OK this is the first ever sig I've made and i used a guide which is on here =] it looks a lot like the one in the tutorial but meh

 

 

 

It's not finished yet but can you give me a bit of cc and well its my first so don't be too harsh :thumbsup:

 

 

 

OK this is the first ever sig I've made and i used a guide which is on here =] it looks a lot like the one in the tutorial but meh

 

 

 

It's not finished yet but can you give me a bit of cc and well its my first so don't be too harsh :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Littlebit more detail and it will be great. But one thing... It has no head...

It was in one of tutorials, ya?

Tutorials are to show you how to do things, not almost copy them completely. Also this isn't a pixel, I do like the thing lines though. Flash?

OK this is the first ever sig I've made and i used a guide which is on here =] it looks a lot like the one in the tutorial but meh

 

 

 

It's not finished yet but can you give me a bit of cc and well its my first so don't be too harsh :thumbsup:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Littlebit more detail and it will be great. But one thing... It has no head...

 

 

 

It was meant to be the back of the head hehe :

It was in one of tutorials, ya?

 

 

 

 

 

Dementedheroes tutorial... it's awesome :D

It's very simplistic.. I'm sure Demented's tutorial told you how to shade...

 

Good things take time, it looks like you spent maybe a hour on this..

 

What's the big red blotch in the back of the 'head' supposed to be..?

 

 

 

Regular-

 

Three kittens out of ten.

 

 

 

First-

 

Seven kittens out of ten.

Tutorials are to show you how to do things, not almost copy them completely. Also this isn't a pixel, I do like the thing lines though. Flash?

 

+1

Increase that head size :P.

 

Decrease the big flaps on the cape.

 

Is the character supposed to be going bald o.O?

 

Shading, shading, shading

 

 

 

:-w Not a completed pixel so for a first WIP it's alright, nice background, simplistic but effective. :)

make the party hat [bleep]es not so long, so you can see more the of the rectangle part of it. Also make it more 3d, like show the [bleep]es that would be at the front, aswell as the back. If this makes sence :?

This is pathetic.

 

 

 

You completely copied (very badly) demented hero's pixel signature.

 

 

 

That's disgusting.

This is pathetic.

 

 

 

You completely copied (very badly) demented hero's pixel signature.

 

 

 

That's disgusting.

 

 

 

 

 

Someone a few months ago copied it too, but way more than this guy.

 

 

 

I mean the dude had the tree, bridge and all! :shame:

This is pathetic.

 

 

 

You completely copied (very badly) demented hero's pixel signature.

 

 

 

That's disgusting.

 

 

 

 

 

Someone a few months ago copied it too, but way more than this guy.

 

 

 

I mean the dude had the tree, bridge and all! :shame:

 

 

 

I remember that, basically idea ripping. -.-

 

 

 

On-Topic:

 

 

 

Not good, not real pixel art, no shading, etc..

 

 

 

And, don't copy other people's ideas, it doesn't make you look good or anything.

 

 

 

Well... good luck, at least you read a tutorial... :roll:

Look in a mirror, and then attempt the face again. :P

 

 

 

A lot more detail is needed, it's a rather rough sketh at the moment. :-w

No originality, thats what modern day pixels lack :? .

 

Thats no pixel, there is practically NO shading, the anatomy is quite lacking.

 

Completely copied from a tutorial?

 

 

 

Seriously, did you really think people would like this?

 

And its your first, well like we care. It says it in the rules, it is discouraged to post your first work.

 

I for one am quite sick of this forum filling up with first pixel works. And then they give us all kind of arguments because why we should be good on the rating.

 

 

 

--C/C: Be original, that makes sure your pixel stands out from the rest.

 

Learn anatomy.

 

Shade.

 

And atleast make the brick lines ect. straight. --

 

 

 

Goodluck.

Aside from the fact that it isn't a pixel, as you did it in flash, its horrid. The idea isn't even yours and you did his tutorial very badly.

Locking this because of the flaming and the fact that you copied someone else his pixel.

 

 

 

~Kill Life