Making a room. Rate. (UD 0)

[Blue_Eggz]

 

 

 

Sorry that it's so big, I'll resize it later. Anyway, here is a room which has a door and what appears to be a sofa/mattress. I will add windows and color later. Rate.

[Nadril]

You serious?

 

 

 

Its literally 16-17 lines. No shading. No coloring. No cropping and you managed to get the proportions wrong while you were at it.

 

 

 

 

 

At least give something half an effort before you post it.

[Blue_Eggz]

You serious?

 

 

 

Its literally 16-17 lines. No shading. No coloring. No cropping and you managed to get the proportions wrong while you were at it.

 

 

 

 

 

At least give something half an effort before you post it.

 

 

 

Either nicely rephrase that or take your attitude and bring it to another thread. :

[Nadril]

You serious?

 

 

 

Its literally 16-17 lines. No shading. No coloring. No cropping and you managed to get the proportions wrong while you were at it.

 

 

 

 

 

At least give something half an effort before you post it.

 

 

 

Either nicely rephrase that or take your attitude and bring it to another thread. :

 

 

 

If you think I could nicely say something about this you are incredibly nieve.

[ThruItAll]

You do realise, that requires no skill, like making buddys =P, Other than drawing lines...

[Ozzy_Patrick]

The perspective is wrong I'm afraid. Your diagonal lines are parrallel to each other. Instead, they should be heading towards a vanishing point on the horizon.

 

 

 

(crappy diagram by me)

 

[Blue_Eggz]

You serious?

 

 

 

Its literally 16-17 lines. No shading. No coloring. No cropping and you managed to get the proportions wrong while you were at it.

 

 

 

 

 

At least give something half an effort before you post it.

 

 

 

Either nicely rephrase that or take your attitude and bring it to another thread. :

 

 

 

If you think I could nicely say something about this you are incredibly nieve.

 

 

 

You'll see when it's done how incredibly wrong you are. TRUST ME.

[Smapla]

You ask for our opinions, then dismiss them :-s

 

 

 

You sir, are an idiot!

[Varda]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Perspectiv ... aphical%29

 

 

 

Have a look on this. :P

[diophantusdan]

You'll see when it's done how incredibly wrong you are. TRUST ME.

 

 

 

Actually, no matter how amazing it turns out, he will still be right. You give us a couple of lines out of proportion and ask us to rate. There is nothing to rate. Your post is pointless so far.

[vladmoney]

so sick of these no effort WIP, which usually never end getting finished

 

 

 

0/10

[Lovelydude]

so sick of these no effort WIP, which usually never end getting finished

 

 

 

0/10

 

 

 

I love your attitude

[LeonardMart]

i would work a bit more before posting

 

and the perspective of the room gives a very weird feeling, like it is deformed. do what ozzy said about the vanishing point, it is the basics of perspective

[Nadril]

so sick of these no effort WIP, which usually never end getting finished

 

 

 

0/10

 

 

 

I love your attitude

 

 

 

I see what you did there. :-$

[drek9]

It's amazingly bad

[WeeBoab]

You serious?

 

 

 

Its literally 16-17 lines. No shading. No coloring. No cropping and you managed to get the proportions wrong while you were at it.

 

 

 

 

 

At least give something half an effort before you post it.

 

 

 

Either nicely rephrase that or take your attitude and bring it to another thread. :

 

 

 

LOL! gtfo mai thread nad.

 

 

 

eggz, finally, after many godforsaken years, tip it is changing. its gallery is no longer crowded by RS fr00bs who shout 10/10 at a dot on a page which a 5 yr old could have done. dont expect that everytime ur post. and ive got to agree with nad, if u think we can say something good about a few lines, you really are nieve. and you may think fr00bs will come on and go ZOMG 10/10 i love a borat hee hee im funny! but they wont. get used to getty crappy comments on crappy work.

[Smapla]

You serious?

 

 

 

Its literally 16-17 lines. No shading. No coloring. No cropping and you managed to get the proportions wrong while you were at it.

 

 

 

 

 

At least give something half an effort before you post it.

 

 

 

Either nicely rephrase that or take your attitude and bring it to another thread. :

 

 

 

LOL! [get out] mai thread nad.

 

 

 

eggz, finally, after many godforsaken years, tip it is changing. its gallery is no longer crowded by RS fr00bs who shout 10/10 at a dot on a page which a 5 yr old could have done. dont expect that everytime ur post. and ive got to agree with nad, if u think we can say something good about a few lines, you really are nieve. and you may think fr00bs will come on and go ZOMG 10/10 i love a borat hee hee im funny! but they wont. get used to getty crappy comments on crappy work.

 

 

 

Great point, horrible spelling.

[Kuroi_Ame]

I'm not going to sugar coat this, it's not the best thing in the world. But, it's a start, and that's all anyone can ask for. The door is a bit small for it's width and the height of the room is a bit, well, too high. I see you're trying isometry. There's some great tuts out there, the basic one, which can help you a lot is: SpriteArt.

 

 

 

Right now, the main problem I see is your diagonal lines. You should try keeping them consistent (either 2:1 or 1:2 or something like that). It looks like you just used the pen tool and connected line A to line B, which doesn't look good. You should also try to challenge yourself, you'll never get better if you don't. It's really basic at the moment, a bed and a door in a room? Who couldn't do that? Put the bed in the front of the room, put a computer in there, add detail, put color! There's so much you could do, just don't go easy on yourself.

 

 

 

Hope this helps. If not, I could come back and tell you how crappy it is, or how great it is. :XD:

[yaff2]

Dude, im sorry, but, its not good, your perspective is wrong, what you have there, no talent...my sister could do it, youd of been better off posting later in the process, so you didnt get any of this, and look into interior perspective first... and maybe do a few rough drafts first?

 

 

 

 

 

anyways, giving 1/10 is nice, at this step in the process