread-bare. but deep down, we still care, and when we see them, we stop and stare. they have moved on, breaking your heart. leaving you in despair You opened your heart. To love and care. Chilled winds whip. Though this once safe lair. Like a sword. It dashes you to pieces. While he runs free. Free to keep its leases. Yet you still walk on. In this world of hate Brittle Piece of Bone. All alone. Trying to Find. Never Know Love drives you on. Hollow though And it continues on. Worse than any blow I live this heart of hearts. I pull the cart of carts. For I am in love. I'l give hate the shove. Ben and Jerry's Perferably cherry Fully mending my heart would be a dream Since i'm patching it up with cherry ice cream haagen daz is my pleasure ben&jerry's is my poison but thats just my view I won't force it on you Ben and Jerry's fill my tum And hear me whisper yummy yum The bowl is empty, the spoon is heaped And towards my mouth it leaps...YUM! But for each a time. And a time a place. Like this rhyme. We dive and chase. And while we search we find some fun A childish play, our happiness done. Chattering about icecream, how did we get there? When once we wept for fantasy and dreams. Like the mighty river. We start as clouds, we dither. When we start our journy, we change each passing second. Till eventually we are here. We have written and we have trekkened i hope this doesn't mean what i think it does the memorable ending of something that was are we nearing the end of this long-winded poem all i can say is "Noooooooooooooooooooooooo". There are some things, Lee, that shall never end, However much our verses can distort and bend, We shall continue, we shall fight, Fight for our words, fight for what is right! :

Professional ballroom/latin dancer (get real, that's never gonna happen :( ) or author, which I don't think is 100% unrealistic... :-w